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beeps
3rd Aug 2006, 02:39 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHH man i love you!
*squeals* :yippee:
bP
discordkitty
3rd Aug 2006, 02:39 AM
omg MORE!!
jojokid
3rd Aug 2006, 02:40 AM
Are you kidding? That was way too short to be considered an update! I demand another! Now who's with me?
*Charges madly at bP*
:lol:
good one btw
GummiBears
3rd Aug 2006, 02:49 AM
Lol I agree, make it longer!! Hehe just kidding anyway great update, ohhhh im so excited I can't wait to see what happens next; I have way too many speculations going on in my head please stop my madness and please update again soon lol (I'm only teasing... update at your pace :) :) :) ) :P
jenny
3rd Aug 2006, 02:52 AM
yeah, another update! I have a feeling she will meet the "dirty" man again:D
sweetbabyhnd
3rd Aug 2006, 02:56 AM
ANother update pretty pretty please!!!!!!
leos_pride
3rd Aug 2006, 03:13 AM
Oh i feel so bad for her..hope she finds her son
jojokid
3rd Aug 2006, 03:17 AM
Maybe he will come looking for her..:)
witzelsucht_SC
3rd Aug 2006, 03:23 AM
boolPropped, you are so good at this :) such a wonderful story! And great, high quality pictures too. No wonder this story is so popular! Please reasssure us that this will not be your last sim story.
beeps
3rd Aug 2006, 03:54 AM
Thanks so much everyone! Im loving all this awesome FB Im getting... And no, witz, this will definitely not be my last sim story ;)
bP
vanillacreme
3rd Aug 2006, 04:38 AM
HEY BOOLPROPPED!
I've been secretly been keeping up with your story, but i've been a lazy *** and havent commented:P
Update bP update! :D
courtney cakes
3rd Aug 2006, 04:47 AM
Rawr! She updated! -dance- This is very good my smelly little friend :) I love this story so much, i want to lick the kitchen floor (tis good).
bP is now my favoritest person in the world.
After chuck norris of course.
Kalorii
3rd Aug 2006, 04:51 AM
Ohhhh...nuts. :eviltongu She was so close and now she's farther away than she ever has been. Although...I can't shake this feeling that she should have paid more attention to the man who was outside. Maybe he'd know more than she realises...Or am I over-thinking it? :dolt: Great update, bP! I demand moreeeeeeeeee! :stick:
feistyredhead
3rd Aug 2006, 05:33 AM
bp.. you are a TEASE !!!! lol
we don't like quickies :P
asyouwish
3rd Aug 2006, 06:09 AM
Okay, so I just read this whooooooole thing, and alsdkgjasldkfja;sldkjf AWESOME. UPDATE. NOW. Or... or... or... I'll sic my Kung-Fu Hamster on you.
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/1500/rawrkungfuhamstereu2.png
RAWR. You don't mess with the hamster.
fenderfreek299
3rd Aug 2006, 10:04 AM
You don't have to update. In fact, you can just forget the whole thing. [Walks away sheepishly when it seems as if the reverse psycology isn't working.] Excellent update.
~Squash-buddy-ven~
3rd Aug 2006, 11:03 AM
OMG.. an update... I luuff you.. It was great..
Will you update soon if I like, bribe you with:
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i197/Nilfisken/Other/homecookiestack.jpg
these cookies I have made JUST for you dear bP... :D
AnyPika
3rd Aug 2006, 11:35 AM
You guys are making me hungry with all these cookies :eviltongu bP, that was too short for an update :bump: hurry with the next chapter *puppy eyes*
Vinhou
3rd Aug 2006, 12:28 PM
I think it was a great udate - not too short in my opinion. I loved it. I hope to see another update soon-ish, but I'll be patient this time... :P
cory_g
3rd Aug 2006, 12:30 PM
Ooooh, great chapter!!! :bump: What if the dirty man is her son?!? Mwahahah...no I don't think so...he's a little too old for that, what if he's the one that adopted her son and she finds out, falls in love with him and they all live happily ever after?! :D
moonlight_muse
3rd Aug 2006, 03:37 PM
great update :)
kiki24
3rd Aug 2006, 03:49 PM
Bp is the dirty man her son?
LadySwig
3rd Aug 2006, 06:03 PM
Time to join the fan club :D
Update NOW!!!!!!!!
Pwease :anime:
lulie_x
3rd Aug 2006, 06:23 PM
Great update....But we reallyyyy need another one!! hehe :D
Thanks
courtney cakes
3rd Aug 2006, 06:47 PM
Ooooh, great chapter!!! :bump: What if the dirty man is her son?!? Mwahahah...no I don't think so...he's a little too old for that, what if he's the one that adopted her son and she finds out, falls in love with him and they all live happily ever after?! :D
i was thinking the same thing xD that, or the dirty man turns out to be james.
jenny
3rd Aug 2006, 09:53 PM
Well the "dirty" man looked to be her height, so I would say maybe she and "dirty" man fall for one another....there was a reason he was in the story:)
Pretty_in_Pink_14
3rd Aug 2006, 11:42 PM
UPDATE PLEASE!!! I 'll find something to bribe you with and get back to you...
beeps
4th Aug 2006, 03:19 AM
I like her house, you've done a good job decorating it!
Thanks so much! I built and decorated it myself :D
boolPropped
Needs to do nothing but Update Her Story
Lmao, I love that. -thinking Lyric might have had something to do with this-
:giggler: Oh you know it! Thanks again everyone for reading!
bP
LyricLee
4th Aug 2006, 03:25 AM
If you dont update soon, I'll um.....do err... something really mean!!! like break stuff or something. o0o Ill turn the site off and tell everyone its your fault!
beeps
4th Aug 2006, 03:58 AM
o0o Ill turn the site off and tell everyone its your fault!
:insane: Aww Lyric, dont do that! Ill update, I promise I will!
bP
discordkitty
4th Aug 2006, 04:01 AM
Update tonight or the title gets it!!!
beeps
4th Aug 2006, 04:14 AM
Update tonight or the title gets it!!!
MEAN! :cry:
bP
discordkitty
4th Aug 2006, 04:18 AM
It's called tough love :D
APaiger
4th Aug 2006, 04:50 AM
Right, so I just read this entire thing tonight (I read the first 3 chapters when you first put them out) and all I have to say for you is..
-jumps up and down like a small child- Update! Please! Please! Please! I need to know more! I'll love you forever and ever and ever and ever! Don't make me pull out...-dun dun dun- The puppy face!
Catwalk_SC
4th Aug 2006, 04:56 AM
Why do I constantly miss good stories? I love this. The chapter when she had to give up her baby was so heartwrenching...really good job hun! Can't wait to read the updates!
courtney cakes
4th Aug 2006, 06:04 AM
Haha, you had better update! If the site goes down it'll be your fault and..i'll cry! -tear-
DejAng3l
4th Aug 2006, 07:21 AM
great update but i need more....i want to know if she'll find her son or not
indalu10_SC
4th Aug 2006, 02:44 PM
GREAT update!
hopefully that is her son..
courtney cakes
5th Aug 2006, 03:08 AM
Aw, bP, I'm going to kill off a few of my sims if you don't update again soon!
don't leave me hanging v.v
beeps
5th Aug 2006, 03:28 AM
Aw, bP, I'm going to kill off a few of my sims if you don't update again soon!
Wow... I never thought I would spur on violence! *remembers Lyric's comment about burning my desk*
Wait - scratch that. Ill try my hardest to update soon :)
bP
courtney cakes
5th Aug 2006, 03:48 AM
Haha, thank you so much :)
beeps
5th Aug 2006, 08:23 AM
Last night wore me out. More emotionally than physically, but it certainly did wear me out. The next day, I woke up and decided to relax all morning and head over to The Pub to grab a quick espresso. It was such a nice day, and I didn’t feel like wasting it.
I called a taxi and headed off into the bright and sunny day, eager to get some caffeine into me. The taxi let me off and I thanked the driver before I got out and started in towards the building. After drinking my espresso slowly and carefully, I stepped outside for some fresh air. As I stood by the door, I saw a man walking towards me.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/172.jpg
***
He was probably the most gorgeous man I had seen walking around Summerset lately, and I was rather eager to say hello to him. But when he came walking up to me, it seemed like he already knew me...
“Miss Davis,” he said with a small smile.
Ok, so he did know me.
“Yes?” I answered.
“You don’t remember me, do you?” He asked with a half-smile.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/173.jpg
***
“Uh... I-I don’t...” I trailed off.
“Carrey. We met yesterday?” He reminded me.
“Oh,” I said. “Right, Carrey. I’m sorry, I didn’t recognize you...”
“It’s alright, I was pretty dirty yesterday. I was doing some work for Miss Martha. Her bones are a little weak, so I help her out from time to time,” he told me.
“That’s very kind,” I said.
“I do my best,” he responded with a smile. “Would you like to sit down?”
I smiled and nodded as the two of us took a seat on the little bench outside of The Pub.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/174.jpg
***
“So how do you know Miss Martha?” Carrey asked.
“Well,” I started and cleared my throat, “I don’t exactly know her. I’m looking for someone.”
“Someone in particular?” He asked.
I nodded and looked deeply into his calm eyes.
“Have you found him yet?” He asked quietly, locking his gaze with mine.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/175.jpg
***
“N-no...” I stammered lightly as I shook my head.
There was a slight pause as we looked into each other’s eyes before spoke again.
“I’m sorry if I seemed... a little distant yesterday. I was a little emotional,” I explained.
“We all have our days,” Carrey replied.
I smiled quickly and looked down at my hands.
“Well, I should probably get going...” I said.
“Well it was wonderful to see you again,” Carrey said honestly.
“It was really nice to see you too,” I replied as I stared into his eyes.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/176.jpg
***
Raising to my feet, I straightened my clothes and started to walk away. Just then I hear Carrey stand up and walk up behind me.
“Miss Davis?” He asked.
“It’s Jasmine,” I told him as I turned around.
“Jasmine,” he corrected himself, “Can I see you again?”
I smiled a little as I stared at my feet. How was I supposed to turn down the nicest man I have ever met in my life?
“I think so,” I stated firmly.
“Wonderful. I can’t wait until that day,” he said.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/177.jpg
***
I walked away from him with a smile permanently plastered on my face. This was going to be the start of a very good week. Maybe Carrey would be able to keep my mind off of things for a while.
~boolPropped~
LyricLee
5th Aug 2006, 08:26 AM
ok that was so NOT enough. (i know im demanding) but ughhhh more more more
natassia_SC
5th Aug 2006, 08:27 AM
thats a really good updat i hope he they do see eachother again and he treats her well. I love this whole story
beeps
5th Aug 2006, 08:28 AM
ok that was so NOT enough. (i know im demanding) but ughhhh more more more
:giggler: I knew that would get you out of hiding!
bP
LyricLee
5th Aug 2006, 08:30 AM
See what your title says? HUH HUH! MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
god i love this, its better and more addicting with every update...
beeps
5th Aug 2006, 08:35 AM
You have NO IDEA how much of a compliment that is to me, Lyric. Im so happy youre enjoying it!
...Ok so enough of the mushy stuff. Patience woman! :giggler:
bP
discordkitty
5th Aug 2006, 09:04 AM
I'm with Lyric, MORE PLEASE.
I'm also very happy that you spelled espresso correctly! I want to thwap everyone who calls it expresso :wtf:
beeps
5th Aug 2006, 09:09 AM
I'm also very happy that you spelled espresso correctly! I want to thwap everyone who calls it expresso
I even say it correctly too :nod:
bP
~Squash-buddy-ven~
5th Aug 2006, 09:59 AM
Great update, but I must agree with Lyric and discord, it's way too short.. ;)
Can't you see that I'm addicted to this fabulous story...? :D
leos_pride
5th Aug 2006, 11:18 AM
NNOO...you cant leave us hanging like this...Joins the others and demands more!
jojokid
5th Aug 2006, 01:30 PM
What a jip! Too short. Rejected. Send it back to the factory. Gimme a refund..
:P
Good update!
zeldap
5th Aug 2006, 01:51 PM
Thank you for a wonderful story so far. Yours is the very first sim story I've ever read. I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Don't keep us waiting to long. What to do until the next update? :banghead:
Better update soon or I'm going to have a heck of a headache, and you don't want that on your conscious do you?
IrishGrace
5th Aug 2006, 02:02 PM
um... yeah... I'm with the others... great update but soooo not enough :p
magpep21
5th Aug 2006, 04:30 PM
If you don't update I'll DIE!
jenny
5th Aug 2006, 04:50 PM
ahhhhh, so sweet:)
courtney cakes
5th Aug 2006, 05:37 PM
Aw, so adorableeee! I hope he knows something about her son..Grawrr.
Update more soon, bP!
Kalorii
5th Aug 2006, 05:43 PM
-joins the mob in demanding more- :mob
That was just like a teaser instead of a chapter! I'm with Lyric. We need more, more, more! :smash: Your title says it all. You must do nothing but update this story. :D Even for a teaser, it was good. I'm still getting the vibe that Carrey knows something that can help Jasmine if she only asks. Update again (very) soon! :luff:
vanillacreme
5th Aug 2006, 06:12 PM
-pokes bP with twig-
Grrr.
courtney cakes
5th Aug 2006, 06:57 PM
Hey >=o don't poke her typing arms, she might not be able to finish the story!
beeps
5th Aug 2006, 07:10 PM
Hey >=o don't poke her typing arms, she might not be able to finish the story!
:laugh: Typing arms!
Thanks everyone for all the wonderful FB. I always appreciate it.
bP
GummiBears
5th Aug 2006, 07:36 PM
Awesome update!!! :) I hope he knows something about the baby.
Mandie
5th Aug 2006, 08:21 PM
Well, he said "Did you find him yet?" Jas never mentioned that she was looking for a boy. He knows something! Update, update, update!!
indalu10_SC
5th Aug 2006, 09:42 PM
that was a good chapter, despite its shortness!
keep going!
sweetbabyhnd
5th Aug 2006, 10:08 PM
Update!!!!!!! please!!!!
TripztersGirl
5th Aug 2006, 10:26 PM
I've been silently reading :giggler:
If you update again, I'll make you a Chocolate Raspberry cheesecake! :giggler:
(I'm in culinary school)
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c276/most_excellent232/Chocolate_Raspberry_Cheesecake_1.jpg
beeps
5th Aug 2006, 11:12 PM
Ooh yummy! Thanks for taking the time to FB, Tripzters... As you most likely know, I can be bribed ;)
bP
moonlight_muse
5th Aug 2006, 11:36 PM
love is in the air :D
great update
LyricLee
6th Aug 2006, 03:19 AM
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE or else
http://www.trustedluv.com/pictures/animated/fight1.gif
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 04:04 AM
Or else, Lyric? Wait... I know what that entails *remembers post count dwindling to nothing*
bP
discordkitty
6th Aug 2006, 04:05 AM
Okay, you know what? NOW you've done it. You've gone and made baby jesus cry because you haven't updated yet.
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 04:06 AM
Oh no baby Jesus! That makes me cryyy :cry:
bP
witzelsucht_SC
6th Aug 2006, 04:55 AM
Hahahah, boolPropped, I find it amusing how at first everyone was like "Great story!" and now they're like "UPDATE NOW OR ELSE :K" hehehe ... well, I think that's a good thing :D
fyrefly_SC
6th Aug 2006, 04:57 AM
I dont like this 'smelly man' yet. He seems tooo suspicious for me...
...the fact that he knew she was looking for a male of sorts is weird... maybe he's a stalker, or he has kidnapped her baby...
Or worse! He adopted him, gave him up to someone else and will never tell her about it! She'll never find her baby!
Noooooooooooooooo! (Sorry but I always jump to the worst conclusions when I am anxious for story updates)
:soul: Oh and did I mention you have to update yet?????
*Edit again* I think we desperately need to start group therapy.
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 05:14 AM
Today I was going to visit Carrey. He had called me a couple of nights ago and asked if I wanted to come over for lunch on the weekend. Of course I had said yes, and now I was walking towards his house and getting more and more excited by the minute! There was just something about Carrey that I was drawn to... I think it was his kind and gentle nature. Whatever it was, I loved it and wanted to be around him more than I have ever wanted to be around anyone in my entire life.
As I rounded the last corner on the street, I started walking along his sidewalk outside of his home. I looked up quickly to see his house - It was huge! Carrey was definitely doing well in his career... whatever that would be.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/178.jpg
***
“Hi Jasmine!” Carrey greeted me warmly.
“Hey Carrey,” I smiled.
“I’m happy you accepted my invitation,” he said.
“Of course,” I said with a big smile on my face.
“How was the walk over here? Is it far from where you are?” He asked me.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/179.jpg
***
“Not too far,” I responded.
“Would you like to come in and sit down? Lyndi is making lunch. It should be ready in about 15 minutes,” Carrey said as he started in the house.
My heart sank. Lyndi?
“Lyndi?” I heard myself ask.
“Oh, I’m sorry... Lyndi is my maid; I should have clarified,” he told me.
I let out the breath I was holding, and followed him into his house. We took a seat in the living room and talked for a while before lunch was ready.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/180.jpg
***
“So what is it that you do?” I asked Carrey.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/181.jpg
***
“I’m in business. I run a small chain of restaurants,” he replied.
“You run them or you own them,” I wanted to know.
“Well,” Carrey started and laughed a little bit, “I do both.”
“Wow,” I replied.
“And what is it that you do, Jasmine?” He asked.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/182.jpg
***
“I’m a surgeon,” I replied.
We talked for about ten more minutes until Lyndi called us in for lunch. We sat and had a wonderful lunch for about an hour. Lyndi had prepared us each a small salad and some divine sandwiches; some of the best sandwiches I have ever tasted. We both thanked Lyndi for the lunch, and retied back into the living room once again.
“I have enjoyed getting to know you so much,” Carrey said.
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***
I smiled and agreed with him before he leaned in a little closer. I wasn’t sure what it was that he said because I was focusing too much on how close his lips were getting to mine. He placed his fingers lightly under my chin and pulled me closer to him.
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***
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/185.jpg
***
“That was nice,” I said after we had kissed for the first time.
“It was very nice,” Carrey agreed. “From the first moment I saw you, I thought you were the most beautiful woman I had ever seen.”
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/186.jpg
***
“Carrey...” I said though a breathy laugh.
“I’m serious,” he interrupted. “I would love to kiss you again.”
All I did was smile and pull him down to me again for another kiss.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/187.jpg
***
~boolPropped~
LyricLee
6th Aug 2006, 05:19 AM
Ya know how much i wanna choke you when i get to the end of each update- In a totally nice "I love you" kinda way.... haha <3
witzelsucht_SC
6th Aug 2006, 05:19 AM
Great update!!! And ... your story is now the 2nd-most-replied-to Sim story on this site OF ALL TIME!! How does that make you feel? :D
but of course, you must have a lot more updates in order to become #1 ;D
discordkitty
6th Aug 2006, 05:20 AM
awwwww they're gonna make little babies now
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 05:23 AM
Ya know how much i wanna choke you when i get to the end of each update- In a totally nice "I love you" kinda way.... haha <3
:giggler: What a great image for me to have every time I hit that "post" button! Hehe
And ... your story is now the 2nd-most-replied-to Sim story on this site OF ALL TIME!! How does that make you feel?
That makes me feel AWESOME!
awwwww they're gonna make little babies now
Maybe... Maybe not... *acts mysterious*
bP
LyricLee
6th Aug 2006, 05:28 AM
****** Tell me im right, You know that im right in what I sent you in PM. IM RIGHT IM RIGHT.......*dances* ok now go update...
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 05:30 AM
****** Tell me im right, You know that im right in what I sent you in PM. IM RIGHT IM RIGHT.......*dances* ok now go update...
Whoa, whoa, whoa Lyric. Remember what I wrote, hmmm? I never said you were right...
bP
PS I like *looks at watch* JUST updated!
LyricLee
6th Aug 2006, 05:31 AM
you never said it but I know I am.... god youre the most difficult member yet- Maybe thats why Im adoring you so much... I must bribe you further... Tell me my theory is right and Ill um... do somethign special for you... like um... i dunno....just tell me!
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 05:35 AM
you never said it but I know I am.... god youre the most difficult member yet- Maybe thats why Im adoring you so much... I must bribe you further... Tell me my theory is right and Ill um... do somethign special for you... like um... i dunno....just tell me!
*heavenly lights reign down on me* *Hallelujah chorus starts*
My ears simply cant believe it! Nah, just kidding. You know I could really make you regret that last statement, Lyric ;) I love ya to pieces!
bP <- cant stop giggling
courtney cakes
6th Aug 2006, 05:37 AM
Yay yay yay! bP updated yay!!!!! -squeel- I loved it..but oh my goodness, I want more! -tear-
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 05:45 AM
Hehe courtney... You peeps are so impatient!
bP
LyricLee
6th Aug 2006, 05:46 AM
Atleast you know youre an amazing writer if we hang out here and wait so impatiently for updates :) we could all be like "this sucks..next" :)
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 05:48 AM
Atleast you know youre an amazing writer if we hang out here and wait so impatiently for updates we could all be like "this sucks..next"
Aww you wouldnt next me, would you Lyric? :giggler: This is true though. Its amazing the FB and all the awesome comments Im getting from this story! It makes me feel amazing yall :D
bP
Shawnee_SC
6th Aug 2006, 07:26 AM
I love this story and we need another update soon!
Kalorii
6th Aug 2006, 07:27 AM
...I like Carrey. Don't get me wrong. I just have a very eerie feeling about this relationship they're starting up. :blink: I don't know if I'm just being paranoid or I'm actually right and Carrey is bad news. I'm hoping I'm wrong, though. :hmm:
Great update as usual, bP but you do seem to enjoy making us wait for the next chapter way too much. :smash: We're all going to have to glue you to your seat and make you finish it in one fell swoop soon. :jig: Update again really, really (really) soon! :D
yoaiamica
6th Aug 2006, 09:18 AM
omg...i'm an addict because of you!!! :P great story...keep those updates coming!!!
Vinhou
6th Aug 2006, 11:08 AM
I just read the last two chapters - they're brilliant! I loved them. Can't wait for another update of course. ;)
moonlight_muse
6th Aug 2006, 11:48 AM
Caught up
waiting for next chapter :D
Carrey does seem a bit "too good to be true" Hope not
joanne1977
6th Aug 2006, 11:49 AM
hmmm i think thats her son
Vinhou
6th Aug 2006, 11:56 AM
It couldn't be her son. Doesn't he have blue eyes? :blink:
Anyways, I am still waiting for an update. ;)
UlaumeSarestes
6th Aug 2006, 01:04 PM
No one has noticed that it cannot be her son, because he is too old to be?
.~*Iris*~.
6th Aug 2006, 01:11 PM
I want to see BABY BOY!!! (it's really cute that he even has this name on official papers)
hmm, isn't this relation moving a little too fast? hmm well maybe not, maybe it was love at first sight! but wait no... she looked at him like he was the grim reaper the first time she saw him...
ack I don't know! all I know is that it's a great story, and I'm gonna be nice unlike all the others and i'm not gonna threaten you for you to update....
I'll just wait patiently.....
*starts biting nails*
see i'm patient....
*foot moving nervously*
veeeeery patient................*bites off finger*
BP I"VE BEEN WAITING FOR 10 SECONDS!! I WAS SO PATIENT HOW COULD YOU DO THIS? UPDATE NOW OR ELSE..............................
:P joking! (....or am I..... mwahahahaa)
indalu10_SC
6th Aug 2006, 03:08 PM
OOOOH!
i hope this rules out Carrey as Baby Boy.
WE DONT NEED ANY SURPRISES, BOOLPROPPED!
IrishGrace
6th Aug 2006, 03:17 PM
*Irish sits on the edge of her seat awaiting the next update
midnight05
6th Aug 2006, 04:04 PM
My first post for this story.I wuvs it.Update really,really,really,really,really,really,really, really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really, really,really soon.If you count the 'really's' you'll see there are 23.It's a great story so far.
fransica
6th Aug 2006, 05:29 PM
what the, where is the rest of the update man I'm so hooked and you constantly leave us hanging I don't think I could take much more of this, but I have to say even with this much pressure Uh...um I mean encouragement, your quality of writing never goes down now crazy clue those fingers to the key board and keep the story coming hone. :D
Party_girl_146
6th Aug 2006, 06:02 PM
boolProped,please update!This is one of the best stories i have ever saw and read!And i hope Jasmine and Carrey have a good life and be happy ever after!:)
SpacemanHPSpiff
6th Aug 2006, 06:09 PM
Ai! I just read this all the way through, and I can see why it's been featured! And why you have your cool title... :D This is really great, boolPropped! The writing is clear, easy to read, with great descriptions, and the pictures are very enhancing to the text! Except now you have me hung up waiting for another update... :D
Oh, and I'm guessing now that he's NOT her son. :P
xXkatXx_SC
6th Aug 2006, 06:18 PM
Awwwwwwwww im so loving this story!!!!
Party_girl_146
6th Aug 2006, 06:54 PM
I just hope the next update comes soon!
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 06:58 PM
Thanks so much for reading everyone! And thank you to spaceman for the lovely words!
I love FB :yippee:
bP
Sashamerosha
6th Aug 2006, 07:54 PM
Very great chapters, bP!! Now... lets see 23!
courtney cakes
6th Aug 2006, 09:00 PM
bP, I made a myspace fan club just for you!
http://groups.myspace.com/bPweloveyou :)
You earned it buddy!
beeps
6th Aug 2006, 09:54 PM
bP, I made a myspace fan club just for you!
You earned it buddy!
:yippee: Awww youre adorkable, courtney!
bP
courtney cakes
6th Aug 2006, 09:59 PM
Haha, why thanks :)
midnight05
6th Aug 2006, 10:02 PM
Oh I might just join that group.Update bp.Pretty,pretty please with chocolate syrup and cherries and whatever else you like on ice cream.
Pretty_in_Pink_14
6th Aug 2006, 10:20 PM
:lovestruc Awww...I think she's falling for him. They look so cute together.
beeps
7th Aug 2006, 03:34 AM
Hehe thanks for all the FB everyone! Im so going to check out my fan club right now :D
bP
discordkitty
7th Aug 2006, 03:36 AM
bP has been a very bad girl and needs to study! back in your hole!
beeps
7th Aug 2006, 03:37 AM
Mean! I knew it was a bad idea telling you I wasnt doing my homework... :(
bP
courtney cakes
7th Aug 2006, 05:49 AM
>=o bP, don't worry about your homework :) just update.
haha, what a good influence I am.
beeps
7th Aug 2006, 06:12 AM
Omg youre the best influence, courtney ;) *studies some more*
bP
courtney cakes
7th Aug 2006, 06:13 AM
Eh, I try xD
LyricLee
7th Aug 2006, 07:58 AM
ahem i know you didnt go a full day without an update- how dare you.. this story comes before real life! dont you know that!
courtney cakes
7th Aug 2006, 08:00 AM
Yes! Tell her Lyric! -pout-
~Squash-buddy-ven~
7th Aug 2006, 08:10 AM
I can't wait for the next update from you bP... Your story is fantastic...! You should be a professionel writer.. :D
beeps
7th Aug 2006, 08:14 AM
ahem i know you didnt go a full day without an update- how dare you.. this story comes before real life! dont you know that!
Ok, Ill just tell all my professors that I couldnt pass this semester because Lyric and her gang ordered me to stop all homework-doing and update?! :giggler:
bP
LyricLee
7th Aug 2006, 08:15 AM
sounds like a plan to me :) lol
beeps
7th Aug 2006, 08:22 AM
I knew you were going to say something like that. Right as I clicked on the link I thought "She most likely wrote 'That works for me'." Hehe!
...But I needs tuh do the studies or I aint gunna gets me a good ed-u-cation...
And if I dont graduate then I wont be able to sharpen up my writing skills which means no more stories! :argh:
bP
courtney cakes
7th Aug 2006, 08:23 AM
No more stories? -sniff- -kicks and screams like a toddler who wants something she can't have-
LyricLee
7th Aug 2006, 08:36 AM
OK then just tell me if my theory is right or wrong and ill be more patient LOL
beeps
7th Aug 2006, 08:38 AM
OK then just tell me if my theory is right or wrong and ill be more patient LOL
You already know my answer to that request, Lyric :nod:
bP
courtney cakes
7th Aug 2006, 09:34 AM
Or does she? Dun dun dun...
AnyPika
7th Aug 2006, 11:41 AM
I go away for 3 days, and when i come back what do i find :duck: ? Threats, bribes, a fan club, conclusions...and only 2 updates :eviltongu !
You could make your website and make every second update of a story a donation :bump: you'd be rich in a month's time :bump:
beeps
7th Aug 2006, 10:13 PM
I go away for 3 days, and when i come back what do i find? Threats, bribes, a fan club, conclusions...and only 2 updates!
You could make your website and make every second update of a story a donation you'd be rich in a month's time
I WOULD be rich! Im so going to do that ;)
...Or I guess I could just update...
bP
LyricLee
7th Aug 2006, 10:16 PM
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Pretty_in_Pink_14
7th Aug 2006, 10:23 PM
Update!!!! on this site please... I'll give you these pretty pretty cookies... they're yummy too. http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y259/Pretty_in_Pink_14/cookies.jpg
beeps
7th Aug 2006, 10:43 PM
Hmmm... U got a "grrrrr" and cookies. Which one to pick?
bP
kiki24
7th Aug 2006, 10:50 PM
Pick Cookies i stole one they're very tasty!! LOL
SongBirdWVU
8th Aug 2006, 12:27 AM
Great story! This is the first one I've read on here and it's wonderful! It makes me want to try it sometime :D Keep it up.
courtney cakes
8th Aug 2006, 08:46 AM
I was hoping when I got home from Alabama you would have updated v.v but nope, still at ol' chapter twenty two. We should form an angry mob and charge at bP with torches until she agrees to update :)
auroraspirit
8th Aug 2006, 09:49 AM
I'm looking forward to the next installment, great work :)
Auroraspirit :angel:
fenderfreek299
8th Aug 2006, 09:56 AM
I was hoping when I got home from Alabama you would have updated v.v but nope, still at ol' chapter twenty two. We should form an angry mob and charge at bP with torches until she agrees to update :)
You can't forget the pitchforks.
AnyPika
8th Aug 2006, 01:06 PM
Lyric's angry, don't be late with the next update :bump:
midnight05
8th Aug 2006, 01:39 PM
Your going to make me and this little adorable puppy cry if you don't update.
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b333/honeygirl93/ital20greyhound20puppy20being20held.jpg
Come on.Update for the wittle puppy.
LouLou
8th Aug 2006, 01:58 PM
i love this story boolpropped. you are really talented!
now, like everyone else said... UPDATE SOON!
courtney cakes
8th Aug 2006, 09:22 PM
bP, buddy, I don't want to do this, but you give me no choice! -raids kitchen and steals all of your sweets- :) You get them back when you update.
msjasmine9113
9th Aug 2006, 12:17 AM
*sighs* I've come by twice a day seeing if there has been an update. :( I tried to resist doing this but I can't help it now. *pulls out picket signs and starts chanting* UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! *walks around thread waving sign and chanting*
beeps
9th Aug 2006, 12:21 AM
MAN you people are impatient! Ok heres my life story from the past two days...
My internet was down yesterday/last night until this morning for "manual construction" - whatever. I wasnt too happy with the cable company by any means. I have finals that are due tonight, and three houses to make for prizes and all the other contests Im running/participating in take up my time as well, so I most likely wont be able to update for another day.
I KNOW yall will understand that a good ed-u-cation is most important, so please bear with me for a day, ok? Thanks everyone, and I love the continued interest in this story :)
bP
msjasmine9113
9th Aug 2006, 12:28 AM
Okay, okay. I'll let you slide this time. I'm not sure of the others though...
Rapi
9th Aug 2006, 12:32 AM
I just finished reading everything.
Great story you got there! :D
I'd beg for more updates, but I think everyone else did already.
And I can't wait to see what happened to Baby Boy. >:3
courtney cakes
9th Aug 2006, 04:13 AM
Alright alright, I'll give you a little time off..but update as soon as you get back on track buddy!
DejAng3l
9th Aug 2006, 04:33 AM
great update....can't wait too see more....
feistyredhead
9th Aug 2006, 06:22 AM
your edumackation comes first! we can wait.
miacovaspet
9th Aug 2006, 07:54 AM
bP, you take your time, your education and real life are much more important than sims and this story. We can wait, it's worth it!
Pretty_in_Pink_14
9th Aug 2006, 02:32 PM
Yes education is extremely improtant. I understand so I'll let it go. ONLY for education.
beeps
9th Aug 2006, 07:44 PM
Thanks everyone for your understanding. Just for that - next chapter will be a monster!
bP
Gallowsraven
9th Aug 2006, 09:57 PM
Boolpropped: I just finished reading this whole story and.....I LOVE IT!!! I can't believe I didn't see it sooner. *Slaps self on forehead*. Looking forward to updates!
courtney cakes
9th Aug 2006, 11:33 PM
Thanks everyone for your understanding. Just for that - next chapter will be a monster!
bP
-Napoleon Dynamite voice- Heck yes!
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 03:02 AM
*slams book shut*
...So was it tonite that everyone wanted me to update??
bP
jojokid
10th Aug 2006, 03:03 AM
Um...well...yeah!!!
:D
Is it gonna be tonight?
Pretty pretty please?!
*Puppy dog eyes*
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 03:21 AM
Hmmm... Ill think about it.
bP
SongBirdWVU
10th Aug 2006, 03:34 AM
I'll post my update at midnight if you will!! :D
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 03:34 AM
I'll post my update at midnight if you will!!
Haha nice try ;) jk
bP
courtney cakes
10th Aug 2006, 04:53 AM
Oh, pretttttty please bP! I'll love you forever and ever and ever if you dooo >.>
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 08:29 PM
“It’s three o’clock already?” I asked as I looked at the clock.
I had been over at Carrey’s for hours! The time had simply flown by, and I didn’t want to over-stay my welcome. I looked over at Carrey who was looking out the front window. I looked outside to see a bright yellow school bus pull up. As it came to a stop, I watched Carrey’s expression change into a bright smile.
The cutest little boy came bounding from the bus and into the house. I watched with a smile on my face as Carrey reached down to hug the little boy.
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“Jasmine,” Carrey said as he stood back up, “This is my son, Mykel.”
“Nice to meet you Mykel,” I said, thoroughly confused as to why Carrey didn’t tell me he had children.
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“Hi,” the little boy responded.
“Why don’t you get your homework done before dinner, ok?” Carrey told Mykel.
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“Ok dad,” Mykel answered and headed upstairs.
Carrey watched his son leave with a smile on his face and then turned to me. I was a little hesitant about what to say or how to react to this whole situation. Carrey stepped closer to me and began to speak.
“I should have told you I have a son,” he started.
“Yes,” I replied.
“I’m sorry I didn’t tell you sooner,” he said.
“Are you... divorced then?” I asked.
“No,” he said and shook his head once.
“I’m not really understanding this,” I said in all honesty.
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“Sit down, and I’ll tell you about it.”
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“It started about 8 years ago...”
When I was thirteen, I met Miss Martha, the social worker at Green Gables. She treated me like I was her own son, and I had grown to love her dearly over the years. When I started on some mission work through my church eight years ago, I decided that I wanted to work with her because she had become such an inspiration for me.
I was walking to her house on Tuesday morning, and it was the nicest day I had seen in Summerset in a long time. I was nearly right out of college, and I was ready to start in on some work - both for my career and also for my church.
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It was a lovely day, and there was nothing more I wanted to do than to talk to Miss Martha for the afternoon. She came out and greeted me kindly, as she always did, and we proceeded to talk the day away.
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I told her all about the things I had been doing for my church, and she loved listening to every word of it. She was a very religious woman herself, so she could understand that from time to time I felt as though I was being called to do something. And that day, the feeling was so intense.
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I asked her what she thought I should do with the feeling I was feeling.
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I listened carefully as she told me the story about a little boy she had taken from a home only weeks earlier. She told me about the mother’s past, she told me about the father and that the baby was safe now with her.
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I knew that I was brought to Miss Martha’s for a reason that day, and I felt compelled to see this baby. Miss Martha didn’t think it was a very good idea to rush into this situation, but I convinced her that I just had to see him that day.
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To Be Continued...
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 08:30 PM
I made my way up to his little nursery, and I leaned over the side of his crib.
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I peered over the tiny baby and saw the clearest eyes I have ever seen looking up at me. He was beautiful and so small.
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I lifted him carefully out of the crib and held him in my arms.
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“You are so beautiful little baby,” I said to him.
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“I am going to take care of you now ok?” I whispered into his ear.
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Then I kissed the top of his head, and I knew I was in love.
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And I took him home and have been caring for him ever since then. I legally adopted him about two months after I took him from Miss Martha.
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By this point, I was absolutely sobbing. Hearing everything Carrey had to say about her son reminded me way too much of my own son... but in an almost uncanny way. I could barely look at Carrey as the tears streamed down my face.
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“Hey,” Carrey started quietly as he saw me crying, “what’s wrong?”
I couldn’t even speak, I was crying so much.
“Sweetie, was it something I said?” He asked.
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“Mykel... I had to... Everything was so hard that...” I stammered all over the place.
“What is it?” Carrey almost whispered.
“Can I see Mykel?” I asked through my tears.
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To Be Continued...
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 08:31 PM
“Of course,” Carrey said before bringing me in for a gentle hug.
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Carrey went up the first couple of stairs and yelled for Mykel. The small boy bounded down the stairs in his little bubble pajamas and into the living room with us. Carrey told his son that he and I wanted to say goodnight to him. Drying the last of my tears, I watched as Carrey leaned down and hugged his son goodnight.
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Mykel then turned and looked up at me.
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The tears started to prick the back of my eyes as I looked into his big, grey eyes. He was so beautiful. Choking back my tears, I smiled a little and leaned down to hug him goodnight as well.
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I looked the little boy up and down and then turned my gaze to Carrey. He looked down at me as I assured silently that nothing was wrong. I then turned back to Mykel and let my hand gently lift his pants cuff upwards. The tears started streaming down my face as I ran my fingers lightly over a tiny scar on the outside of his left ankle.
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Mykel looked up at his father with a confused expression as I raised from the floor turned away from the two. I ran from the house as quickly as I could and towards my house.
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~boolPropped~
courtney cakes
10th Aug 2006, 08:32 PM
Thank you sooo much bP!!! I screamed so loudly when I saw chapter twenty three as the title..
She found baby boy! -tear- Arrr this is by far the best update EVERRRRR.
joanne1977
10th Aug 2006, 08:34 PM
see i knew it was to do with her son!!!!!
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 08:35 PM
Thank you sooo much bP!!! I screamed so loudly when I saw chapter twenty three as the title..
Haha well I hope you liked it. I thought I would make this chapter a montser long chapter since I havent posted in a while :)
bP
courtney cakes
10th Aug 2006, 08:36 PM
I didn't like it, I LOVED it. -gives bP all of her sweets that I stole from her kitchen-
discordkitty
10th Aug 2006, 08:41 PM
GREAT update, I'm going to be on the edge of my seat until chapter twenty four
miacovaspet
10th Aug 2006, 08:42 PM
Yay! How exciting!! Thanks for updating bP :D
~Squash-buddy-ven~
10th Aug 2006, 09:08 PM
It was an amazing update... I litterally started jumping when I saw you had updated..
It was a very exciting and emotional update, and I'm glad that the found baby boy, or Mykel.. :)
When you promise monster update, you really do a monster update...
Thank you very much for making this fabulous story... :D
Montridge
10th Aug 2006, 09:29 PM
Wow!
Everyone start breaking out more cookies, puppies, what ever it takes...I'm looking forward to chapter twenty-four. Bravo!
LyricLee
10th Aug 2006, 09:39 PM
Now you must dance around in circles while pattingyour head and rubbing your stomach and sing "Lyric was right la la la" hahaha
I love you!
Gallowsraven
10th Aug 2006, 09:43 PM
That was great, so glad she found her son. *tears up*. I love this story. Can't wait for more updates.
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 09:47 PM
Now you must dance around in circles while pattingyour head and rubbing your stomach and sing "Lyric was right la la la" hahaha
I love you!
*laughs* Oh Lyric you were right... but remember always that I didnt give in to the pressure! Hehe I love youuuuu <3 Plus Im not nor ever was one of "Lyric's minions" *feels special*
Thanks for reading as always :D
bP
jenny
10th Aug 2006, 10:29 PM
oh my gosh, what an awesome update, I love how you did that!!! can't wait to see what happens next:)
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 10:38 PM
Aww thanks so much jenny... Youre gonna give me a swelled head! *looks in the mirror* Whoop! Too late!
Thanks so much for FBing :D
bP
joanne1977
10th Aug 2006, 10:45 PM
*sits here with strange images in head :blink: :blink:
beeps
10th Aug 2006, 10:46 PM
*sits here with strange images in head
Why the strange images, joanne???
bP
SongBirdWVU
10th Aug 2006, 11:46 PM
Oh man!!! Amazing chapters, well worth the wait! Great job!
IrishGrace
10th Aug 2006, 11:48 PM
wow... just wow. :D
jojokid
11th Aug 2006, 12:16 AM
I knew it! I knew it!
:D
Maybe she can marry Carrey (hehe rhymes) and then she can adopt him back!
lol
And live happily ever after...
xStrawberryxKiwix
11th Aug 2006, 01:34 AM
Yaaay! *hugs bP*
simsrock123
11th Aug 2006, 04:38 AM
Great update
Kalorii
11th Aug 2006, 07:43 AM
Well don't that just beat all... :lol: Here I was with a bad feeling about Carrey and I didn't even think that he was the one who adopted her son. :doh: I'm feeling mighty stupid now for my paranoia. However, here's hoping that she can bring herself to explain why she ran from his house. Great update, bP and I hope you update again really, really, really soon. :D
beeps
11th Aug 2006, 07:48 AM
No need to feel stupid! A lot of people tried out their theories on me *cough*Lyric*cough* so its all good if you guessed wrong. Its still fun for me to see what everyone thinks will happen :D Thanks for reading as always!
bP
auroraspirit
11th Aug 2006, 08:51 AM
Yah bp, great update :)
Auroraspirit :angel:
cory_g
11th Aug 2006, 09:36 AM
Aha! I really hope the two of them will get together and raise Mykel! :) Yay! She found her son! *does happy dance*
beeps
11th Aug 2006, 05:28 PM
Thanks so much for all the lovely comments everyone :)
bP
blackdn
11th Aug 2006, 06:43 PM
I am so relieved! I have been following this story for a while now, and I can't wait to see how it unfolds. Please tell me she confesses it all to Carrey. If nothing else I have learned that sometimes a perfect guy is just that...sometimes there is no "too good to be true" and a great guy can truly be great. I hope Carrey ends up being that guy. She certainly deserves it.
Please update! I need breaks from the monotony of my day and now I am so wrapped up in this story!
applesoveroranges
11th Aug 2006, 08:33 PM
NOOO!!!!! update PLEAse!!! ><
*sorry new reader ^^'*
Amazing! I love it! It brought tears to my eyes and smiles to my face! please update soon! please please please! ><
beeps
11th Aug 2006, 11:33 PM
Thank ya apples... Im glad that youve enjoyed my story so far :)
bP
GummiBears
12th Aug 2006, 12:44 AM
Oh wow how did I miss these updates?? Very very very very very good :D :D :D Ohhh I can't take the suspense of what happens next ,its killing me.
msjasmine9113
12th Aug 2006, 12:48 AM
Yay! She found her son and he's with her lover. How ironically beautiful is that? Great update, bP.
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 12:52 AM
Aww thanks everyone! :valentine 's FB
bP
Kayshay
12th Aug 2006, 01:29 AM
great update
midnight05
12th Aug 2006, 01:39 AM
I got home a couple hours ago and didn't even think to look for an update.Thankies for updating bp.I thought he(Carrey) might have adopted him(baby).
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 01:40 AM
Well it looks like you were right, midnight :) Thanks for FBing.
bP
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 02:07 AM
It had been nearly four days since I had last seen Carrey and Mykel. I just could not wrap my mind around the fact that Mykel was my son... my little baby boy. I can’t believe that I found him, and I can’t believe that his father is the man I am in love with.
There were things that needed to be done around the house, so I did them and everything else to try and keep my mind off of things. I spent most of my afternoon writing in my diary and taking time to smell the roses, so to speak.
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It was about 4 o’clock when I saw Carrey for the first time in four days. I was a little nervous and a little relieved that he was coming over to talk to me, and I waited patiently on my chair as he walked towards me.
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“I’ve been worried about you, Jasmine.”
“No need, I’m fine,” I lied.
“No you’re not. You raced out of my house like you were on fire,” Carrey replied.
“I know. I’m sorry,” I apologized.
“There is nothing to apologize for, I just wished you would have stayed so we could have talked about it,” Carrey said.
I couldn’t stop the tears any longer, and they started to run down my cheeks again. Carrey came around and pulled me from my chair as I started to weep.
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He reached for me gently and spoke softly into my ear.
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“I know about your baby. I know that Mykel isn’t only mine... He is yours too.”
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“And I would like him to be ours someday, Jasmine.”
I looked up at him through a sheet of tears and took him into my arms. All my doubt and all my worry seemed to slip away as I felt his strong arms reach around my waist as he held me close.
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After I had a good long cry, Carrey kissed my cheek and reached his hand up to wipe a few stray tears away.
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“Be with me,” he whispered.
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Carrey and I stood outside of his house - our house. I had accepted Carrey’s proposal to be with him forever. We weren’t married or engaged yet, but I had packed up all of my things and moved in with Carrey and Mykel this afternoon.
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Carrey had talked to Mykel and explain everything to him so that he wasn’t upset with me moving in. I was a little nervous to know how he would take all the news, but he was more thrilled than anything to have found his mother. I felt so special.
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I bent down to give my son a hug after he ran outside to meet me and Carrey.
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This was perfect. This was everything I have ever wanted for my life and more.
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~boolPropped~
jojokid
12th Aug 2006, 02:09 AM
Yay!
Hooray!
:D
sweetbabyhnd
12th Aug 2006, 02:10 AM
Great story and Awesome update
LyricLee
12th Aug 2006, 02:11 AM
omg i got chills! I hate you for making me mushy and loveyou for EVERYTHING else!
jojokid
12th Aug 2006, 02:12 AM
Is this near the end? Oh, I hope not!
:(
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 02:13 AM
omg i got chills! I hate you for making me mushy and loveyou for EVERYTHING else!
Hahaha Aww thanks Lyric, its what I do best. I love you too!
Thanks everyone for taking the time to FB as well. I always appreciate it so much :D
EDIT: jojo - Yes Im sorry to say it is nearing the end. I wont tell you how many chapters are left tho ;)
bP
discordkitty
12th Aug 2006, 02:15 AM
awwwwww great update! so sweet
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 02:17 AM
Thank you discord!
bP
jojokid
12th Aug 2006, 02:23 AM
Aww...its near the end!
:(
I won't post my new story, until you finish yours, though.
I already have 7 pages on Word, I just need pictures, and readers of course.
:P
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 02:24 AM
Haha well feel free to post yours whenever you would like :) Ill be looking out for it.
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witzelsucht_SC
12th Aug 2006, 02:30 AM
hey boolpropped ... great updates, and this is the most replied to story :D
GummiBears
12th Aug 2006, 02:53 AM
Awesome Update!!!!! Yay they are a family!! :)
IrishGrace
12th Aug 2006, 03:22 AM
awww... I really loved that chapter... sad that it's nearing the end, but this has been a really great story :D
magpep21
12th Aug 2006, 03:30 AM
Yay there a family!
Good Update!
jenny
12th Aug 2006, 03:36 AM
ohhhh, i almost cried, so sweet!........now they can lots of babies:D
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 03:53 AM
Aww jenny! Thanks so much for FBing :D
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courtney cakes
12th Aug 2006, 03:57 AM
bP! I love youuu! You're the best writer EVER. Pleaseee tell me that since this one is nearing it's end you're going to make another? I'd like..worship you if you did..heck, I already worship you :)
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 04:00 AM
Haha courtney... Im already cooking up something for my next story. But Im glad your enjoying this one too!
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courtney cakes
12th Aug 2006, 04:01 AM
Yay! -bows down-
fransica
12th Aug 2006, 04:51 AM
This story is just to much for me it has me in it's grips fantastic update words escape me to say how great your story telling is.
msjasmine9113
12th Aug 2006, 05:09 AM
My gosh, do you want me to cry?! This was great. *sniffles*
auroraspirit
12th Aug 2006, 05:26 AM
What a sweet update.
Auroraspirit :angel:
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 06:19 AM
fransica and jaz... Im so happy that this chapter moved you! Thanks for all the wonderful FB yall :D
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applesoveroranges
12th Aug 2006, 06:25 AM
I'm so confuzzled but so happy! ^-^ how does carrey know about that? have i misread? o.o
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 06:42 AM
Carrey spoke with Miss Martha about the situation. There was a 4 day time-lapse from when Jasmine found out and when Carrey showed up at her house.
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leos_pride
12th Aug 2006, 09:35 AM
Oh how sweet!
~Squash-buddy-ven~
12th Aug 2006, 10:23 AM
fab update bP.. I loved it..
This story makes so emotional when I read it.. *wipes tear*
I'm going to agree with courtney, you ARE the BEEEST writer ever...!
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 10:27 AM
*blushies* Aww thanks so much squash - that really means a lot :nod:
bP
Pretty_in_Pink_14
12th Aug 2006, 02:15 PM
*bows over and over* I sooo worship you too!!! That update was so sweet. I'm so happy everyone is all one big happy family!!! :D:D:D
Cassandra
12th Aug 2006, 02:43 PM
:weep: I love this story boolprop!!!! :cry:
And yours and lyric's titles is so freakin hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!
midnight05
12th Aug 2006, 03:04 PM
Thanks for updating bp.Now they'll be a family.And it'll be coming to end soonish.*puts on a pouty face*Anyway a wonderful update as always.
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 06:45 PM
Thanks so much everyone! Ill be updating later this afternoon :)
bP
courtney cakes
12th Aug 2006, 07:20 PM
-Napoleon Dynamite Voice- Yessssss.
nerina
12th Aug 2006, 08:28 PM
I've read all the 24 chapters today, I loved them, and I find out it's nearly finished? :(
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 09:14 PM
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To Be Continued
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 09:15 PM
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~boolPropped~
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 09:15 PM
It has been about a year since Carrey and I got married. Mykel was now a teenager and loving every minute of it! We didn’t have to worry much about him though - He was a great kid. He was getting straight As, receiving scholarships by the dozen and is now a recruit for the Military here in Summerset.
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Carrey and I have excelled greatly in both of our professions. Carrey was now the proud owner of 14 restaurants, and I was the Chief of Staff at Summerset Hospital.
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Carrey and I started to try and have a baby shortly after Mykel transitioned into a teenager, and I was finally pregnant! Carrey and I were expecting not only one baby, but two babies We were about to be the proud parents of two twin girls.
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I was finally past everything in my past. I was with my baby boy, my new husband who loved me more than I ever thought was possible, and I had two baby girls on the way. My life was perfect now. It was prefect.
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~The End~
LyricLee
12th Aug 2006, 09:17 PM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh i love you!
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 09:18 PM
AHHHHH I love you too!
bP
LyricLee
12th Aug 2006, 09:19 PM
You know you do have to post a picture of the babies, even tho youre done with this. And the ending shot is so disgustingly cute its not even funny!
sweetbabyhnd
12th Aug 2006, 09:19 PM
Do you mean the story is over??? i will cry if it is
nerina
12th Aug 2006, 09:19 PM
Great ending! I love it!
beeps
12th Aug 2006, 09:19 PM
Yes it has finally come to a close, but please dont cry :(
You know you do have to post a picture of the babies, even tho youre done with this. And the ending shot is so disgustingly cute its not even funny!
Hahaha I will post a pic of the babies :D
bP
PennyTheCorgi
12th Aug 2006, 09:25 PM
Awww, such a good ending and yet so sad..... :cry: why! why must it end!
Are you going to post picture of the babies as tots? or infants?
Montridge
12th Aug 2006, 09:56 PM
Bravo! Well done boolpropped.
discordkitty
12th Aug 2006, 10:08 PM
Okay time to start another story!
IrishGrace
12th Aug 2006, 10:13 PM
wow... that was a great ending :D Can't wait to see pics of the baby girls :D
fransica
12th Aug 2006, 10:27 PM
I'm holding back tears I Kid you not I have not read a story yet that has made me want to cry like this one maybe I have PMS...I loved this story so much when are you going to start on the next one....um...no pressure of course..so.....when are you huh?
greenmtx
12th Aug 2006, 10:34 PM
I truly loved this story..and agree with everyone else: we need pictures of those babies!!! Mykel is very good looking! I hope you are planning on writing more stories :)
natassia_SC
12th Aug 2006, 10:39 PM
awww thats such a nice ending. You;ve done really well writing it and it's one of my favourite stories on here. Well done.
zeldap
12th Aug 2006, 10:47 PM
What a great story. I look forward to reading any other stories you write in the future.
XsnowdropX
12th Aug 2006, 11:10 PM
what?!?! it cant end!!!!!! nooooooo!!!!!!!!!
nice story:) loved it
Luthiies
13th Aug 2006, 12:14 AM
Just one word : Wonderful !
.~*Iris*~.
13th Aug 2006, 12:37 AM
awwww that was so nice!!
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