Unborn Dreams

[Kalorii]

:weep: Oh, such a beautiful end to a beautiful story. But...but...now it's overrrrrr! :cry: You absolutely must write another story. I'm totally in love with your writing and your creativity! I love you so much for writing this and I can't wait to see what story you'll write next! :valentine :luff: :grouphug: :1st

[jenny]

what a great story BP...loved it, and I loved how you just did the pics at the end:)

[xgrrlx]

Well done! :) I don't know what to say that hasn't been said.

I'll be looking out for another one of your stories soon. :)

[jojokid]

Aw that was very nice!
Now that means I have to post my story!
Uh-oh, I better get some pix.
Be on the lookout! (Let's see if Lyric harasses me too, lol)
And we need pix of the babies, bP!
:D

[courtney cakes]

After I read the line that said 'the end' i broke down crying xD my dad thought I was crazy. -huge e-hug for bP- Now I need another story to bother you about!

[magpep21]

Great ending!

[auroraspirit]

No words were needed for the ending chapter in my opinion, you did a wonderful job bp.

What's that saying, a picture can say a million words, or something to that effect. And your pics did just that.

I hope you continue to write :)

Thankyou for sharing such a wonderful journey with us.

Auroraspirit :angel:

[beeps]

Wow, thank you everyone for all your wonderful comments. At the beginning I was crossing my fingers for this story being featured - I had no idea it would grow into such an epidemic that it has. I had such an awesome time writing this and reading what everyone thought about it that its definitely inspired to write another. So thank you all again very much.

bP

[vanillacreme]

Yay bP :) you are officially the coolest person in storyland, xD

[GummiBears]

Its over? No it cannot be over, nope! Now I am more sad then when I found out willy wonka's factory didnt really exist.. :(..
Just kidding, this was a perfect ending to a great story! Seriously this is one of the best stories here :) Im now going to re-read it again from start to finish....hehe.

[applesoveroranges]

Please please PLEase let there be a sequal >< *crosses fingers* I was amazed by this story from beginning till end :]

I'm looking forward to your upcoming projects! ^.^

[leos_pride]

oh i cant belive its over. Thank you for a wonderful story!

[~Squash-buddy-ven~]

I'm speechless... It was an amazing ending.. The pics really described it all so well. It's sad that it's over though, but I'm hoping for a sequel. *hint hint*

[zizismommy_SC]

:lurk: I'm ashamed to say I just started following this story last week. I'm glad though because the waiting would've killed me. This was a great story bp. Mykel is HOT too. :lol: Good job. :bump:

[moonlight_muse]

Great story, and I'm glad it had a happy ending.
Thanks for keeping us entertained :D

[Kayshay]

i luved this story i just would've loved to see the twins.

[midnight05]

It's over,but the ending was just great and I'm glad that everything worked out for Jasmine.She found her son,got a husband and is going to have twin babies.Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

[AnyPika]

THE END :( ?! You just made your biggest fan cry :weep: :weep: such a great story :clap: you're going to do another one, right :D ? Right *puppy eyes*... :D ?

[beeps]

Thanks for the continuing FB everyone :) I wont be writing a sequel, but I will be putting up another story shortly. Just wait patiently haha.

bP

[Pretty_in_Pink_14]

Why does it have to be finished why??? Well please get a new story up asap. please!!! :D

[Gallowsraven]

Boolpropped, this was really good! Thanks for writing an interesting and absorbing story for us all to read!

Cheers! :)

[msjasmine9113]

That was great! *claps enthusiastically*

[Cassandra]

Why must it be over!?!?!?!?!? I loved this story, so you better get to work on the sequel soon or else, an angry mob will be after you.....

[beeps]

Cassandra... Thank you for your continued interest, however I will not be writing a sequel to this story. Im in the process of starting another story which should be up within a few weeks :)

bP

[msjasmine9113]

Another one?! It's like heaven. :D

[beeps]

To fulfill a request...

Here are the twins! Kaley is on the left and her older sister, Laylah, is on the right. They both inderited their father's light brown eyes. Arent they adorable?!?!


http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Unborn%20Dreams%20-%20Story/snapshot_b1b5f4aa_d1ebad8c.jpg
***

bP

[Madra]

Ok, I just found and read this story in one go tonight. Loved it! Almost as much as I loved the story, I enjoyed all the begging and pleading and threats you received :D

I do have to ask though as it's been driving me NUTS for 32 pages.... what the HECK does FB mean?? Nearest I can guess is 'fan brownies' :P (you DID get a lot of baked goods bribes...)

[beeps]

Hahaha FB means "feedback" but I would like it WAY more if it meant something about brownies Mmmmmm

Thanks for reading though, and taking the time to FB ;)

bP

[Madra]

Doh.... now I feel dumb. Brownies are SO much better :D

[auroraspirit]

They are adorable bp, thankyou for sharing :p

Auroraspirit :angel:

[beeps]

Youre welcome! I was asked by several people to post pics of when they grew up, and when I saw how cute they were I couldnt resist :)

bP

[natassia_SC]

aww they're so cute, *wishes my sims twins were that cute*.

[LadySwig]

Thank you for the great story boolProp. I loved every chapter and the twins are adorable

[~Squash-buddy-ven~]

Lovely twins.. They are soo adorable... :D

[moonlitsmiles5]

wow just started reading and it took me almost 2 hours to finish it. I loved this story. This is the first one I have read and I'm glad that I didn't have to wait for all of the updates I don't think I could have waited like everyone else.

Gret job bp:)

[miacovaspet]

Awesome bP! Thanks for sharing the photo of the twins :D

[LyricLee]

Awww the girls!!!!! theyre adorable!

[moonlight_muse]

They're sweet,
thanks for letting us see them :D

[Panique]

I just read this story!! The whole thing!! Eee! It was excellent!

I almost cried when Jasmine had to give up Myk - Baby Boy...

But I am so happy now! Yay! Family! Oh, that was EXCELLENT bP! :p

[obssessed-with-sims2]

I just read the whole of this story *took me 30 minutes* lol and i must say this is the best story ive read its sooooo good and the twins they were sososo cute :bump: 5 Stars *****

[beeps]

Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story, obsessed. I really appreciate it! Thanks for all the lovely comments about the girls as well. They are absolute dears :lovestruc

bP

[discordkitty]

I can't wait for the next story! The twins are adorable :grouphug:

[courtney cakes]

bP, I wish my twins came out so cute -.- all of mine so far have been ugly.

[Froggie27_SC]

Wow! I can't believe its over! It was a wonderful story and I totally enjoyed reading it! Great work boolPropped! =D

[Hana_Chann]

Wow your story was so wonderful! There were several times when I almost cried, it was so emotionally moving! And the twins were so cute!

[[Telectual]]

Yay, I read the whole thing! I loved it so very much! Will you be writing another story?

[beeps]

Thank you everyone SO much for all the continuing FB! It makes me so happy to read all of the amazing compliments everytime I sign on here.

And yes, Jessica, I will most definitely be writing another story - I already have an idea brewing in my tiny little brain :giggler:

bP

[Cassandra]

Cassandra... Thank you for your continued interest, however I will not be writing a sequel to this story. Im in the process of starting another story which should be up within a few weeks :)

bP

WHAT!?!! NOOOOO!!!!! Just crush my hopes and dreams why don't you!?! You're other story better be great or else.....

[AnyPika]

Cassandra, it will be great- bP is going to write it :lol: and her story can't suck :bump:

[cyn_fite]

Well, bP, I have to say that I was truly amazed and in awe at the beautiful life of Jasmine, Baby Boy Mikel, and Carrey that you brought to life on screen for us. It almost seems like you wrote about someone in your neighborhood or mine or any one else's. I am an adopted child (in a sense) and I love the way that you portrayed a mother's unconditional and unselfish love to give her son away to a family that would provide for him like she could not. I am also glad that you ended the story on a very happy note. Many cases, in real life, there is no gold at the end of the rainbow or a rainbow for that matter. I really appreciate what you have done here. I started reading this story yesterday and ended it today on my birthday.

Thank you again and I will be looking for your new story, because by now, I'm sure it is up. Anyway, well done.

[beeps]

Thank you so much, cyn, for all the kind words. Im touched that this story meant so much to you. My new story is not up yet, but Im currently in the process of working on it. Im looking forward to seeing your FB on that one as well. Thanks so much again :valentine

bP

[gaeadaraza]

Wow! I just read the whole story. What a beautiful story. I had to fight back tears at times and found myself scrolling through the feedback looking for your next updates. I did laugh at the impatience of those waiting for your updates - I guess that's the advantage of seeing it a month or so later. :) Good job on the story coming from the heart. It really made me fall in love with the characters. I cant wait to go read some more of your work!

[0PinkPolish0]

WOW i just read it all from beginning to end. Is there gonna be more?

[chronicboredom]

WOW i just read it all from beginning to end. Is there gonna be more?

I think it's ended now but we can always beg for a sequel :D

[0PinkPolish0]

Great idea, lets all beg! It could be about the twins or something!!
http://www.cake-decorating-tips.com/images/anil.jpg
Pleeease, please, it would be so succesful and i baked you this all by myself!!

[chronicboredom]

Yes I think so too, the twins growing up, until they go to college, or starting from college so we can see more how the family fitted together.

[TigerEyes1289]

What a great story! I just read it all the way through. It was awesome. =D

[beeps]

Thanks again, everyone, for your continuing FB. Like I wrote before, I will not be making a sequel to this story. Sequels are ok sometimes, but I feel like the entirety of this story was covered by the chapters I wrote. I appreciate the interest in the continuation of the story, but take this as my final word on the sequel topic. But dont worry, I LOVE writing so another story is right around the corner. Please try and be patient everyone :)

bP

[miacovaspet]

Take your time bp, while we are waiting we can read this one again, it's worth a second read :D

[chronicboredom]

Take your time bp, while we are waiting we can read this one again, it's worth a second read :D

Yes, I agree. :D

[rome_raven]

I just found this story and it was soooooooo good! Hope you write more stories.

[beeps]

Well thank you so much, rome. I love writing, so there will definitely be another one... followed by many more :) Thanks so much for taking the time to FB.

bP

[sims2addict01]

Awww.....teartearsnifflesniffle...Awesome Story GOOD JOB!!!

[IntrepidLlama]

*applause* Beautiful story! I'm sorry to see it end! I just finished reading it for the first time, and I have to say that it's truly one of the most touching, well written stories I've read in a long time. You have a real talent for storytelling, and I hope you continue to post your stories here!

[Mskellyanne_SC]

o my gosh
that was a beautiful story!

it was amazing.
wow. its so touching!

BRAVA!
_mskellyanne

[Essa]

I started reading your story a few weeks ago and I just finished it. I'm glad I won't have to wait for updates.
BTW, I love your style. It's a very touching and beautiful story.
Thanks bP.

[LadyJade6480]

Excellent story, bP!! I just finished reading it while here at work, and was quite moved. You did a wonderful job! Will you post pics of the twins when they're older? They are adorable!!

[beeps]

Wow... Blast from the past! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I posted a picture of the twins when they were toddlers, but I dont have them in my game any longer :( Sorry! But thanks for reading nevertheless and look out for my other stories!

[Applekissis]

Okay..Firsy off I just wanna say Brillant!!! I really enjoyed reading this story..It was funt to read and kept me intrested..Secondly,Your sims are sooooo well made.Bravo to you on that...lol..btw where did you get the earrings Mykel's wearing..


Great story..Gorgeous twins!!

[cmiles8]

Great story, I loved reading it.

[leighthesim_SC]

ahhh i want more i have just read the whole thing i can't believe how much people bribed you (i'll give you sweeties if you write another story)

[beeps]

ahhh i want more i have just read the whole thing i can't believe how much people bribed you (i'll give you sweeties if you write another story)
Haha you got THAT right! Im writing a Legacy Story right now and am thinking about starting another "drama" soon. Thanks for reading :)

btw where did you get the earrings Mykel's wearing..
I think I got them on MTS2, but I cant be sure. Sorry!

[Sizza]

Awww. I just read the story in one(well two) goes. It's lovely! Hoep Mykel doesn't inhert his dad's as*hole-ness

[inviisible]

This story was fantastic! I read it in two sittings! you writing style is addicting, bP! great job! keep up the good work!

[beeps]

Thank you for the lovely compliment, inviisible :D I enjoy writing a lot, so this story was a blast to put together. Im waiting for my inspiration to come back; then Ill be starting another story.

Thank you for reading!

[lotz]

Awwww! i am sobbing! hehe great story one of my top 5

[beeps]

Thanks lotz, Im glad you enjoyed it.

PS I LOVE your avatar :giggler:

[emopunk_boii5]

ohhh! love your story! it has a great ending! btw, how did you make those refrigerators dirty? lol. XD. Jasmine's very pretty. i Love her Hair, where did you get it?

[beeps]

Well, the dirty fridge is a recolor - most likely from MTS2. And which hairstyle of Jasmin's are you asking about?

Thanks for reading by the way ;)

[emopunk_boii5]

oh ok. the one in the introduction.

[Hanbob]

omg thats really scary....
i know someone called jasmine davies in r/l that goes to my school
and me and all my friends hate her (we call her cornface) =]
omg AND she has dark skin and black hair :S
OMGGGGG
:blink: :insane: :omg:
-dies-

okay i just finished reading
tis a very good story <3
even though the main character has the same name as someone i hate and she looks like her too
except she has mankified hair and shes not that pretty =]
:beer: :valentine

[beeps]

oh ok. the one in the introduction.
Eek, I have no clue where I got that one... I would try asking in the WCIF Forum; maybe someone will know there :)

Thanks for reading Hanbob!

[Tixi]

ah!! i just read the whole thing!! fantastic!!!!

[Hanbob]

Eek, I have no clue where I got that one... I would try asking in the WCIF Forum; maybe someone will know there :)

Thanks for reading Hanbob!

:) was a good story :beer:
it scared me though cause of the name and the fact that its someone i know and hate
and
and
and
its was freaky :S
but was a good story :)
i wanted that james dude to come back and stab her again or something =]
that would be cool
OR
maybe kill the kid
cause
he wants revenge or something :)
yeah?
yes i know im twisted :anime:
and
and
and
it would be cool
:)

[simbu]

I sat here reading this story as I waited for tech support for my graphics card.
I skipped the chatter between chapters of course.
But here I am on hold..reading and almost missed the tech guy!
Good read :) Where is the sequel?

[beeps]

Good read Where is the sequel?
No sequel but thanks for reading :)

Thanks Tixi for reading!

[emopunk_boii5]

lol ok. :D

[ferrischick99]

Ok i started reading this story when you were writing it in the beginning and i totally forgot about it until i was bored the other night and wanted to read a good sims story. I love it BP it is the greatest story ever. Its even inspired me to TRY and do my own. Seriously BP you are my inspiration. :)

[Stormy_SC]

I just read your story for the second time. I caught a lot more stuff the second time. I guess I wasn't paying that much attention the first time I read it. You're a great writer! I couldn't even stop reading to go eat! Do you think you'll write again?

[beeps]

Its even inspired me to TRY and do my own. Seriously BP you are my inspiration.
That is one thing every writer loves to hear!

You're a great writer! I couldn't even stop reading to go eat! Do you think you'll write again?
Thank you for the compliments, stormy. I will definitely write again... when I have more time to devote to writing. Its very fun for me :)

[Stolen_Pixelite]

oh....my......GOD... One of the best. This and a few others are inspiring me to do my own....

[SilverStripes]

Great story boolpropped! :D You inspired me a lot! Now I can right a better story! :) Thanks!

[FeNerd]

Wow BP, that was great! I haven't read any stories on here before but I saw this was featured and decided to come and read it and I am so glad I did.

I would love to try and write something myself but don't think I could even manage one entry let alone a full story like yours.

Well done! I may have to go find some more stories to read now... anything to avoid revision ;-)

[Sigma22]

I read this story and I was really sucked in. I really enjoyed it. Hats off to the creator/writer. Well done!

[beeps]

Thanks so much, everyone :) I had so much writing this story, and Im having even more fun reading the comments which are STILL coming. Im happy to read that Ive inspired some of you all to write a story or two of your own.

[Sigma22]

Once again, great job! I have one question that is really important.

Where did you get the computer that the dad is using in the very beginning. :)

[JoeSims]

Great story bP! It was crazy to read. In a good term!

[cassieandra]

Firstly I'd like to say great story! and secondly where did you get the house from that she moves into after college? Or did you make it? Because I like the kitchen and lounge sets..

Anyway it was a fantastic story!

[mforiero]

very nice story! great job!

[beeps]

Where did you get the computer that the dad is using in the very beginning.
Honestly, I have no idea. I dont have it in my game anymore, so it would be better to ask in the WCIF Forum.

where did you get the house from that she moves into after college? Or did you make it?
I made it. If you want to know where I got the furniture, please ask in the WCIF Forum or PM me for specific questions.

Thanks for reading everyone :D