Solventpost
22nd Jul 2010, 8:09 AM
Ok so I've decided to re-edit the whole story instead of writing a new hard to understand chapter. Thanks to all that have read.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indiana1.jpg
You're here now Indiana, don't kid yourself. This little grimy town is now your home. The tacky cement tiles and pebbles, faulty brickwork, and grim sky. It's all yours now Indiana, aren't you lucky.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy2.jpg
"Shut up you sickly little bastard, I don't need your voice in my head too. Say anything else and I will cause you immeasurable pain. I suppose I should meet some people, it's not like I have anything better to do." I said to him.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy3.jpg
Just keep smiling, that's what they all say right? Smile little girl, smile.
"Hello, I'm new in town my name is Indiana Independence." I said to the rather plump lady.
"Very nice to meet you Indiana, I'm Cherish Curious. What brings you to our humble town?"
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy4.jpg
What are you going to tell her? Another Lie?
"I recently graduated from college, and decided that I wanted to see the world a little if you will. I threw a dart on a map and well, here I am."
"Well I'm glad you chose our little town. But just remember big things come in small packages. Speaking of small packages I think that handsome young man is stealing a looksie at you, why don't you go over and talk to him. I need to be going home anyway, science calls!" She said as she turned her heels and quickly walked away.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy5.jpg
Befuddled as to how she associated this very handsome man with a small package, I don't want to know. But none the less I decided to strike up a conversation.
Checking you out huh? You wouldn't go cheating on me now would you?
"I see you've met Mrs.Curious." Said those lovely lips.
"Yes I have, very nice woman. But on the other hand, I haven't met you. I'm Indiana."
"Nice to meet you Indy, I can call you that can't I?"
Ooo Indy, already a pet name. I think that's what I'll call you from now on. Indy Indy Indy.
"Of course." I said as I tried not to blush.
"Well Indy, it's getting a tad late. I think I'm going to have to excuse myself. It was very nice to meet you though. Hope to see you again soon." And then he was gone, as quick as he came into my life he was gone.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy6.jpg
"Why did you have to scare them away?" I asked.
Scare them away, my dear child..
"I am Not your child."
Now now dear, I didn't scare them away. Ever think it might be Your fault? Maybe it's how you carry yourself, maybe it's because...Well we won't have you worrying your pretty little head over nothing now will we.
"I'm done talking to you. I'm going to go get some food."
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy8.jpg
"This town has a certain charm, but at the same time it's like it's not real. It feels like I was placed here by some outside force, not drawn in by the weather. Not that I mind. I could get use to this. Long walks through town, being by the lake, beautiful sunsets, hell even the air smells nice. But I don't know if that's going to be possible. Oh well I'll just have to enjoy it for now, not that I'm complaining." I thought to myself.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/indy10.jpg
"World champion waffles huh? Oh I am so going to pig out."
Just a note Indy is a mixed breed, in that her parents are the spawn of some MTS sims and other sites, all bred in CAS until I created the perfect sim. Also any questions concerning CC, or anything really let me know. I'd be more then happy to answer.
Constructive criticism welcome!
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indiana1.jpg
You're here now Indiana, don't kid yourself. This little grimy town is now your home. The tacky cement tiles and pebbles, faulty brickwork, and grim sky. It's all yours now Indiana, aren't you lucky.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy2.jpg
"Shut up you sickly little bastard, I don't need your voice in my head too. Say anything else and I will cause you immeasurable pain. I suppose I should meet some people, it's not like I have anything better to do." I said to him.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy3.jpg
Just keep smiling, that's what they all say right? Smile little girl, smile.
"Hello, I'm new in town my name is Indiana Independence." I said to the rather plump lady.
"Very nice to meet you Indiana, I'm Cherish Curious. What brings you to our humble town?"
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy4.jpg
What are you going to tell her? Another Lie?
"I recently graduated from college, and decided that I wanted to see the world a little if you will. I threw a dart on a map and well, here I am."
"Well I'm glad you chose our little town. But just remember big things come in small packages. Speaking of small packages I think that handsome young man is stealing a looksie at you, why don't you go over and talk to him. I need to be going home anyway, science calls!" She said as she turned her heels and quickly walked away.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy5.jpg
Befuddled as to how she associated this very handsome man with a small package, I don't want to know. But none the less I decided to strike up a conversation.
Checking you out huh? You wouldn't go cheating on me now would you?
"I see you've met Mrs.Curious." Said those lovely lips.
"Yes I have, very nice woman. But on the other hand, I haven't met you. I'm Indiana."
"Nice to meet you Indy, I can call you that can't I?"
Ooo Indy, already a pet name. I think that's what I'll call you from now on. Indy Indy Indy.
"Of course." I said as I tried not to blush.
"Well Indy, it's getting a tad late. I think I'm going to have to excuse myself. It was very nice to meet you though. Hope to see you again soon." And then he was gone, as quick as he came into my life he was gone.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy6.jpg
"Why did you have to scare them away?" I asked.
Scare them away, my dear child..
"I am Not your child."
Now now dear, I didn't scare them away. Ever think it might be Your fault? Maybe it's how you carry yourself, maybe it's because...Well we won't have you worrying your pretty little head over nothing now will we.
"I'm done talking to you. I'm going to go get some food."
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/Indy8.jpg
"This town has a certain charm, but at the same time it's like it's not real. It feels like I was placed here by some outside force, not drawn in by the weather. Not that I mind. I could get use to this. Long walks through town, being by the lake, beautiful sunsets, hell even the air smells nice. But I don't know if that's going to be possible. Oh well I'll just have to enjoy it for now, not that I'm complaining." I thought to myself.
http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/deepskysims/IndependenceLegacyGen1/indy10.jpg
"World champion waffles huh? Oh I am so going to pig out."
Just a note Indy is a mixed breed, in that her parents are the spawn of some MTS sims and other sites, all bred in CAS until I created the perfect sim. Also any questions concerning CC, or anything really let me know. I'd be more then happy to answer.
Constructive criticism welcome!