Revenge! Chapter 2 Now up! 29/04/09

[simsimsims]

Right, First attempt at writing a story :P The start may seem a bit boring, but It is more of an introduction.
The real fun starts at chapter 2

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Melissa Edwards was a girl with a perfect life. She had a perfect Job, a Perfect Boyfriend, and a Perfect home. Nothing was a chore for her, Her father had left her a large sum of money and ever since she was living the high life. But all that was about to change. Years after her Father's death, Melissa found out that she had a sister she didn't even know about, Now reunited and living under one roof, Melissa's secret sister was about to stir things up.

Jane knew as soon as she moved into her sisters home that she wanted Her sister's man badly, and it was painful for her to watch Melissa and Jack together.

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"So off to work soon is it Mel?" Jane asked.
"Yea sis, Lots to do. You know me, always willing to work all hours of the night just to pay the bills. Jack can I see you outside a minute?"
Jack nodded and they set off outside

Melissa and her Boyfreind Jack, seemed to have the perfect relationship, they would always do things together, and it seemed they were unbreakable, but there were underlying frictions. With money running out and Jack being fired from his Job, Melissa was beggining to lose patience.

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"Jack we're really struggling. Why did you have to get fired. I can't feed us all on my wage. You and Jane need to sort yourselves out and get Jobs soon! I'm fed up of having to do it all myself." She snapped.
" I know baby, I am trying. Me and Jane will look through the paper."
"Good. We do have a wedding to plan you know, and that's gonna cost lot's and lot's as I want a dream wedding! Anyway I'll see you later, I don't want to be late. You two get some housework done at least ok?
"Of course love."
He turned round with a grin on his face. A sneaky grin as if he was up to no good.

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Jane loved it when the pair argued, but the thing she really loved, was watching her love rival set off to work. She didn't care that it was her sister she was hurting, and loved every opportunity to coax him into some fun.

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Jack walked back into the house after being told off, and went immediatley into Jane's room, not to do the housework, but to finally get relief from his nagging girlfriend.

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As the pair kissed, Jack felt the weight being taken off his shoulders. He didn't really Love Jane, but needed what every man desires - to be loved.

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"I love you Jack, I really really love you." she paused and her jaw dropped to the floor when she saw the neighbourhood geek at her window. "err oh my god!" she screamed.

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Jack watched in shock as his lover ran out after the kid. "Oi you! Get back here now" she frantically shouted. She knew she would lose everything if this got out.

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She sobbed as she suddenly realized what this meant. Her sister would find out and all hell would break loose. Jack was still in the doorway, praying he hadn't been seen, but even he knew that he was in big trouble.

As Jack emerged to comfort his lover, they both heard a weird noise from in the garden, " what was that?" Jane questioned.
" ah its probably just a cat or something. Lets go back in. We need to think of a plan to stop that geek spilling the beans, besides Melissa will be home soon!

They didn't know it, but it was too late for them to worry about Melissa finding out... she already knew and was already planning her Revenge.....

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Chapter 2: Fooling the Enemy Coming soon...

[Mrs.Kuma]

Oooo how exciting i cant wait to see what unfolds!

[TheBoyFromMars.]

OO i love revenge storys!

[KyleTheArtist]

Interesting! I wanna see more :D

[simsimsims]

Thanks for the comments :D I will hopefully have the second chapter up tommorow. Just need to finalise which way I want this to go :P

[decoyenderek_SC]

Revenge! Revenge! Revenge! I love revenges!

PS: Like the story so far!

[simsimsims]

Had to cut out some of the second chapter as It was way to long, and used too many pictures. So chapter 3 will be a short conclusion to this chapter.
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As she stood watching her husbands betrayal. Melissa Edwards thought about what she could do next. She could have gone over and sorted the pair of them out straight away, but she wanted to see them suffer more.

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She paced up and down the side of the house, all the time evil thoughts were crossing her mind. She wanted the pair of them to suffer, the way they had caused her to suffer, and right now she would do anything to achieve this. With that she set off to her best mate, Emma's house to ask for her advice.

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After Explaining the situation to her best friend and announcing she wanted Jack and Jane to suffer for their crime, she broke down in tears.

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"Why do things like this always happen to me. I get settled and happy and it all crumbles at my feet. she sobbed
"That evil rat doesn't deserve you anyway Mel, you are better off without the both of them." her freind replied.
Feeling slightly better after getting the situation off her chest, Melissa and her freind made a plan. They would create a tragic accident involving a toaster and Jack and Jane being locked in the house.
" I'm so happy you agree we should do this Emma. you really are a good friend" Melissa smiled
" You know I would do anything for you. That sister and boyfriend of yours needs to pay for their actions" she smirked.
"Now you go home and rest. you have had a horrible evening" she continued.

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As Melissa left Emma's house she was feeling a lot better about herself, and although she wouldnt kill them she knew that setting the house on fire would certainly scare them.
She paced down the path quite happy but still obviously hurt. Suddenly a strong brisk wind engulfed her, with no warning it started hailing, and the clouds turned grey. Melissa noticed her freinds trashcan had been kicked over and willingly picked it up. When she saw the sky light up.

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She was about to receive the shock of her life.. literally.

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Hearing the loud bang outside Emma rushed outside.
"Oh my god! Speak to me Mel!"

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Having checked her friends pulse she was relieved that she was still breaving, Nethertheless she ran as fast as she could into the house to call for an ambulance.
It's all right hun, they are on their way, you keep your eyes open!"
Soon after the Ambulance arrived and Melissa was rushed to hospital, in a critical condition...

"Hello is this the cheater?" Emma frantically called down the phone.

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"Cheater? who is this!?" Jack questioned.
" You know who I am Jack! and more importantly I know your secret.I have just had Melissa here crying her eyes out! She knows too! and right now she is fighting for her life after being struck by lightning. So I suggest you get down to the hospital and at least pretend you love her." She snapped
"Oh no!" Jack stuttered out, as he was being distracted. "We will be right there. "

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Jack and Jane looked at each other worryingly.
"That Alexander Kid must have grassed us up!" he said not knowing that Alexander had not told anyone.
" Why that little sod. I am going to make his life hell!" Jane angrilly snapped.
With their secret out, and Melissa fighting for her life in hospital Jane and Jack set out for the hospital. What would happen when they got there? If Melissa lived their lives would not be worth living, but if she died it would be equally devastating for them.

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Meanwhile another revenge was being planned. This time it was innocent Alexander Goth who would be punished for a crime he didn't even commit.

Chapter 3: "Flashbacks" Coming soon.

[DDTKID]

Great Chapter I can't wait for the next one good job

[simsimsims]

Great Chapter I can't wait for the next one good job

Thanks DDTIKID, The next one should be Up in a few days hopefully, Currently building a church will will feature in chapter 3 :P

[DDTKID]

Thanks DDTIKID, The next one should be Up in a few days hopefully, Currently building a church will will feature in chapter 3 :P

that sounds interesting can't wait