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beeps
10th Jul 2006, 10:08 AM
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Jasmine Davis is just trying to find a place for herself in this huge world, but what she finds instead is a web of everything from love to hate, deception to tenderness. Will she be able to overcome her fears and sense of abandonment and carry on with her search for the perfect storybook ending, or will she fail and never know the meaning of true self-worth?
Chapter One will begin Jasmine's journey through life... We shall have to wait and see how everything turns out.
~boolPropped~
XsnowdropX
10th Jul 2006, 10:17 AM
sounds good, i wanna read more:)
(off topic)first comment :cdance:
beeps
10th Jul 2006, 10:24 AM
(off topic)first comment
Congratulations!!! :D And thanks for taking the time to comment on the lil ole introduction. I appreciate every single bit of FB I get from all you fabulous readers :valentine
boolPropped
Vinhou
10th Jul 2006, 10:29 AM
It sounds very intriguing. I'll sure follow this story. Can't wait to read more. :P
richdude_SC
10th Jul 2006, 10:30 AM
Looking frward to the first chapter!!!!!!!!:D:D:D:D:D:D:;););)
Vaalyah
10th Jul 2006, 10:30 AM
Well, when are you going to post the story??? I am curious! :)
beeps
10th Jul 2006, 11:33 AM
*faints* All this FB from just the introduction! I am flabbergasted :D Thank you all so very much, and I should be posting the first chapter shortly. Keep an eye out for it!
boolPropped
sweetbabyhnd
10th Jul 2006, 05:09 PM
This sounds like this will be a great story
jenny
10th Jul 2006, 05:24 PM
yeah, a new story from boolpropped:D....can't wait to read!
beeps
10th Jul 2006, 09:13 PM
Thank ya, thank ya, thank ya! I should be updating today as it seems everyone wants to sink their teeth into the first chapter ;) Thanks for FBing guys and gals.
boolPropped
Pretty_in_Pink_14
10th Jul 2006, 09:25 PM
Can't wait for the first chapter.
beeps
10th Jul 2006, 09:57 PM
Thanks Pretty in Pink! I really appreciate you taking the time to FB :)
boolPropped
beeps
10th Jul 2006, 10:03 PM
I have always considered myself to have a pretty normal family. Being an only child, I never had the joys of growing up with someone to fight with or someone to talk to or someone to ride my bike with or stay up all night with. But I loved my family, even though I didn’t have another brother or sister - And it seemed as though they liked having me around as well.
This is my dad, Richard Davis.
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He is the Vise President of Summerset Enterprises, the largest business company in all of Summerset. Having a job in the business career track was always a smart move, mainly because Summerset controlled many other Simcities around it. He is happy with his job, and we are happy for him.
He spends hours on end in his study. I’m not really sure what he does in there all night, but it must be something important for his job because I always hear the keyboard clicking away as he types for hours and hours. His job is almost a mystery to me, but maybe that is because I have never taken the time to ask him about it. Why should I though? He never asks about me.
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This is my mother, Magnolia Richards.
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My mom doesn’t work... Well, she doesn’t work outside of the house. Growing up, I remember my mom having more jobs than I can count. Her favorite job was when she was a wedding photographer in the Artist career track. Her free spirit and creativity always bring her back to her artistic roots.
You see, her mother (my grandmother) was a famous artist in Summerset. She became very poplar in the 1950's when she released her most risque series of oil paintings called “A Kiss at Midnight” which depicted the lives of three different women trying to find a mate before it was too late. The citizens of Summerset went wild because all the paintings were done in the nude, something that the gated community frowned upon. I had always looked up to her; I thought she was the most creative and most beautiful woman I had ever known... even at her age.
Anywho, my mother wasn’t working now because my father made so much money that she felt as though she didn’t need to work. My dad didn’t care. Actually, he liked being the sole money-maker. I think it made him feel strong and important. My mother spent most of her days out on the porch, painting in the sunlight.
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You’re probably wondering by now who the heck I am. My name is Jasmine Davis, and I love life. You probably guessed right - I am in high school. School isn’t so bad, but I really hate doing homework. Still, I get straight A’s and bring home great teacher reviews every day, so I know my parents stay happy.
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I go to Summerset Elite (S.E. for short). It’s the best private school for hundreds of miles, and I’m proud to be a student there. I spend most of my time by myself at home, but I have made a couple of friends at school. I actually met my boyfriend at S.E. a couple of months ago, and we have been dating ever since. He is a dream-boat!
His name is James Jondlyn.
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~boolPropped~
sweetbabyhnd
10th Jul 2006, 10:13 PM
I'm looking forward to reading more and more of this story........... very good update
beeps
10th Jul 2006, 10:15 PM
Thank you, sweetbabyhnd :)
boolPropped
hockeystatqueen_SC
10th Jul 2006, 10:25 PM
Great start!
I love your style of writing, especially the way you mix Sim-world terms with real-world terms.
Hana_Chann
10th Jul 2006, 10:42 PM
I really like your story so far! You write really well adn I can't wait to read more!
beeps
10th Jul 2006, 11:02 PM
hockeystatqueen... Thanks so much! I really appreciate the compliment.
Hana Chann... Thank you for reading as well. Im glad you enjoyed the first chapter.
boolPropped
Kalorii
10th Jul 2006, 11:12 PM
Oh sweet, a new story by bP :D Read the first chapter and I'm looking forward to how it'll develop. Jasmine's world seems so picture-perfect that it's hard to imagine that anything can go wrong. But it's always when you least expect it, isn't it? :evilnod: Good start, bP and can't wait to read more! :anime:
beeps
10th Jul 2006, 11:31 PM
Kalorii! When I saw you FBed Im like *low voice* "Kaloriiiiiiiiii" You always pull through and comment ;) Thanks for reading!
boolPropped
sugarxsickness
11th Jul 2006, 02:45 AM
Mommy has a booty!
beeps
11th Jul 2006, 03:01 AM
Yes, mommy does indeed have a booty.
boolPropped
richdude_SC
11th Jul 2006, 06:44 AM
It's a great start! Hope to see more!:D Booty*giggles*:D:D
Misty_SC
11th Jul 2006, 08:00 AM
I'm liking this so far! :)
The Pink Power Ranger
11th Jul 2006, 09:12 AM
heh. dreamboat. :d yeah. i simply love the story. wow, it feels like i say that a lot, but i mean it every time!
lethifold
11th Jul 2006, 09:15 AM
Yay! All of your other stories are great, so there is no reason why this one shouldn't be! Great start. Her life is perfect..well at least for now.
auroraspirit
11th Jul 2006, 11:32 AM
Great story, I like what you have here boolprop, keep writing, I wonder what twists lie next for her.
Auroraspirit :angel:
Vinhou
11th Jul 2006, 12:46 PM
Great first chapter! I can't wait to read more. Love it so far! :)
Seiza
11th Jul 2006, 01:46 PM
Great introduction, and I love the subtle hinting of tension between Jasmine and her dad ("He never asks about me.").
Her life looks perfect right now, so I'm counting the chapters 'till when it all comes crashing down. :P
beeps
11th Jul 2006, 05:40 PM
i simply love the story. wow, it feels like i say that a lot, but i mean it every time!
I say "thank you readers for reading and taking the time to FB" a TON and I always mean it as well ;) But honestly, thank you very much.
boolPropped
beeps
11th Jul 2006, 05:42 PM
Hey everyone, I have to say that Im blown away by all this FB... I LOVE IT! Im so happy to hear that everyone is loving this story. I was so nervous to post it because I spent a ridiculous amount of time playing and writing and taking pictures, I was just afraid that it might go to waste (?). Obviously it did not, and Im really appreciating all this support. Its definitely making me want to update sooner and sooner ;)
boolPropped
Jasmin_SC
11th Jul 2006, 06:00 PM
You deserve it! This is a great story and I cant wait to see how it unfolds :)
indalu10_SC
11th Jul 2006, 07:25 PM
nice start!
i cant wait to read more!
*subscribes*
Sashamerosha
11th Jul 2006, 09:29 PM
Great intro and first chapter. Im so looking forward to getting to follow your story along as you post each chapter. :D
Gotcha bookmarked ;)
simsample
12th Jul 2006, 12:45 AM
Nice start, Shellie! Can't wait for the next installment. It sounds like you are already confident of these characters and know where you are going with the story, which should make for a good tale!
beeps
12th Jul 2006, 01:00 AM
*looks around* Are you serious? *stutters* Are you... simsample... Did you see that? Can you see that? simsample commented on my story... My-MY story? Im hallucinating.
*passes out*
leos_pride
12th Jul 2006, 02:46 AM
great start, looking forward to reading more
xStrawberryxKiwix
12th Jul 2006, 03:17 AM
I can't wait to see the next chapter. =]
beeps
12th Jul 2006, 03:54 AM
Thanks everyone for the awesome support! Ill be posting the second chapter shortly :)
boolPropped
beeps
12th Jul 2006, 04:12 AM
Good lord, did I seriously call my boyfriend a “dream boat”? I did? How embarrassing I’m starting to sound like my mother more and more every day. Speaking of my mother, she has been painting more lately while my dad is at work. It’s not strange behavior or anything, but it just seemed a little excessive. Oh well, it was nice for once that she was staying out of my business.
“Hey mom?” I yelled as I climbed the stairs to my room. “James is picking me up in an hour.”
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She mumbled something like “Ok honey”, but I didn’t really hear. Maybe it was more like I didn’t really care because I was going out with him tonight no matter what. I flung my school bad onto the bed and slapped my homework notebook on the desk before I started to get ready for the evening.
Tonight James said he was taking me “somewhere special”. It was our three month anniversary, so I expected him to do something nice for me. I stood in front of my closet for what seemed like hours before I took out the perfect outfit. James was going to love it.
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“Hi baby,” James cooed as he watched me walk down the stairs to greet him.
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“Hi you,” I replied as I smiled.
“Mmm,” James started but kissed me first, “you look good enough to eat.”
I smiled shyly and returned the compliment with a long hug before we headed out for the night. He took my hand, and we started walking towards downtown. I was smiling from ear to ear thinking about where he was going to take me. I loved going out with James. He always made me feel so special.
“How was your day today, sweetheart?” James asked me as we continued to walk.
“It was good. Miss Radke yelled at the Blue’s again, but all in all it was a good day,” I answered.
The “Blue’s” were the popular kids in S.E. They could never sit still through an entire lecture, and the teachers were always yelling at them for something or other. But although they were the most disruptive people anyone would ever meet, they never seemed to get into too much trouble. It’s scary how much power a group of high school kids can have.
“How was your day?” I asked James.
“It was alright,” James started, “School was fine, but my dad almost popped me one again.”
I frowned as I heard this. James’ dad had a short temper and a violent tongue. He never hit his son, but he could spit things out that cut like a knife. I always felt bad for James every time I would hear the things his father had said to him. This time it was because of a teacher review. One of James’ teachers said that he was too busy talking in class to remember the assignment, but I’m sure it was just because he forgot to write it down.
“Anyways,” James interjected my thoughts, “I just got out of the house before he could ruin my mood for tonight.”
I stopped walking just long enough to smile a bright smile and give him a quick kiss on the cheek. James squeezed my hand slightly as we stopped in front of The Regal. The Regal was the most swanky restaurant in Summerset, and I was thrilled that he chose this place to bring me. I smiled big and looked up at the front doors, just itching to go in.
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“Let’s go ” James said, tugging me towards the restaurant.
We were seated in the most beautiful section of the restaurant, and I was so busy looking around that I didn’t have time to look at the menu. Thankfully, James knew already what I would like so he ordered filet minion for himself and turkey for me. We sat and ate happily until our plates were completely clean.
We sat there for another couple of minutes until James reached his hand towards mine. I smiled and took it gently and he began to speak.
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“Hey Jaz?” James asked - he called me “Jaz” for short sometimes.
“Yeah,” I said as I looked into his eyes.
“I was thinking,” James started. “We have been seeing each other for a while now, and I thought that maybe it was time we moved our relationship to the next level.”
I thought for a moment.
“Oh,” I finally said when I understood. “Ohhh...”
“I just mean, we love each other right?” James asked.
“Of course,” I answered.
“Well, don’t you think it’s time?” He asked.
“Yeah,” I said a little unsure. “I think so.”
James smiled and kissed the back of my hand before he stood up to pay the bill. We started walking back home, but as we got to one corner of the street, James stopped and turned me around to see him. He placed his hands on my waist and spoke softly.
“Would you like to come home with me tonight?” He asked.
I looked into his piercing grey eyes and smiled slightly. Nodding gently, I took his hand as he lead me the opposite way of my house. My insides were tingling with nervousness as he lead me into his house and then into his room. He told me not to worry and that he would be here when I woke up. I trusted him.
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We made love that night. It was the first time for both of us. It was awkward and clumsy, but it felt so right. I was falling in love with him so hard, and I loved it. After everything had happened, James whispered ‘I love you’ in my ear and we drifted off into dreamland.
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~boolPropped~
jenny
12th Jul 2006, 04:32 AM
hmm, hope she dosen't get caught...
beeps
12th Jul 2006, 05:07 AM
Great intro and first chapter. Im so looking forward to getting to follow your story along as you post each chapter. :D
Gotcha bookmarked ;)
:giggler: Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to FB! When I read and reread all this FB, it makes me feel so special knowing that all these people took 20 minutes out of their day to let me know theyre enjoying my writing!
*jumps up and down* Im bookmarked!!!
boolPropped
The Pink Power Ranger
12th Jul 2006, 06:23 AM
nooooooooooooooooooo he HAS to still like her! forever! if he doesn't love her forever, i'm going to have to punch him...okay, my sim-self will punch him. lol.
Shawnee_SC
12th Jul 2006, 06:37 AM
I love this story, you always write such good ones! I can't wait to see what happens next!
beeps
12th Jul 2006, 06:42 AM
Thanks for the FB everyone! Its good to see yall standing up for Jasmine :giggler:
boolPropped
Kalorii
12th Jul 2006, 08:04 AM
So sleepy... Got back from the movies a while ago and will go to bed soon but, when I saw this was updated, I had to FB. That James better not abandon her. Although, if I know his type... :madashel: Great chapter, bP and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :gnight:
beeps
12th Jul 2006, 08:27 AM
Kalorii... I feel so honored that you stayed up late to FB on my story :D Thanks for reading!
boolPropped
discordkitty
12th Jul 2006, 08:40 AM
I came here for the cookies but I loved the story :D I'm hooked now and part of me wonders if maybe she's pregnant now :p
beeps
12th Jul 2006, 08:41 AM
:giggler: Came for the cookies :giggler:
boolPropped
sweetbabyhnd
12th Jul 2006, 11:40 AM
great update ... cant wait for the next one
auroraspirit
12th Jul 2006, 12:00 PM
Good update on this story boolpropped, its so sweet and innocent at the same time. I hope nothing bad hapens between the both of them.
Auroraspirit :angel:
Fullmoon Lupin
12th Jul 2006, 12:21 PM
I like this story, boolPropped! I have to add you to IE Favorites... Abandon her, James! *Looks around and hides behind a rock*
moonlight_muse
12th Jul 2006, 12:27 PM
great story, I've enjoyed the chapters so far :)
Muse
melanie_SC
12th Jul 2006, 12:36 PM
Great story :D I think I might know where it's going..
jojokid
12th Jul 2006, 01:18 PM
This story is very good! :)
You are a great writer!
I better work on my own, instead of reading everyone elses ..:lol:
beeps
12th Jul 2006, 10:30 PM
Thank you everyone for all you simply wonderful comments! Im writing some midterm essays today, but I should be updating sometime tomorrow Im sure. Keep the FB coming yall! :D
boolPropped
leos_pride
13th Jul 2006, 09:41 AM
I hope he dosnt hurt her!
discordkitty
13th Jul 2006, 09:44 AM
Yay I hope to see an update soon!
beeps
13th Jul 2006, 09:50 AM
Thanks for FBing everyone! Im so overwhelmed with all the FB Im actually getting this story. I :valentine all of it!
boolPropped
discordkitty
13th Jul 2006, 09:56 AM
It's the cookies :D who has milk, lets dunk boolPropped!
beeps
13th Jul 2006, 05:14 PM
It's the cookies :D who has milk, lets dunk boolPropped!
:rofl: DUNK ME?!?! Then who will update my story???
boolPropped
beeps
13th Jul 2006, 06:47 PM
Just like he had told me, James was there when I woke up. This put a smile on my face because I knew that he didn’t just want “it” from me, but he really cared about me as I cared about him. Smiling to myself, I rolled over to look at James sleeping soundly. My fingers trailed lightly along his jaw line until he started moving slightly under my touch. I leaned in an gave him a little kiss on the lips.
“Morning baby,” He managed to grumble out.
I smiled to myself at how adorable he sounded in the morning. Saying ‘good morning’ to him, I rolled over and swung my legs out of bed. I rubbed my eyes and proceeded to get dressed so that I could go back home.
“Are you going to walk me home?” I asked sweetly.
“Im tired,” James whined.
“Aww c’mon sweetie, just walk me home quick.”
“Jaz, just let me sleep huh?” He asked before rolling over.
My eyebrows scrunched together as I wondered why he didn’t want to walk me home, but I guess he was just more tired than I thought. As I walked home, I thought about the night before and how special it was to both of us. This was the best relationship I had ever been in before, and I was loving it
“ALL night? ”
I was bombarded with a loud voice the second I stepped into my house. My mom was standing there with her hands on her hips looking extremely ticked off. I just rolled my eyes and tried to get past her.
“Jasmine ” She called out after me.
“What? ” I yelled, turning around.
“You were gone all night with James?” She asked again.
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“Yeah,” I said very matter-of-factly.
“Don’t you think that’s a little inappropriate?” She snapped.
“Inappropriate? ” I retaliated. “It was the best night of my life, and it was not inappropriate.”
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“You don’t have any idea what you’re getting yourself into, Jasmine,” my mom said.
“Oh and what would that be, mother?” I snapped.
“You are 16 years old, Jasmine ” My mother shouted.
“You slept with dad when you were 15 years old,” I shot back.
My mother stood there for a moment before her mouth shut. I smiled like a brat and stomped up to my bedroom. When I got to my room, I closed the door behind me and started crying lightly. Maybe I had made a mistake. Maybe I shouldn’t have slept with him. A multitude of thoughts were banging around in my head, so I decided to call James.
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“Hello?”
“Hi baby.”
“Hey Jaz. What’s up?”
“Well, I’m feeling a little unsure about some things.”
“What things?”
“Like... Are you happy about what happened last night?”
“Yeah... Aren’t you?”
“Well yeah, but do you think we moved too fast? I mean, so you think it was too fast?”
“What are you talking about? We have been dating for over three months. ”
“I know...”
“You didn’t want to sleep with me?”
“No, no I did... I just hope we didn’t go too fast.”
“So you regret it?”
“I don’t regret it. I just hope it doesn’t change our relationship too much.”
“Of course it’s going to change our relationship, that was the whole point.”
“See? Look at us We’re already yelling at each other ”
“Jasmine, everything is going to be fine. Stop worrying so much about one stupid night.”
“Stupid night? Are you serious? It was a ‘stupid night’ to you? ”
“Calm down, Jasmine. I’ll come over later, and we can talk about it.”
“Fine.”
I snapped my phone shut and flung it onto my bed. How could my mother have been SO right? I hated when she knows things before I do. Now I was even more confused than this morning as I walked to the bathroom to shower and get ready for yet another boring Saturday. I wonder what James and I would talk about when he got here...
~boolPropped~
sweetbabyhnd
13th Jul 2006, 07:01 PM
Great update.........
shoobles
13th Jul 2006, 07:08 PM
I really like this story so far.
Can't wait for the next update.
beeps
13th Jul 2006, 07:11 PM
Thank so much sweetbabyhnd and shoobles! (cute name shoobles ;))
boolPropped
Kalorii
13th Jul 2006, 07:15 PM
Oooo... I was wishing her mother wasn't right. The boy's got something to hide, I just know it. :banghead: I really hope that James doesn't hurt her like I think he will... Great update again, bP! Loving this story! :jig:
discordkitty
13th Jul 2006, 07:23 PM
Great update but ugh I'm still hanging for more!
beeps
13th Jul 2006, 07:25 PM
discordkitty... Thats how I keep getting you peeps to check back :D
Thanks for FBing everyone! I always appreciate it so much.
boolPropped
galaxies
13th Jul 2006, 07:27 PM
I just started reading this. It's so good! ^.^
I can't wait for the next update. :P
beeps
13th Jul 2006, 07:37 PM
Thanks for reading my story galexies! I always appreciate FB ;)
boolPropped
Hana_Chann
13th Jul 2006, 08:41 PM
I wonder what is in store for jasmine and James? Great story!
xgrrlx
13th Jul 2006, 09:39 PM
I always enjoy your stories. I should FB more. :p
magpep21
13th Jul 2006, 09:47 PM
I can't wait for an update!
beeps
14th Jul 2006, 12:28 AM
Thanks everyone! Im thinking about posting the new chapter tomorrow (if I get it done in time), but please keep the comments a-comin' ;)
boolPropped
discordkitty
14th Jul 2006, 12:43 AM
Ack, I dont' want to wait that long! :p
beeps
14th Jul 2006, 01:30 AM
Ack, I dont' want to wait that long! :p
:giggler: Awww it will be worth it... I promise
boolPropped
leos_pride
14th Jul 2006, 01:48 AM
The boy's got something to hide, I just know it.
I agree with this. Raises eyebrow a James...
beeps
14th Jul 2006, 01:50 AM
I agree with this. Raises eyebrow a James...
:lol: You peeps think you know everything, huh?
*acts mysterious*
boolPropped
lethifold
14th Jul 2006, 02:27 AM
Yeah...he does have something to hide. I can't wait to read more.
Sashamerosha
14th Jul 2006, 07:24 AM
Oh my gosh, hurry up and update!
...The suspense is killing me. *looks around and walks away coolly*
titi
14th Jul 2006, 07:41 AM
This is a good story... Hurry up and update!!!
Vaalyah
14th Jul 2006, 08:43 AM
Why boys are always this way? And why girls are always so stupid??? By the way, I don't know your opinion but... "we were dating for 3 months!" in Venice we have a usual way of saying "Te capira'!" that is translated as "You understand!" but means "Oooooh, 3 months? It is an eternity!" in a very sarchastic way... 3 months are NOTHING. So, why this girl has been so stupid to believe him only if he said "We were dating for 3 months"???
Ehm... nice story, I am very curious! So, update fast... the problem is that I always get so involved in stories! :P
LyricLee
14th Jul 2006, 08:51 AM
Fantastic story, great writing, great pictures, very nice plot so far...featured too :) just make sure you finish it, so many people dont and this is very good
jojokid
14th Jul 2006, 12:49 PM
Haha, lucky duck, congrats on being featured! :D
Vinhou
14th Jul 2006, 03:29 PM
Loved the update!! :P
And congratulations on being featured. Way cool! :) :) :)
natassia_SC
14th Jul 2006, 03:46 PM
i love the story so far and can't wait till you update again, hopefully before i go on holiday!:hmm:
~Squash-buddy-ven~
14th Jul 2006, 05:34 PM
I was just looking around the story-forum today, and then stumpled over your story, and I thought "Another story by boolPropped!!!, I must read it, because her stories are so great.." :)
And boy, did it meet my expectations? Yes, I must say.. Fab story, consider me hooked.. *Sleeps in front of pc every night waiting for an update*
Psst.. :howdy: Congrats on being featured...! ;)
shoobles
14th Jul 2006, 06:41 PM
Thank so much sweetbabyhnd and shoobles! (cute name shoobles ;))
boolPropped
Awwww! Thank you. This story is *really* great. I read it over again, so hopefully that'll tide me over until the update. :)
Brook_Lynn_Marie
15th Jul 2006, 05:42 AM
I really like this so far! I can't wait for the next update I'm going to have to keep my eye out.
greenmtx
15th Jul 2006, 08:02 AM
Wow. I just found this story and I am hooked already. I can't wait to find out what happens!!!
moonlight_muse
15th Jul 2006, 02:02 PM
really liked the latest chapter :D
keep up the good work
discordkitty
15th Jul 2006, 05:05 PM
:cry: where's the next chapter?!
beeps
15th Jul 2006, 06:03 PM
Fantastic story, great writing, great pictures, very nice plot so far...featured too :) just make sure you finish it, so many people dont and this is very good
This definitely wont be a problem! Thanks so much LyricLee and whoever else mentioned this story to the mods *blushies*
*dances a jig of glee*
boolPropped
EDIT: Sorry for the lack of updates guys and gals! I have been out for about two days (I just had surgery - Ouch!) but hopefully Ill be feeling better in a little while. The next update is coming your way now! *works on posting update*
beeps
15th Jul 2006, 06:12 PM
James called and said he was on his way over. My nerves started to get the best of me as I tried to pull myself together long enough to get dressed and ready for the day. When I was all done getting ready, I decided to wait outside for James. He must be walking really slow. I don’t blame him thought - I don’t want to have this fight any more than he does.
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James came walking towards my house, and I went to meet him in the front yard. I really didn’t want my mom have the satisfaction of knowing that James and I were fighting about what had happened. James was looking at the sidewalk as I stepped in front of him. This was going to be harder than I thought.
“Hi,” my weak voice said.
“Hey,” he replied.
“Thanks for coming over,” I told him.
“I don’t get why you’re so upset,” James said.
“I’m upset because you are acting funny ” I told him.
“I’m acting funny?”
“Yes ” I started. “Last night... last night was so special to me, and I just thought it would be special to you too.”
“Well, it’s not like I asked you to marry me or something,” James snapped back.
“See?” I said in a harsh whisper. “Why are you so insensitive to this?”
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“We slept together. Big deal. I don’t know why you think it’s so special, Jasmine.”
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Right at that moment, it felt as though James had ripped out my heart and thrown it to the floor. Why had he changed so much? We were so in love last night, and now everything is blowing up in our faces.
“You didn’t think it was special?” I asked quietly.
“You weren’t even that good,” James snapped.
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***
“Get out of my face,” I said calmly.
“What?” James asked.
“I want you to leave.”
“You want me to leave?” James asked.
“I want you to leave NOW!” I yelled.
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***
James scoffed and walked away from me. I turned and walked back into the house. This was officially the worst day of my life. I didn’t even look at my mom as I ran up the stairs to my room. I sat on the edge of the bed and started to cry as I thought about everything that James had said.
Last night was supposed to be the most special night we would ever spend together. I gave him my whole heart while we were in bed together, and all he could think about was how non-special the night was. I couldn’t believe that he was reacting like this.
What had I done wrong?
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~boolPropped~
beeps
15th Jul 2006, 06:19 PM
“Jasmine?”
I hear my name.
“Jasmine, honey?”
Who is calling my name?
I force my eyes open and see a large figure towering over my bed. My eyes snapped shut as I smelled my mother’s perfume. What did she want? Didn’t she torture me enough already? I didn’t really want to hear what she had to say, but it seemed as though I didn’t have a choice this time. My eyes opened again, and I looked up to see her looking down at me with a worried look on her face.
“What do you want?” I asked sleepily.
“I want to talk to you,” she said.
“About what?” I said, starting to get annoyed.
“About this thing between you and James.”
“Mom, I don’t want to hear it,” I interjected quickly.
“Jasmine, just listen to me for a minute.”
I sighed heavily when I saw the sincerity on my mother’s face. She took my silence as an invitation to proceed, and she did so with caution. She knew that any slip of her tongue I would make her leave, and I wouldn’t talk to her about it again.
“I wish you could see what happened,” she started.
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All I did was narrow my eyes and waited for her to continue.
“James is a nice boy. Your father and I have always liked him. But you have to understand that there are things that come along with taking your relationship to the next level, especially when you are so young.”
“We used protection,” I snapped.
My mom closed her eyes and pretended like she didn’t hear that. She spoke again.
“I know you’re smart. And I know that you love him very much. But giving yourself to someone isn’t always the right thing to do, even if it feels like the most wonderful and natural thing in the world.”
I sat up in my bed and looked down at my blankets. My mom was totally making sense... something that I never thought she could accomplish with me. I thought about everything she was telling me, and suddenly a tear slipped down my cheek and landed on my blanket. I sniffed quietly and finally spoke.
“What did I do wrong?”
“Oh baby,” my mother started and hugged me tightly, “You didn’t do anything wrong.”
My tears stopped, and I looked up at her silently. How was she SO good at being a mother sometimes and so bad at it other times? She told me once it was because she was human. I think I’m finally starting to understand all the pain and hurt that comes with being human and making the wrong decisions and saying the wrong things - just like she has done before with me.
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~boolPropped~
~Squash-buddy-ven~
15th Jul 2006, 06:26 PM
aww.. Great update... I love the last chapter where the mom consoles her daughter.. It's so sweet..
I can't wait to see how it contiues.. ;)
And best wishes for a speedy recovery..! :)
beeps
15th Jul 2006, 06:29 PM
Thanks so much, Squash! I thought I would write in her mother somehow... we all know how mothers are - annoying most of the time but very conforting *giggles*
Thank you for the speedy recovery wishes :valentine
boolPropped
xgrrlx
15th Jul 2006, 06:54 PM
Good updates. I hate to say it but I kind of know how she feels. :\
Keep it up Ms. Propped!
Hana_Chann
15th Jul 2006, 06:58 PM
Great chapter updates, I loved chapter five where her mother comes to comfort her. But I'm shocked at how her boyfriend is acting, they're too young I guess...I hope they make up though.
Kalorii
15th Jul 2006, 07:01 PM
Awww...such a sweet ending to the chapter. :D James really does seem like a jerk though. Looks like he's one of those kinds of guys looking for notches on bedposts. :flame: I'm hoping he smartens up but I'm not holding my breath.
I hope you get better from your surgery soon! :grouphug: Great update! I'm waiting eagerly for the next update! :anime:
discordkitty
15th Jul 2006, 07:11 PM
Yay thanks for the update - it was great, can't wait to see more :D
I hope you recover from your surgery soon!
Luthiies
15th Jul 2006, 07:20 PM
Boy, What a jerk that James !!
He deserves a good kick in the *** !!!
Great Update BoolPropped, like every story you do, this one is really enjoyable !
Original subjet, great writig style...
Sashamerosha
15th Jul 2006, 07:31 PM
James is sooo stupid, I want to hit him. Dumb boy..
Anyways really great job on the new chapters. So... Can she kick James in the baby maker? *giggles* I would have.
*hopes you feel better soon*
beeps
15th Jul 2006, 09:34 PM
James is sooo stupid, I want to hit him. Dumb boy..
Anyways really great job on the new chapters. So... Can she kick James in the baby maker? *giggles* I would have.
*hopes you feel better soon*
:lol: Baby maker! HILARIOUS! Thanks sashamerosha and everyone else for taking the time to FB... I ALWAYS appreciate it :D
boolPropped
Vinhou
15th Jul 2006, 11:12 PM
“You weren’t even that good,” James snapped.
LOL, what an arse! :lol: I'm sorry, it's just that being THAT stupid is almost funny.
Alright, great updates! (More! I want MOOORE! :D) And I hope you feel better. :)
shoobles
16th Jul 2006, 01:29 AM
Grrrr. I don't like James. What a jerk.
Feel better. :)
beeps
16th Jul 2006, 05:10 AM
Thanks everyone for all the love! :D
Im glad everyone liked the updates... FB always makes me want to post another chapter just to find out what everyone will say!
boolPropped
gazania
16th Jul 2006, 05:21 AM
Wow. A story where the mother ISN'T a monster! She's kind ... and loving ... and sympathetic!
That might be a bit of an exaggeration. I thoroughly enjoy many good stories here featuring bad mothers. Evil mother figures have been featured in stories since antiquity. But I tend to be puzzled when this board gets moments where there is a flood of new stories full of mothers who are absolutely wretched or just don't care to get involved in their childrens' lives. There is a place for a character who tries to be a good mother, after all, even if she isn't perfect. :)
Please update as you are able. And I hope you make a speedy recovery.
beeps
16th Jul 2006, 05:35 AM
Thanks so much, gazania, for all the FB... I appreciate all your insight :)
boolPropped
DejAng3l
16th Jul 2006, 07:16 AM
great story boolprop....i've been reading it...but have ben too lazy to signed in...hence why i having left you any fbs...wow....jasmine's mom is cool....my mom would have flip if i'd slept with my bf in h.s....keep up the wonderful writing...looking forward to seeing more.
lethifold
16th Jul 2006, 07:59 AM
Great updates. Jasmine's mum is right...she didn't do anything wrong.
Hope you feel better soon!
>Bloochi<
beeps
16th Jul 2006, 04:05 PM
Great updates. Jasmine's mum is right...she didn't do anything wrong.
Hope you feel better soon!
>Bloochi<
Firstly, thank you so much for the kind wishes...
Secondly, (although this type of scenario doesnt happen all the time in real life) I think its such a shame that when girls sleep with their boyfriends and their relationship goes haywire, they automatically think its something wrong that they (as the girl) did. I wanted to write it into the story that not only is it always the girl's fault, it can be the guy's fault or even no one's fault.
Thanks for FBing everyone! Im starting to feel slightly better, but only so far as to being able to sit at the computer for about 20 minutes max. Ill take a nap and see if Im feeling up tp updating :)
boolPropped
sweetbabyhnd
16th Jul 2006, 04:14 PM
hope you feel better
beeps
16th Jul 2006, 04:16 PM
hope you feel better
Thanks so much :)
boolPropped
indalu10_SC
16th Jul 2006, 05:35 PM
james has some nerve!!!
but, thats nice that her mother understands.
greenmtx
16th Jul 2006, 07:02 PM
I hope you feel better soon. I can't wait to see where you take the story next!
beeps
17th Jul 2006, 03:01 AM
I woke up with a bad feeling about me and James. Our relationship was just not like it used to be. A couple months to some mat seem like only a scratch on the surface, but to me and James... It was like every hour together was like a new day. We were so comfortable around each other, and things just seemed to click whenever we were together.
But this fight that we were having didn’t seem like us at all. I was so confused as to why James all of the sudden started to treat me like this. He was such a nice boy, and I didn’t think that I did anything to upset him...
But I still worried. What if we were never going to work things out? What if James and I never truly fell in love and spent our lives together? What if we broke up? These questions were just too much for me to handle, so I tried to lie down for a few more minutes before I had to leave for school.
The day dragged on and on, and all I could think about was talking to James. I had called him this morning on my way to school and asked him to come over so that we could talk, and ever since then there was this sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach. I knew he was going to break up with me. I just knew it.
**FLASHBACK**
“Hey.”
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“Hi.”
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***
“Are you on your way to school?”
“Yep.”
“Um... Would you mind coming over after school?”
“For what?”
“Well... I would like to... talk.”
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*pause*
“Are you still there?”
“Yeah, I’m here. I’ll be over around 5.”
“Ok, bye.”
**END FLASHBACK**
Our phone conversations were now limited to only 30 seconds, unlike before when we could sit on the phone and talk for hours. I really missed that. I missed everything about our relationship, and I really missed him. I’m so used to walking home with him everyday after school, and spending all day long talking, and staying up all night talking and laughing.
I started thinking about everything I wanted to say and everything I wanted him to know. Shaking my head and closing my eyes, I took a deep breath and waited for him to knock on the door. This was going to be one of the hardest things I have ever faced. I hope I could handle it.
~boolPropped~
sweetbabyhnd
17th Jul 2006, 03:06 AM
FANTASTIC update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
discordkitty
17th Jul 2006, 03:09 AM
Wonderful update! More! More!
LyricLee
17th Jul 2006, 03:13 AM
I love how realistic your story is. Everyones actions are so natural and you really feel for the characters. great updates.
beeps
17th Jul 2006, 03:25 AM
Thank you everyone for your continued support! I feel so lucky... :lovestruc
boolPropped
Hana_Chann
17th Jul 2006, 03:29 AM
oh no...I hope they can patch up things...but James was being a complete jerk...it may be best if she broke up with him
Cassandra
17th Jul 2006, 03:36 AM
I just read every single chapter! One Word: FANTASTIC!
Sashamerosha
17th Jul 2006, 05:28 AM
Aww I feel so bad for Jasmine. It is very realistic of something some guy would do.. I think thats what makes the feeling worse.
I hope she dumps him and finds a better guy.
moonlight_muse
17th Jul 2006, 10:53 AM
Great updates, I'm enjoying the story :D
~Squash-buddy-ven~
17th Jul 2006, 11:37 AM
Fantastic update.. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.. It's gonna be exciting to see if they break up or not..
I think that she should break up with him, because no one should be with a guy who treats them like that.. After all, the first time IS special.. At least I think so.. :)
gazania
17th Jul 2006, 03:46 PM
Well, she SHOULD certainly drop him. He is showing every sign of trying to drop her ... the shorter phone calls, the fewer visits, etc. She might as well dump him instead of the other way around.
Even if he suddenly realizes what he lost, it doesn't matter. He has no respect for her. He's worthless.
Kalorii
17th Jul 2006, 07:11 PM
:eviltongu I'm thinking (as everyone else seems to be) that Jasmine and James should break up. As hard as it'll be for her, it'll be for the best. :nod: Good update again, bP and I can't wait to read more :D And feel better soon! :anime:
beeps
17th Jul 2006, 11:13 PM
:giggler: Its SO much fun reading all of your inputs! It makes my writing this story that much more interesting... I thank you all again for FBing; I always appreciate it.
boolPropped
Vaalyah
18th Jul 2006, 09:25 AM
I am thinking that maybe he is a "serial lover" :lol: maybe that was not his first time, he has had many girlfriends, and now he is thinking that he can find something better around the corner... He has been so cruel! Aaargh! I want to #@[]]##][]+##èçé**é"%%&%£ ... forum, cannot be vulgar ;)
Update soo, please, I am curious!... the problem with BoolPropped is that everytime I look to the avatar... I fell so hungry! :lol: need... cookies... need.... cookies...
Pooja
18th Jul 2006, 04:37 PM
Love this story, bool! I cant wait to see what happens with them...
beeps
18th Jul 2006, 10:15 PM
"Serial Lover" :lol:
Thanks for commenting everyone! I appreciate it soooo much. Thanks Pooja ;)
boolPropped
beeps
18th Jul 2006, 10:27 PM
:alarm: Strong Situations :alarm:
Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh, no...
I bounced my leg on the bathroom tile and stared down at the tiny device. My eyes welled up to the point where I could barely even see the tiny blue line anymore. This seriously couldn’t be happening. It can’t happen - not on the first time
A few tears made their way down my cheeks until I took a deep breath, wiped them away with the back of my hand. This couldn’t be happening to me. What was I going to do? My fingers balled up into little fists, and I tried to regulate my breathing before I called him. Atl least I could count on him. I know he would be my support.
Between tiny gasps for breath and a couple of sniffs, I managed to ask James to come over right away. He said that he would be over in a couple of minutes, so I decided to wait in the bathroom for him to come.
It was one week ago that we had our talk. Everything went alright, and I managed to get him to understand everything that I was feeling. We decided to slow things down but still be a couple, since neither of us could really live without the other.
I made my way downstairs when my mother yelled to me that James was here. Trying to rehearse how I was going to tell him, I moved my lips silently and prayed that he would be my support. I needed him more than anything right now. James saw me and walked up to me quickly. But as he got closer, his eyes trailed down my body until he noticed it.
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“James...” I started.
“What-what is what?” James stuttered as he pointed at the bump on my stomach.
“James...” I started again and took a deep breath, “I’m pregnant.”
There was a long pause while I looked at James staring at my stomach. I didn’t want to upset him, so I kept quiet and let him be the next to speak. I just knew that he was about to smile. I knew it. C’mon James, smile.
“Please don’t tell me that it’s mine,” James finally said.
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“What?” I asked, rather surprised.
“Jasmine, it was only one time that we...”
“I know,” I interrupted. “But you’re the only...” I trailed off when James realized that it had to be his baby.
“James,” I started and tried to turn his face to mine. “James, please don’t be angry with me.”
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“I don’t believe this,” James finally said in a rather irritated tone.
“I know,” I replied. “What are we going to do?”
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“What are we going to do?!” James nearly yelled.
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“Yes WE, as in you and me!” I yelled back.
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***
“That is not my problem ” James said, pointing to my stomach.
“Not your problem? I didn’t exactly make this baby by myself, James ” I yelled in a hard whisper.
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***
“Well you’ve got something else coming if you think I’m going to take care of that thing,” James bit back.
“That thing is your future son or daughter, James,” I snapped.
I could tell that tension was getting high. James had taken a step towards me, and I looked into his eyes. It was like I could see all of his emotions tumbling from them as I looked at him. He was angry and confused and scared... And so was I.
“Don’t pawn this off on me, Jasmine. I had nothing to do with it,” James said, clenching his fists in anger.
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***
“I’m not trying to pawn anything off on you. I just thought you might like to be a part of our child’s life ” I snapped back.
“That is not my child,” James said.
“This is your child. No matter what way you look at it, James, this is your child,” I said.
Before I knew what was happening, I felt a sharp pain exploding on my face. It felt like my head had been slammed into a brick wall. When James pulled his fist back, I couldn’t tell which one of us was more surprised. I couldn’t speak - I didn’t even remember how to.
“That is not my f*cking child,” was all he said before running towards the school bus to hitch a ride to class.
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Everything in my world seemed to crash down on me in that very second. My head fell forward slowly, and the tears I didn’t even knew I had came pouring out of my tired eyes and fell to the ground.
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***
~boolPropped~
sweetbabyhnd
18th Jul 2006, 10:30 PM
I dont like James very much.... but anyways a great update
magpep21
18th Jul 2006, 10:38 PM
Great Update! James is a piece of crap.
beeps
18th Jul 2006, 10:39 PM
Great Update! James is a piece of crap.
:giggler: Thats what the general concensus seems to be...
boolPropped
Luthiies
18th Jul 2006, 11:05 PM
Kick him ! Kick him ! kick him !
Don't ever a man try to do this to me...
~Squash-buddy-ven~
18th Jul 2006, 11:12 PM
Ooh, I wanna punch James real hard.. As magpep21 said, he's a piece of crap..
Anyways, great update.. Your story is very real. I wanna bet that a lot of young couples are dealing with the same "problem" as Jasmine and James.. And unfortunately a lot of guys are reacting just the way James are.. Poor girls.. :(
I'm really looking forward to the next update... (Maybe there will be more drama? :))
Hana_Chann
18th Jul 2006, 11:45 PM
Poor Jasmine, I really really hate James, how could he be os stupid and selfish?! I wonder if her mom knows yet...I hope Jasmine gets child support and finds a good guy soon...
Kalorii
19th Jul 2006, 12:38 AM
:madashel: Curse that James. I'd like to throttle him personally. I've always hated it when guys say "that's not my kid!" like they really didn't do anything to help. :rant: Great update again, bP! I can't wait to read the rest of this. I'm really wondering what will happen when Jasmine's parents find out... :err:
Cassandra
19th Jul 2006, 12:52 AM
I KNEW it! I knew she's get pregnant cause of the last paragraph in Chapter 6! Great Update! And I concur, James is a piece of crap
indalu10_SC
19th Jul 2006, 01:25 AM
*dreams of killing james*
HE HAD NO RIGHT TO HIT HERR!!!
she need revenge. AND SOON!
gazania
19th Jul 2006, 01:31 AM
Way-ell, if he's so sure it's not his kid, then ...
He should have no reservations about taking a paternity test. It won't take much time.
But of course, it IS his kid.
beeps
19th Jul 2006, 01:38 AM
Thanks for all the wonderful FB everyone! I really appreciate it :)
boolPropped
sweet_alice
19th Jul 2006, 02:11 AM
:rant: James is such a loser freak boy. U shud make him gay or something or maybe get him bitten by a vampire. Men like him shud be :banned: form the entire universe :taekwondo he deserves to be punched, she shud so :Slap: him.
This :vikingb: and this :dumbfunny and this :hover: and this :mob is what i feel like doing to him.
Great story though :nod: :clap: :bow: i hope u make him feel like this :hurt
beeps
19th Jul 2006, 02:24 AM
Sweet alice... :lol: Thanks for the mini story!
boolPropped
discordkitty
19th Jul 2006, 02:27 AM
Great update but I can't help hoping James gets killed off :p
sweet_alice
19th Jul 2006, 02:31 AM
Thats okay, but i hav found some more things to do to that little &%$&^@%$&!*@#$*#@&%
for example :fencing: :flamer: :sniper: :argue: :ninja: :frying: :claw: :smash:
beeps
19th Jul 2006, 03:39 AM
Great update but I can't help hoping James gets killed off
:lol: Never thought of doing that!
boolPropped
witzelsucht_SC
19th Jul 2006, 04:04 AM
hmm. i like this story. :) the good picture quality definitely helps. and ... the well-writtiness. update soon!
beeps
19th Jul 2006, 04:05 AM
hmm. i like this story. :) the good picture quality definitely helps. and ... the well-writtiness. update soon!
:giggler: Thanks so much for the compliments!
boolPropped
Pooja
19th Jul 2006, 04:40 AM
Great update...cant believe the nerve of James!! I can think of a few VERY evil punishments for him!
Sashamerosha
19th Jul 2006, 07:56 AM
*lunges at James and knocks him to the ground* *proceeds to kick his virtual behind* Stupid boy, hittin on a girl thats pregnant.
He should be castrated!!!
Ok maybe that was a little harsh, but I know if it were me my little brother would have had some words with him.
nckw
19th Jul 2006, 08:08 AM
great update as always hun
james is such a s******g ı wish we would drown on a lake or something
Vaalyah
19th Jul 2006, 09:03 AM
Ok, so, now it is time for that girl, to go, speak to her mother, call a judge and constrain that piggy bag of ****** to take care of HIS OWN child. Aaaaaaargh! Hate him! Please, boolpropped him to death! A very painful death!
By the way, 2 things:
1) how can she could be pregnant if she has said that she has used protection? :blink:
2) sweet alice... you should put on line an entire story with emoticons! ;)
gazania
19th Jul 2006, 09:59 AM
1) how can she could be pregnant if she has said that she has used protection? :blink:
Unfortunately, no birth control is 100% effective. Things can go wrong. Even with the Pill, which has a very low pregnancy rate, things can happen. The young lady might have been taking certain antibiotics. She might have forgotten to take it for a couple of days.
I'm not sure what method the couple in the story used, but most likely, it was ye olde Trojan method. That has a pregnancy rate of about 3 to about 14 percent. James might have not put the condom on correctly, made a couple of pinhole tears in it while fumbling to get it on (I know of one person that happened to!), or perhaps got a bit too frisky BEFORE putting even reaching for the rubbers.* Without sounding like Dr. Gazania, while the probability is very small unless you used withdrawal, you can actually get pregnant without intercourse depending on what you were doing before you used protection.
Actually, if James and Jasmine did use protection, that might explain why James is insisting it isn't his baby. It makes the story spicier that way. :)
*Or he could have done what THIS (http://www.goaskalice.columbia.edu/2065.html) person did. I admit I never heard of THAT one before!
joanne1977
19th Jul 2006, 11:14 AM
yep i fell pregnant with my eldest while i was on the pill,nothing is 100% except no sex at all!!!!ps and its an old wives tale that you cant fall pregnant on your `first time`!!!
moonlight_muse
19th Jul 2006, 01:46 PM
great update, very dramatic
keep up the good work :)
Pretty_in_Pink_14
19th Jul 2006, 01:59 PM
:madashel: How dare he just leave her to handle HIS child alone. Why can't he be like...like...well I have no people right now but I think eveyone gets my point. He's so mean :mob We're coming after you James!!!
Great updates!!! ( I was on vacation for a little bit)
Jasmin_SC
19th Jul 2006, 04:35 PM
Oh, i love this story, but I rekon theres a twist in james, maybe his parents abuse him or something? I dont know but whatever it is, I'll be here refreshing the page every 4 seconds..
Vinhou
19th Jul 2006, 04:50 PM
Argh. Stupid James. He needs punishment. Dumb@$$. :vikingb:
Now I'll try looking on the bright side - perhaps he just needs time to adapt? But he HIT her! That clown of an impersonation of a man! Kick him in the babymaker! :taekwondo
Anyhoo, great update. :D
Sashamerosha
19th Jul 2006, 10:49 PM
Kick him in the babymaker! :taekwondo
:agree: YES!!!!
beeps
20th Jul 2006, 05:06 AM
Dear God,
I haven’t done this in a long time... But I know you’re still here. Everything in my life has changed. I’m pregnant. Well, I’m sure you know that already. My boyfriend left me when he found out. I don’t think he will ever come back. Now even my own parents won’t call me their child. After James freaked out, everything changed. I mean, I thought he would be strong for me. I thought he would be there for me. And now he isn’t. Then I thought that if James freaked out, I would always have my parents on my side. But they aren’t. They are on his side. God... could you... please help me? If no one is going to take care of me, I need you to take care of me.
I stuffed the letter in the envelope and put it into my pocket. It was the last letter I would ever write in my house ever again. I looked around my room - there was hardly anything left except for my bed and all the boxes. Like I mentioned in my prayer, my parents kicked me out. When I told my dad, I thought I was going to be hit again.
**FLASHBACK**
“Mom?” I asked timidly. “I need to talk to you about something...”
“There’s nothing stopping you from talking, go ahead,” my mom said.
“I need to tell you something. Something important,” I said in a serious tone.
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“I said go ahead, Jasmine.”
“I’m pregnant,” I blurted out quietly as my head was towards the floor.
“You’re what?” My mother asked.
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“I’m preg-pregnant,” I stammered.
“Tell me you are joking,” my mother hoped.
I simply shook my head and let her take a strong hold of my arm as she lead me downstairs. The tears sprang to my eyes as I thought about how my father was about to react to me telling him my news. My mother pushed me into his office where he was busy typing and didn’t care to look up from the computer screen.
“Jasmine has something to tell you, Richard,” my mother said to him.
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He took off his reading glasses and looked up from his computer screen. First he looked into my eyes, but I noticed after I didn’t say anything for the shorter part of a minute his eyes snapped down to my little protruding belly. His expression didn’t change much as he snapped his eager eyes back up to mine and waited for an explanation.
“Daddy, I’m pregnant.”
He looked at his desk and then rose from it, stepping directly in front of me. I lowered my head to the ground before he spoke.
“Don’t you look at the ground when I’m speaking to you girl,” he snapped.
I bit my lip and raised my fearful eyes to meet his angry ones.
“How could you do this, Jasmine?” He started. “I thought you were smarter than this.”
“Daddy-” I started but was interrupted.
“Don’t you ‘Daddy’ me girl,” he interrupted. “I want you and your baby out of my house.”
“What?” I asked, tears threatening to spill.
“Richard...” my mother started with genuine sympathy.
“I want you and your baby out of my house by tomorrow!” He yelled.
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And I thought that James running from me was heart-breaking. My whole family was turning on me - well my father at least - and I had no where to go. My head fell again, and I started crying right there in front of everyone.
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**END FLASHBACK**
So here I stand - alone in my room about to leave my home of 16 years and start a life of my own. I was so frightened and alone. I have never felt this afraid in my whole life. I sniffed back a few tears and looked around my room one last time.
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Waiting in the cold midnight air, I figured that it would be best to leave sooner than I had to. My father all but smacked me across the face when he told me to get out of my house, so I knew that he most likely wouldn’t want to see me in the morning.
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When the taxi came, I climbed awkwardly in and told the driver where I was to be driven.
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~boolPropped~
Sashamerosha
20th Jul 2006, 05:11 AM
Aww! I think her parents over-reacted. It wasnt like she planned on being pregnant. :(
lethifold
20th Jul 2006, 05:13 AM
I wonder how she'll cope now she's out on her own...poor Jasmine. I feel so sorry for her.
Great update by the way.
Kalorii
20th Jul 2006, 05:54 AM
:cry: Of all the... If it's not James I want to smack, it's her father. Parents are supposed to be there for their children no matter what. At least her mother was concerned for her... :weep: I hope everything turns out for her in the near future. Great update again, bP :D This is a great story!
discordkitty
20th Jul 2006, 06:03 AM
Awwww :( Poor Jasmine
Brook_Lynn_Marie
20th Jul 2006, 06:05 AM
I really hope things get better for her.
greenmtx
20th Jul 2006, 07:24 AM
Wow. Very harsh :( I really want to know where she is going! Keep up the fantastic writing!
Vaalyah
20th Jul 2006, 08:49 AM
To Gazania: yes, I know how it works in "real life" but here we are speaking of "sims"!!! So, if BoolPropped has choosen the interaction "woohoo" and not "try for a baby" all should be ok!
To BoolPropped: in this sim-Coutry they don't know there are human rights? 1) if the child is of A, A cannot run away, because law says A has to provide economical subsistation to the child 2) parents cannot send away their daughter if she can't provide for herself... and also if she is not 18+
Why that girl has not called a lawyer? And why her parents haven't called that stupid boy and kick him a lot???
Please, BoolPropped, we need justice :cry:
~Squash-buddy-ven~
20th Jul 2006, 09:30 AM
Stupid stupid parents.. They aren't there for her when she needs them the most.. *I hope Jasmine is going to be okay..
But amazing update.. Extremely well-written.. I liked the part about God, that was an interesting start to the chapter..
I'm really looking forward to see how Jasmine's life is gonna be from now on.. I hope she "makes up" with her parents.. :)
gazania
20th Jul 2006, 09:59 AM
Gee, I take that back about the mother. I THOUGHT she was a good one. That was a turn-around with the parents in general.
Vaalyah does have a point. Theoretically, Jasmine can contact Social Services and have them go after the parents. However, the parents may respond by tossing her into a foster home, so THAT'S not the best idea, either. And I doubt Jasmine would know about that option. Perhaps the parents WERE planning to do that, but Jasmine left before they made the arrangements. But ... I think I'm thinking way too much here!
I would love to see what happens to Jasmine next. Please update!
Vaalyah
20th Jul 2006, 10:05 AM
Gazania, I can assure you that here in Italy (yes, judges are stupid) they sentenced that parents have to support in their own house the sons/daughter evan at 30 if they don't have a job. (a sort of parents exploitation, but it is not the point). So, I think it is sure that Jasmine cannot be sent away like this! So, Jasmine, call a lawyer!!!
cory_g
20th Jul 2006, 10:09 AM
Hey, bp! read all your story through and it's great! :jig: Also congrats on being featured, you deserve it! ;)
About the last update: Grrr...Jasmine's father is a scumbag! He didn't take much care of his daughter even when she wasn't pregnant, he was like a complete stranger to her and now he kicks her out of the house?!? :banned: I hope he realises what a mistake he had done, it's his only child we're talking about in here! :rant:
Vinhou
20th Jul 2006, 10:36 AM
Wow, she's one unlucky girl. I feel so bad for her. :( Evil father. Evil James. Hmm, come to think of it: Evil MEN! I hope everything turns out okay after all... looking forward to an update. :)
Side note: Her parents' house is the same house as my main character (in my story) Michelle's parents' house. I can tell from the second to last picture. I think that's kinda funny. :D
moonlight_muse
20th Jul 2006, 10:49 AM
Another great update,
hope the parents will calm down and once the news has sunk in, they will have a re-think about their decision
breena_SC
20th Jul 2006, 07:08 PM
Great update BoolPropped, but readers should remember this is a fun-filled fictional sim story...real life situtations do not always apply. Write what you please, and keep this exciting story going :)
~Breena
magpep21
20th Jul 2006, 07:55 PM
Her Dad is a real piece of crap!
indalu10_SC
20th Jul 2006, 08:10 PM
thats something that you dont do...
i hope things get better for her!
sweet_alice
21st Jul 2006, 02:42 AM
This is getting really hairy now, nice work
beeps
21st Jul 2006, 02:43 AM
The drama has only begun! :lol:
boolPropped
LyricLee
21st Jul 2006, 02:54 AM
Great update, great story :)
beeps
21st Jul 2006, 02:55 AM
*blushies* Thanks so much LyricLee
boolPropped
discordkitty
21st Jul 2006, 02:56 AM
Oh evil, I ran here thinking you updated again! :mad:
beeps
21st Jul 2006, 02:57 AM
Oh evil, I ran here thinking you updated again! :mad:
:rofl: If you say pretty please... maybe I will... m a y b e...
boolPropped
discordkitty
21st Jul 2006, 02:59 AM
pretty please with ice cream and chocolate syrup and cherries! :D
beeps
21st Jul 2006, 03:00 AM
pretty please with ice cream and chocolate syrup and cherries! :D
Oh jeez... Well you HAD to say chocolate :doh
*slinks off to update*
boolPropped
beeps
21st Jul 2006, 03:08 AM
It’s only been a few weeks since I left my house, and I was already missing it like CRAZY. The night the taxi picked me up, we drove around for hours trying to find a place for me to stay. The taxi driver was a big help in suggesting places, and I finally found somewhere I could afford to stay.
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That’s my apartment - the door with the giant plant thing in front of it. I should really get Bob to cut that down for me. Who is Bob? I will get into introductions later. Firstly, I want to give you a tour of the lovely Edgewater Apartments.
This would be my kitchen...
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The main reason I decided to live in this pit of an apartment building was because there was already some furniture inside for me to use! The furniture was rather scarce and extremely old and ratty, but it was certainly better than nothing. In the kitchen came a fridge, an oven that only worked when it wanted to, some counter space and a small table to the side.
This is the spacious living room...
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The wall paper was there, the nasty couch and dirty rug were there, and I found the lamp at a thrift store for next to nothing. The windows in the living room were really the only thing that I liked about the big room.
This is the stairway to the upstairs...
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The stairs lead to my upstairs bedroom...
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And when I moved in, George made me a baby crib from scratch for me. What a sweetheart.
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Ok, so you’re probably wondering who lives in the apartment building with me. Well, the building isn’t really that big, so there’s not very much room for many of us to live here. So all in all, there are only four people living here.
This is Bob Neuvette.
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Bob owns this crummy apartment building, never really takes showers, and has a huge crush on me. It’s disgusting, but I live here so I can’t say much.
There is a family of four living in the upstairs “suite”. They are all very nice, but I never really see them around. The family consists of Trevor and Maggie Hall and their two adopted children, April and May. Yeah, don’t even ask about the names - I don’t understand it either.
And then there’s George.
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George Turbidoe is about the goofiest person I have ever met. He is a photographer at a local camera store here in Summerset, and he does amazing work. The hard thing for George and his talent is that he comes from a rather poor family, so it is nearly impossible to make a name for yourself here in Summerset.
Anywho, George really takes care of me. The first day I moved in here, he came over and introduced himself, asked about the baby and told me if I ever needed anything that I could just ask him. Although the outside of the building was a little rough, there were some pretty nice people within those rough walls who were willing to help me out.
~boolPropped~
discordkitty
21st Jul 2006, 03:10 AM
Awww poor thing having to live in such an awful place :( But thanks for the update :luff:
beeps
21st Jul 2006, 03:12 AM
But thanks for the update
Not a problem! :D
boolPropped
Brook_Lynn_Marie
21st Jul 2006, 03:17 AM
Good update I can't wait to find out what happends next. Is she still going to go to school or did I miss something?
beeps
21st Jul 2006, 03:20 AM
Good update I can't wait to find out what happends next. Is she still going to go to school or did I miss something?
Yes she is still going to school - High School that is. She is still a teen and still preggers :)
boolPropped
sweet_alice
21st Jul 2006, 04:18 AM
Uve probaly heard this a million times but go girl, update this story please, im fluttering my eyelids, this is getting a little too much, pretty please????
Kalorii
21st Jul 2006, 05:29 AM
Well, I guess she could be in worse conditions. She does at least have some kind people to help her out when she's in a pinch but...I still don't like it very much. :eviltongu Drama's only begun, eh? Looking forward to whatever else you've got in store. :D
~Squash-buddy-ven~
21st Jul 2006, 09:55 AM
Nice update... Though I have this strange feeling that George is going to play a role in Jasmine's life.. Maybe a big role..?? :D
moonlight_muse
21st Jul 2006, 11:35 AM
:argh: Oh dear, that kitchen makes me want to running screaming from the computer ;) I hope some of her new friends can help her pretty up the apartment before the baby arrives.
Good update, I enjoyed :D
AnyPika
21st Jul 2006, 01:10 PM
*addicted look* Awww, i waant more!
Things are starting to look a little brighter for her. I hope James drowns or something, that *******!
leos_pride
21st Jul 2006, 02:33 PM
oh poor girl been kicked out of home..her dad is so mean, its still his daughter! Loving this story, you have me sittiing on the edge of my chair wondering what will happen to her next!
breena_SC
21st Jul 2006, 03:58 PM
Fab update Boolpropped, update...we want more :) please :P
magpep21
21st Jul 2006, 04:15 PM
George is so sweet! Good update Boolprop!
jenny
21st Jul 2006, 05:14 PM
I love George's sideburns? great update!
beeps
21st Jul 2006, 05:57 PM
Thanks so much everyone for the lovely compliments! I totally heart George's sideburns... They fit him perfectly, dont they? :giggler:
boolPropped
AnyPika
21st Jul 2006, 07:22 PM
Bummer, i got so excited, thinking you updated :bump: hurry up :D
beeps
22nd Jul 2006, 01:34 AM
The days seemed to be going by slower and slower as my belly grew bigger and bigger. I could feel baby kicking me now, and I always giggled when baby got the hiccups. I didn’t want to know if the baby was going to be a boy or girl, so I just called it “baby.” It seemed to work fine for the baby.
“How is school going?”
I turned my head around to see George looking at me kindly.
“It’s going pretty well. Other than the constant snickering from the other teenage girls, the teachers have been pretty nice about giving me extensions and stuff,” I told him.
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“That’s good. Just let me know if any guys give you lip about things... I’ll give them a FAT lip,” George threatened.
I laughed and patted George on the arm as I walked towards my apartment. I told him that I needed to get ready for work and that I would talk to him later. I found a low-paying job as a dishwasher for a couple hours after a school. It was really hard living on my own, going to school AND having a job, but I was determined to do it.
Baby was growing so fast; I was wondering when I would go into labor. For many reasons, I wished that I would have baby after I graduated from high school. It would still be hard to raise baby in college, but it would definitely be easier with scholarships and school grants. Before I got this job, George was pretty good about making me dinner and things.
One quiet night, my feet were feeling rather sore and tired from standing all day washing dishes, so I decided to take a long, hot bath and lie down on the couch for a while. I thought I would rest for about an hour before my favorite show was on the TV. Oh yeah, and George had given me his old TV when he got his new one.
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After my bubble bath, I walked slowly to the couch and laid down gently. My stomach was getting so big, I was wondering whether or not I would be having twins. As I drifted off to sleep, my mind wandered all over and into some places I wish it wouldn’t have. Dreams about James and my unborn baby wafted through my head for about an hour until I finally woke up.
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After sitting up and stretching, I reached for the TV remote and settled myself into the couch for an hour of my favorite show. This was my favorite part of the night. The show was hilarious, and it often brought me back and made me feel like a carefree teenager at times. I liked that feeling.
It was only about 10 minutes into the show when I heard a sound outside on my front porch. My eyebrows scrunched together as I sat up straight and reached for the remote. I wondered who it was at my front door. Starting to get my hopes up, a smile made its way to my face as I thought about opening the door to reveal my mom or dad on the other side, wanting me to come home. I turned off the TV quickly and rushed to the door.
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I was a little nervous as I opened the door because I didn’t really know who to expect on the other side. With everything in me, I hoped that it was my parents here to take me home. Stepping to the door, I swung it open to reveal a man in dark clothing and dark sunglasses. Nope, definitely not my parents...
~boolPropped~
feistyredhead
22nd Jul 2006, 01:45 AM
aww man i hope nothing bad happens.. shes going through enough ...
leos_pride
22nd Jul 2006, 01:47 AM
ooo who was it?
sweet_alice
22nd Jul 2006, 01:48 AM
DUNDUNNAH DUNUNUNAH Who is that strange man outside the door? how will she make her way in life? Will the baby be a boy or a girl? until next time! :howdy: :bump:
beeps
22nd Jul 2006, 05:00 AM
:giggler: Thats the huge question... Who is it??? Thanks for all the FB guys and gals :D
boolPropped
cory_g
22nd Jul 2006, 09:21 AM
Oh, my! I'm sitting on eggshells in here! :giggler: Who the heck is that man?!? :D Great update! More! More! Umm...please?
discordkitty
22nd Jul 2006, 09:24 AM
I am SO happy you've updated again so soon, thank you! And of course, as always ... can't wait for more ;)
miacovaspet
22nd Jul 2006, 10:07 AM
boolpropped, I just found this story, awesome! Thanks for writing it....off to go figure out how to bookmark a thread.
AnyPika
22nd Jul 2006, 10:49 AM
You just had to do this :P now the question who is it?! is banging in my head all the time :gonemad: :wow anywho, the greatest sims story i ever read :clap: and please hurry up with the update :jig:
jojokid
22nd Jul 2006, 01:03 PM
This is very good.
One of the few sim stories that I follow.
:)
~Squash-buddy-ven~
22nd Jul 2006, 03:15 PM
A cliffhanger.. Darn.. :) Oh, I can't wait to the next chapter..
Please update soon.. Pretty please... :D
beeps
22nd Jul 2006, 05:58 PM
Thank you all so much for the FB. I KNEW this chapter would get ya'll yellin' at me :giggler: But I just couldnt resist! Its a good cliffhanger, no?
jojokid... Thanks so much for the compliment. Knowing youre following along with my story is very validating. Thank you.
boolPropped
jojokid
22nd Jul 2006, 06:00 PM
Me following your story? I think its the other way around- you following my story! :D
Cant wait for the update..
I must know who it is..
beeps
22nd Jul 2006, 06:05 PM
And I AM following your story! Yay! I think I may have been lacking in the FB department for yours... so Ill try and spruce that up a little ;)
boolPropped
~Squash-buddy-ven~
22nd Jul 2006, 06:26 PM
*Cough* Just rated your story 5 stars *Cough* :D
beeps
22nd Jul 2006, 06:28 PM
:D Yay! Thanks so much Squash *high five*
boolPropped
indalu10_SC
22nd Jul 2006, 08:38 PM
oh i hope its isnt someone about to kill her or anything!
moonlight_muse
22nd Jul 2006, 10:54 PM
Great update
will be looking forward to the next chapter :)
Kalorii
23rd Jul 2006, 01:27 AM
Would've commented on this sooner if I wasn't busy with my computer. Got my new video card :D Anywho, I'm really wondering who it is on the other side of that door. It'd be terribly anti-climatic if it was George. :taekwondo Great update and I am joining everyone else in begging for the next chapter. :mob
beeps
23rd Jul 2006, 01:30 AM
Haha... George! That would be pretty funny, wouldnt it?
boolPropped
beeps
23rd Jul 2006, 06:21 PM
:alarm: Strong Language and Strong Situations :alarm:
“My gosh, James! You scared me...”
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“What are you doing here?” I asked.
James didn’t say anything but simply looked around the shabby apartment. I was a little embarrassed to be honest, but there really wasn’t anything I could do about it. This was just all I could afford at the time. I turned to James again and spoke.
“What are you doing here, James?” I demanded a little harsher this time. “You know you just left me.”
“I had to,” James finally responded.
“You had to?” I repeated. “I think you were too scared to face your own child,” I told him.
James snapped his head around to look straight into my eyes before he spoke. He stepped into my personal space and spoke very low and very soft.
“That is not my child.”
His stare was so intense that I couldn’t tear my eyes away from his. I looked back at him and tried to think of something new to say other than ‘This IS your baby’, but I couldn’t think of anything.
“It is your-”
“IT IS NOT MINE!” James screamed into my face.
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“James, I don’t understand why this concept is so difficult for you to grasp?” I was starting to get annoyed.
“I want you to listen to me,” James started out quietly as he moved closer to me. “If anyone ever asks you about that baby, you will not - I repeat - WILL NOT refer to me as the father. As far as I am concerned, this baby is not related to me whatsoever.”
“James!” I scolded him.
“I’m telling you this right now, bitch, if you let that baby into the world you will have hell to pay!” He screamed.
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“There is nothing I can do about that now! I’m too far along to get an abortion, if that’s what you were hoping,” I told him.
I started to get a little scared when James’ expression fell and his face grew cold and emotionless. Watching him like a hawk, I saw him walking over into the kitchen and reach for something. My heart leapt into my throat as I watching him stalk back towards me.
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The next couple of second flew by like a bolt of lightening, and all I could think about was my little baby. I reached down and covered my stomach tightly with my arms as I felt James step closer to me.
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As James stepped closer to me, I nearly fell completely to my knees. My mouth dropped open as I felt a sharp pain, piercing its way through my stomach and nestling in my lower back. As the pain intensified, my adrenaline kicked in, and I managed to push him away from me. James swore at me and then exited the apartment without another word.
I was nearly doubling over in pain as the tears flooded to my eyes. It felt as though every single thought, every single emotion had been spilled out of me. It was like I couldn’t feel anything anymore. I stood in the middle of my apartment and let my head fall into my hands.
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Something in my subconscious must have kicked my brain back into gear because I felt my legs dragging my tired body towards the phone. I was so surprised by what had happened that I could barely remember the number for 911. I managed to dial it slowly and spoke hurriedly to the operator.
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Turning my back to the wall, I slowly let my legs turn into jelly and slid my body down the wall until I was sitting on the floor with my legs in front of me. My stomach felt like it was on fire, but my legs were completely frozen I looked down to inspect myself and was horrified by what I saw.
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A small line of blood surrounding a deep incision right through the soft skin on the underside of my stomach. The bottom of my shirt fell from my hands, and as my head dropped back against the wall, I passed out.
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~Squash-buddy-ven~
23rd Jul 2006, 06:56 PM
Oh God.. I hope she's okay..
When it was James who was at the door, I thought that he was going to apologize and try to make up what he did or something in that direction..
bP, this was one of the best chapters yet.. Really amazing and I got a little scared.. :) I hope she's not going to lose the baby..
Looking forward to the next update.. :D
Luthiies
23rd Jul 2006, 07:00 PM
???!!!!
You blew me away...I wish i were a sim to kick James *** !
beeps
23rd Jul 2006, 07:27 PM
bP, this was one of the best chapters yet.. Really amazing and I got a little scared..
*blushies* Thank you so much for the compliment! I was certain that this chapter would really bring my readers into the story - almost like they were there watching this scene play out and not being able to do a single thing. Im glad it had the effect I was hoping for :D
Luthiies... Thanks for the compliment! Im glad that you are enjoying the story.
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Kalorii
23rd Jul 2006, 08:53 PM
:madashel: I'm telling you, James is such a :swear:! :steam: I can't believe how stupid and self-centered he is. I want to just throttle him right now. :soul:
Ahem. Great update again, bP and I hope you get the next update up soon! :moose:
jojokid
23rd Jul 2006, 08:56 PM
Woah..:blink:
msjasmine9113
23rd Jul 2006, 09:28 PM
:mob :steam: That James! He doesn't deserve to be a father if he can't live up to his responsibilities! :mad: When he woohooed with her he should've know the consequences and now he's trying to weasel his way out of them! :madashel: I hope he gets killed off the story, he deserves that much. :flame:
But the story is great! And I love the main character's name... :D
Cassandra
23rd Jul 2006, 11:33 PM
I LOVE this story! Please let James suffer a cruel and unusual death?
beeps
23rd Jul 2006, 11:35 PM
I LOVE this story! Please let James suffer a cruel and unusual death?
:lol: It seems as though everyone is wishing this on James! We'll just have to wait and see...
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jenny
23rd Jul 2006, 11:39 PM
hmm, well maybe she will just have the baby now...I hope
nckw
23rd Jul 2006, 11:41 PM
I LOVE this story! Please let James suffer a cruel and unusual death?
yes hun pleasee
ı will kill him myself if you wont LOL!! :twisted: :mob
leos_pride
24th Jul 2006, 03:27 AM
OOOO if james were real ....well....grrrr.....
I hope the baby is ok!
indalu10_SC
24th Jul 2006, 04:20 AM
heyheyhey,
lets just burn james now?
lethifold
24th Jul 2006, 07:56 AM
:eviltongu James is sooo mean..I just hope the baby is ok...
:rip: I hope he dies...was that to harsh???
DejAng3l
24th Jul 2006, 08:19 AM
wow great update....why don't we throw james into a pool and remove the ladder....or enclose him in a small space, remove the door and start a fire.....Muahahahha
cory_g
24th Jul 2006, 09:14 AM
Oh my God! That sonuva*****! I really really hope nothing bad happens to the baby! :(
discordkitty
24th Jul 2006, 09:56 AM
o m g ... what an update. I REALLY hope that rat ******* gets killed now. I'm going to be on pins and needles waiting for the next update
sweet_alice
24th Jul 2006, 10:06 AM
I have already had my :rant: but stuff that.
James :eviltongu u r a :sheep: u deserve to be :swear: :stfu: James
:bricks: and :banghead: is how u shud feel u stupid :elephant: u shud be more wise about your decision:wise:
:muffy: Dragon Lady has returned. and now she has gone :gnight: gone
Vaalyah
24th Jul 2006, 10:18 AM
I was wondering... why he is so afraid of the child paternity? I think she should call his parents and tell them the truth... maybe we would discover some dark secrets of that little disgusting boy...
moonlight_muse
24th Jul 2006, 11:30 AM
grrrrrrrrr, give James to me, I'll sort him out :muffy:
beeps
24th Jul 2006, 09:06 PM
Thanks for all the FB everyone! Im working on the next chapter, and Im guessing that it should be up within the hour :)
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~Squash-buddy-ven~
24th Jul 2006, 09:07 PM
Yay.. I can't wait.. *Sits in front of screen, waiting*
beeps
24th Jul 2006, 09:09 PM
Yay.. I can't wait.. *Sits in front of screen, waiting*
:giggler: Awww
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Cassandra
24th Jul 2006, 09:39 PM
I can't wiat for the next chapter! *sits wishing James will suffer in this chapter*
Hana_Chann
25th Jul 2006, 03:09 AM
No...I really REALLY want to hurt James now!! He's a maniac, call the cops! I don't want her to lose her baby...she'll be a good mother and her and george...
beeps
25th Jul 2006, 09:01 AM
...she'll be a good mother and her and george...
...And her and George what? :giggler: I guess youll just have to wait and find out!
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Pretty_in_Pink_14
25th Jul 2006, 12:33 PM
James is such an a**. He might have just killed an unborn child. HIS child for god sakes!!! What a bas***!!!
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