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18th Feb 2009, 7:29 PM
Intro : Hey everyone just wanted to give you guys a little shout out and say that this is my first sim story, so my pictures are not the best. However am currently doing the second chapter and have made a few adjustments. I've used some tricks and made the pictures larger and the quailty will be much better the next time around, I promise. With that I present you, The Emily Bronson Chronicles. I hope to hear your feedback and really hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing this story. Hopefully youll want to read more and as long as you do, I'll continue to write more.
CHAPTER 1: LIFE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT.
If they ever had to make bio story about me, it would be called, “Life in the Cubical. An Emily Bronson Story.” But then again who would want to write about boring little me? Emily Bronson. The shy girl In the back of the class. The smart and nerdy little girl from Foothills’. Face it Em, you’re a nobody. Oh well life could get a lot worse right? Or maybe it was just about too…….
Here we go again Em, another day in the cubical! WooHoo! Someone throw the confetti! Like I said, this is my life. What you thought I was joking? Jokes are for comedians.
Work-Alcoholic? Check. Boring? Check. Wonderful life? Hmm, guess I’ll have to answer that one later. Emily Bronson sat there in her little cubical puzzled, wondering if she could go back in time, maybe should would. Maybe if she could go back in time she would have been “that girl.” You know, The Girl. The girl who walked around royal. The Queen B as they called it. But the truth was, Emily Bronson would never be that girl. She could never go back in time and her life was a dull existence. Emily is the kind of girl who can’t stand up for herself.
Speaking of Queen Bee’s, here comes Cruella De’vil herself. Yes if the devil was a female it would have been Betty Prado. Sim Corp’s Very own new COO. After Mrs. Sterling died, Betty was promoted and it seems she was going to be making some new adjustments. VERY SOON. Betty strolled over to Emily. “Emily, I need to see you in my office.” Betty was gone before she could even rise. GOODNESS, she probably forgot to bring up those files to her last night. I knew I forgot something. Emily quickly pulled out her book of records.
"Good afternoon Ms.Prado. You wanted to see me?"
"Yes Emily take a seat."
“As the brand new chief operating officer here at Sim Corp. It is my job to create and maintain a positive flow of work by utilizing my resources and facilities of what I have available. There for your services are no longer available. You can pick your last check up at the front office.” Emily sat there shocked. “Ms. Prado I don’t understand? I mean how-“ Before she could continue she was cut off.
“What don’t you understand Ms. Bronson? Your services are no longer needed. Now Good day Ms. Bronson.”
How could this happen? I mean what did I do wrong? I know I have a boring life but if there was one good thing that I was good at it was my job!” Suddenly she heard Betty walking over to her. Emily began to cry harder and harder. Maybe she was going to give her job back again. Psshh yea right. Or maybe she was going to comfort her.
"Oh by the way, don’t forget to clean out your cubical."
[Emily looks at the reader]
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU LOOKING AT?
Okay, so I got a little rowdy earlier….its okay. Am having a bad day. I lost my job for god sakes. Emily arrives at her cozy coz apartment.
I mean…its not easy when you loose your job. What was I suppose to do scream and slap Betty? Hmmm that would have been nice. How am I going to tell Brad?
She sat there in her car. Wondering how her dearly beloved boyfriend was going to take the news. It was times like these Emily wished she was a smoker. But Emily wasn’t that type of girl. Not one bit. “Brad…I lost my job.” That was simple right? “Honey…I lost my job.” She sat there saying lines to her self over and over.
Emily walked into her little cozy apartment. Which smelled like lavender. But for some reason it smelled different today. She heard a noise. A noise that sounded like laughter.”BRAD?” she said in a soft mild tone.
Emily walked into the her room hoping to find Brad there watching tv. However she walked in only to find her dearly beloved boyfriend with another woman.
"Whats going on here Brad?"
Brad and this mysterious woman parted. Emily stood there stunned, shocked. She couldn’t believe it. First her job now this? Stand up for yourself Em. She thought to herself. But she didn’t. She couldn’t, Emily wasn’t that strong of a person. Brad strode over to her. “WHATS YOUR PROBLEM!?” She had to snap herself to back to simality. “Excuse me?” he sighed. “Cant you knock? Huh? This realtionship is over! Its been over. In fact, get out my apartment! GET OUT! OUT!”
“Wait?What? Brad…I..I..I don’t understand.” She threw her hands on top of her hand as if her head was going to explode.
"No you don’t understand. GET OUT! LEAVE. BIZ OUNCE. ADIOS!”
But instead of standing up for herself. She looked down to the floor and left. Left to nowhere. Just as she was a nowhere nobody.
19th Feb 2009, 6:35 AM
poor Emily, maybe we'll see a change in her!
19th Feb 2009, 6:51 AM
Oh.... my god!
What a twist :D
19th Feb 2009, 7:00 AM
Wow im very interested. Please update soon gotta know what happens lol :D
19th Feb 2009, 7:51 AM
Ooooooooooooooooh this looks interesting. I sympathise with you, Emily....
19th Feb 2009, 9:08 PM
So there she was. Miss Emily Bronson. Miss because as we both know, she wasnt gonna be a Mrs. Any time soon. A nobody at a nowhere place. Not only was she a nobody. But she was a unemployed and not to mention boyfriendless nobody.
She sat there on the bench. She didn’t believe she could cry anymore. What was it Friday the 13th? Bad luck day of the month? Or so it seemed. I mean she didn’t stand up for self at work against that bitch Betty. She didn’t stand up for herself against her boyfriend. Who she just caught sleeping with another woman in HER bed and in HER apartment. Wait? What? How could she do this to herself. Brad told her to get out of HER apartment and like an animal obeys there master she did. What was next? What could possilby happen next?
She heard a noise in the trees. She could feel eyes watching her.
He slowly walked over to her. She didn't move or flinch.
“Excuse me….” he said in his raspy voice. “Do you have any change?”
Emily looked up, eyes blood-shot. “I don’t am sorry but I –“ before she could finish. He began to harass her.
"BITCH GIVE ME YOUR MONEY!"
She could almost laugh but her insides began to tumble and it felt like her world was coming down. Suddenly a voice came from the shadows. “ I wouldn’t do that if I were you.” The voice was smooth and soft.
He stood beautifully as can be. Emily’s heart leaped as if it were going to bust out of her chest. The mugger walked slowly over to the myseterious man.
"What did you say?"
Emily watched…could this really be happening? Please god let this be a dream. Let me wake up any second now. Before she knew it the man kicked the mugger in the stomach.
This pedestrian man began to grab the mugger by the hair and sock him in the face.
Emily watched terrified. She’d never seen a real fight. Not to mention not one right before her eyes. Then the man started to bite the muggers neck and blood began spilling out.
The mugger began to shreik and cry out. Emily stood frozen. She couldn’t move a limb.
The man layed there dead on the ground. It was at this very moment she began to wonder if this was a prank or was it really Friday the 13th. She wanted to run as fast as she could but she couldn’t. The man wiped the blood of his mouth and looked directly at her. He walked over to her smoothly. Almost as if her were floating in mid air. She rose and began to walk slowly to him. Meeting each other in the center. She couldn’t believe she was doing this. She tried to tell herself not to move but for some weird reason she still couldn’t stop her self from walking to him.
“I suppose your going to kill me next?” She could hear her own heart beat. He looked so charming yet. How could she possilby think that? I mean she just watched this weirdo kill another man and Emily Bronson thought HE was charming?
“The names Louis and you are?”
She stumbled for a second then said, “Em-Em-Emily.”
He bowed in such an sophistacted manor.
"Nice to meet you, Emily." As he starred into her eyes its seems as if he slowly started to vanish into thin air. Almost as if he were beginning to turn into a ghost vanishing into the mist of the cold air. Emily began to cry hysterically. But there was something going on in the back of her mind. The wonder of one question.
Who wouldn’t want to write about Emily Bronson?......
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?..............................
19th Feb 2009, 11:10 PM
YAY update and vampire yay i love vampires. This is getting even more interesting i cant wait.
19th Feb 2009, 11:13 PM
Is he going to turn Emily vampish????!!!!!
This is fascinating, more soon please.
21st Feb 2009, 6:43 PM
Hey Guys ! Well Glad To Hear The Good Feedback...gonna Be Updating Reall Soon.
21st Feb 2009, 7:34 PM
Emily needed to get her head straight. Not only had she lost her job at SimCorp. But her boyfriend dumped her for some tramp. Not to mention what she saw. I mean she was almost mugged and was saved by a vampire! A vampire! I mean one thing Emily Bronson was not, was crazy. After this mysterious vampire named Louis vanished she headed to the local Starbucks. Coffee would help her get through the night. Not to mention she was gonna have to find somewhere to stay tonight.
Emily walked in and the barista working behind the counter starred at her indisabelief. She looked as if she walked through a hurricane. Her eyes blood-shot and her face in shocked. She quickly dragged herself to the closest couch and dropped herself in it. What else could simply go wrong tonight? She thought.
The barista walked over to her and sat next to her. She looked at his name tag. His name was josh. “Hey you okay?” Emily couldn’t even spurt out words. Then finally she found her voice again. “Yea am-am-okay.” The way he looked at her. He could definitely tell she was lying. “Well can I make you something? An Americano? Maybe with an add shot? It’ll be on the house…or maybe something sweet. “Well for a second…. after all she been through just hours ago something or someone was actually being really nice to her. However this Louis had saved her life. But she couldn’t mention that. I mean how often does news about vampires pop up? NEVER. She wasn’t going to take the chance making herself look crazy or at least not at the moment. “Um am having a really really bad day and you know I just have to-“He chuckled, “Hey look, we all have bad days. But a girl as pretty as you shouldn’t have a frown on that face. So I’ll tell you what, am going to go take out the trash and when I get back am going to make you something extra sweet. Just like you and maybe, just maybe we can talk about what your going through. As long as your okay with that…umm I didn’t get a name?” She suddenly turned a rosy red and blushed. “Emily.” She said. Josh laughed, “Emily…what a beautiful name. Well when I get back be ready to let it all out.” He rose off the couch and grabbed her by the arm and dragged her to the front of the counter. “In the mean time use my lab top over there to keep yourself company. I just got to take out the trash okay?”
As Josh the barista walked behind the counter to take out the trash. She quickly strode over to the table to the laptop. She went to Google and typed in REAL VAMPIRES. She couldn’t help but wonder about vampires. She herself was still in disbelief about what she saw. OMG she thought. Should she go to the cops? Yea right…they probably send her to a mental institution.
Josh walked outside to the alley.
“Dude am getting sooooo layed tonight! Bro by the end of tonight I’m a have this dumb broad eating out of the palm of my hands...haha whatever fool..don’t bother calling me tonight. Im'a be too busy eating the pussy cat! Ha-ha later fool.” He hung up his cell phone and emptied the trash. He heard a rattle in the back ground. He quickly spun around. He saw a shadow at the end of the alley. “Hey can I help you?” he said in a more strict tone.
The shadow began to walk up closer. “What the fuck you want man? Cut that shit out.” But the mysterious man stayed quiet and slowly continued to walk up closer. “Hey ima have to ask you to leave.”
Before Josh could realize this man was standing right behind him. Josh quickly turned.”What the fuck man? You’re creeping me the fuck out!” Josh started to back away towards the door.
“Your blood so smooth and thick. I can smell it seeping through your skin.” Josh put his hands on his hips. “Alright man you can stop. Hey if I messed up your coffee I can remake it for you. I swear man it’s not a problem.” Then a more feminine voice spoke out coming from behind him.
“FOR GODSAKES DRAKE…LETS EAT…AM STARVING!”
Josh quickly spun around to see a woman behind him.
Her eyes unlike anything he’d seen before and her skin so pale so white. As if she was dead. He began to panic. He couldn’t move as fast as he would have liked. It was almost as if he were stuck and paralyzed. He slowly backed up and fell into the corner. His heart beating faster and faster. The man and woman cornered him. The man closed his eyes and could smell his blood through the breeze.
Then the dead looking man looked down at josh. His eyes piercing down on him. “LET’S EAT.”
21st Feb 2009, 8:58 PM
really like this keep it up . love anything with vampires lol. but got to ask is there sumitup with pics there nt showing up for me.
21st Feb 2009, 11:39 PM
thanxs angel4rab 4 the comment..hope you guys like it soo far...love the feedback! hehe...umm the pics should show up.
22nd Feb 2009, 12:17 AM
they don't >_>
Infact none picture appear anymore from other chapter too >_>
22nd Feb 2009, 12:31 AM
:[ i will update quickly!
22nd Feb 2009, 9:23 AM
Hey Everyone....first Things First..i Must Say That Its Been A Challange For Me With This Story...lol Having The Worst Of Luck Putting It On And Just Recently I Lost All The Pics..but There On Here Now! Yay
I Hope You Guys Like It...lots More Coming! Please Keep Me Updated On What You Like So Far Or What You Think...gives Me Motivation Lol
23rd Feb 2009, 6:39 AM
I really love this story those vampires are cool. Its like they are her guardians or something they keep protecting her. Anywho i love it keep it up.
23rd Feb 2009, 9:41 PM
Emily sat there at the laptop wondering about what had happened tonight. That barista guy still hadn’t come back. This was ridiculous she thought, a man had lost her life. She needed to go call the police immediately. She quickly ran outside and grabbed the phone.
But she couldn’t find the numbers are had the will power to dial them. They would think she was mental. Why? Why her? Is all she could think about? The wind began to pick up and it gave her shivers up and down her spine.
“Going to call the cops?” a familiar voice said. Emily quickly turned around. Only to find her worst fear standing to the side of her.
“YOU!” she said to him. “What will the police think when you tell them a Vampire saved your life? Huh?” she didn’t know what to say. He was so smooth and calm. “Emily...You need to come with me. Your life is in grave danger.” But before he could continue on she found the energy to run away from him. As she ran she heard Louis shout her name.
She ran in hoping to tell the customers. That way she would have more evidence and witnesses. But there were no customers. Not even the cute barista guy named josh. She was greeted by two dead looking people. Emily stood there frozen.
The dead man locked his eyes on her. The bald woman next to him stood there gracefully with blood on her lips and face. Then Louis walked in behind her standing next to her. Almost as if in defense.
“Louis….What a pleasant surprise.” Louis eyed them in a not so welcoming manor. “I wish I could say the same.” Louis said coldly. The woman grinned starring at Emily and Louis. Her grin so evil it gave Emily the chills. “We’ve come for the girl.” Louis laughed. “I’ll be taking the girl…” The two began to laugh at Louis. “What makes you think that you’ll be taking her? There are two of us….and only one of you.” They stepped a little closer approaching them.
“TWO!” a voice spoke out. “There are two of us…not one. Three if you count the girl.” Emily turned only to find a young beautiful looking man.
He quickly stepped in front of Emily. Louis moved closer in front of the both.
“Like I said….I’ll be taking the girl.” Louis said. The man stood in defiance as if at any moment he could have attacked. “Follow me the young looking man said. They began moving closer to the door. “This isn’t over…and as for you.. I’ll be catching up with you later beautiful.”
24th Feb 2009, 2:59 AM
Weird...but awsome lol. Love the update.
24th Feb 2009, 7:33 AM
is that a weird good or bad weird? Lol
24th Feb 2009, 11:58 AM
is that a weird good or bad weird? Lol
Lol sorry its a good weird. I really like the story i just was surprised by this chapter and when i get surprised i tend to say weird lol.
24th Feb 2009, 2:19 PM
yay update lol.oh really good, wonder what they want her for and its really weird in a good way.
26th Feb 2009, 7:39 PM
Emily felt something warm. It was as if everything was so comforting. Then flashes of Ms.Prado firing her filled her mind. Flashes of Brad and Louis. Who were those two menacing Goth’s and who was the other guy. These questions swarmed her mind. Those eyes and those fangs. The guy at the park being bitten. She awoke with a scream. “Hello?” a soft voice came. Emily sat up readjusting her glasses. She realized there was a young woman sitting in the chair across from her. “Hello?” the woman called out. Emily made a small startled noise scarred that the young woman could have been a vampire. But she was so normal looking. “Emily is that you?” she said. Emily sat there staring at her. “Yes and who are you?” she demanded. “Oh...you must be awake now?” The young girl looked confused. “Well yea. Am sitting right here in front of you.” The young girl began to laugh. “Am sorry I can’t see. Am blind.” Emily quickly apologized with a, “Oh my god. Am so sorry. I didn’t know. It’s just well it’s just that-“the young polite girl quickly responded with, “Its fine. My name is Lorelei. But you can call me Lori for short.”
“Thank you Lorelei or I mean Lori.” Emily said. It felt so weird. The woman’s eyes were totally open and most of all she was staring at her. She seemed normal or at least Emily was hoping. “Excuse me umm Lori. Where am I exactly?” Lori smiled at her. “In the woods far from the city limits. This is my home. You’re safe with me. After you fainted back there at the coffee shop Louis brought you here.” Emily shook her head. “I don’t believe it.” Lori stayed quiet then said, “Believe what? Believe in vampires?” Emily sat there shocked. The word vampires made her ears ring. Emily began to cry. “Yesterday I was an average girl living the average life.” Tears began streaming down her face. “WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON? I HAVE QUESTIONS THAT NEED-“before she could continue another voice interrupted.
“Answers.” The voice was all too familiar. “Answers make the world turn.” Louis stood there in the room. Emily looked up to find him starring down at her. “What do you want from me?” Emily said to him. Louis took a step closer. “Come with me.” He stretched his arm out and Emily followed.
He led her deep into the woods. She should have been scared but for some odd reason Emily wasn’t. Finally they came to a stop. “I need answers.” She demanded at once. Louis had his back to her. Emily waited for him to respond. “What and who were those people back there?” She waited for his response.
“There is entirely different world among the world you think your living Emily. It’s all around you in the same air you and I breathe and in the same daily existence you and I both share. However you and I live on opposite sides.” Emily looked down to the ground and then back up at him. Louis dazed up at the clouds then back at Emily. Who looked desperate for more answers? “We are the eternal damned….bound to forever live in the shadows. To feed off the blood of living humans…it’s the only way my kind survives. I myself respect the living and only feed off those who are injustice to others. Not all of my kind respect humans…in fact very little associate with humans. Humans to us are no less than dogs are to you. In fact you humans are less than a dog to us. But what if I said that the blood running through your veins had the power to change that. To make my kind from nightwalkers to daywalkers. The power, the human raced enslaved. The world would parish beneath our knees and the world would be coming to an end as we know it. You’re the last living descendent of a bloodline that can allow us to be more powerfull than ever. A power that can not be allowed to fall in the wrong hands. Your mother was said to be the last.”
“My mother? I don’t even know my mother. This all doesn’t make sense none of it.” Louis stepped closer in towards her. Emily looked up at him. “Why did you save me?”
“Because, we had our chance at life. I was once human…long ago.” He turned away then looked back at Emily. “I will not allow the human race to end….not like this.” Emily took a step closer. “Am sorry it’s just a little all too much too take in right now. My whole life I’ve never even seen a picture of my mother or known anything about her. Then all of a sudden am suppose to believe that am some kind of I don’t know some kind of prodigy? I don’t believe in vampires but I know what I’ve seen tonight. This is some kind of nightmare I just can’t wake up from….so what now? Huh?” She stood there waiting for an answer or hoping this was all some kind of dream. “Who were those people back there?” Louis quickly looked up to the sky. “It is almost dawn…. I must go. I promise to return and explain more. You must stay here for your own safety.” Emily wanted so much more to be explained. “Don’t worry they won’t find you...your safe here with Lorelei.” She looked down at the ground for just the slightest second and when she raised her head. He was gone…..
Emily walked into the warm home feeling the warmth of the fire. “Emily?” Lorelei called out. Emily walked over and sat across from the chair across from her.
“How are you feeling?” Lorelei asked. “Exhausted, Scared, Frustrated and lost.” Lorelei smiled. “Well there’s a shower and a bedroom waiting for you and clean clothes.” Emily smiled.
“Thank you. But I don’t know if I will be able to sleep….. Am still lost and don’t understand anything.” Lorelei quietly waited for her to finish. “Don’t worry Emily… I can assure you. You’re in good hands.”
27th Feb 2009, 9:58 AM
Wow great chapter this is getting more and more interesting every chapter. Im looking forward to see what is going to happen.
28th Feb 2009, 3:40 PM
Yay! I love Lori haha!
1st Mar 2009, 7:00 AM
“Where is the girl?” the man demanded. He sat there with his long wavy hair. His eyes gazed upon a prize that was not there. “My lord……an unexpected” He spoke up louder. “WHERE IS THE GIRL?” The two remained silent. “Unable to retrieve her lord.”
The bald woman spoke up from behind him. “My lord we had a disturbance…another vampire.” Vincent analyzed them for a quick second. “Vampire?” he said. “Louis…….and his young apprentice took the girl. They must have followed her there.” Then the vampire in the trench coat known as Drake began to feel a burst in his insides. He began to struggle as if her were going to burst open. “You have failed me and you’re blinded with arrogance.”
“You will not fail me again for next time you will truly not awaken from death…find the girl and bring her to me….alive!”
The door busted open and in came a man leading a small group trailing him from behind. “My lord, we have found the girl.”
1st Mar 2009, 7:04 AM
I Just Wanted 2 Say Thanxs For All The Good Feedback And I Just Wanted 2 Say I've Read And Seen Lots Of Different Stories On Here And There Amazing! But With My Story I Kinda Wanna Doo Sumthing Really Different With How I Tell It.....i Just Wana Show A Different Side Of Story Telling .... With Twist And Sim Action As I Like To Call It ... I Dunno I Just Wana Open And Unleash My Imagination!
1st Mar 2009, 7:32 AM
Emily layed there on her bed unable to sleep. So many things filled her mind. She began to wonder who really was Emily Bronson. Was she the average girl from Foothills or was she much more than that. Did she belong to this fantasy world of the underworld? Who was her mother? She couldn’t wait for the sun to come up and go away. So Louis could tell her everything. She finally closed her eyes. Hoping that the answers or something would come into her mind.
Remember…Remember…Remember. She told herself over and over…flashes of herself as a young girl came into her mind. Swarming into her dreams. Then it was as if something broke and shattered on the floor. Emily’s eyed widen. She couldn’t help wonder what or who it was. She quietly stepped out of bed and strode over to the door. She could hear Lorelei saying something but couldn’t quite make it out.
“Emily? Is that you?” Lorelei asked.
“Emily?” she asked again. A cold breeze slipped into the the room. Lorelei could feel the fire begin to tinkle. Lorelei heard laughter. “Who’s there?” she said at once. “Where’s the girl.” A voice came out.
Emily walked out only to find her worst fear right before her. Emily stopped dead in her tracks. “Well hello beautiful…” Drake said.
“RUN EMILY!! RUN!” She left out the door and ran as fast as she could. She didn’t look back...not once. Emily came to a hault where she and Louis where talking. All she had to do was hide until sunset. It would not belong. Then two shadows flew by her almost making her fall down to the floor.
“Leaving soooo soon baby?The fun is just beginning” the woman said.
“LEAVE ME ALONE!” she cried out. She quickly tried to run but the bald woman blocked her off. They began circling her. They’re fangs glimmering through there mouths. Then a noise from the bushes came. All Emily saw was a stream of white fly from the trees and out into the open. Emily stood in shock forgetting that the man known as Drake was behind her. Drake began to back away. It appeared to be some kind of cat like creature. The creature kicked Jade and began clawing her face.
Drake quickly made an attempt to grab Emily, Who was still in shocked. Drake looked up into the clouds and hissed, “Louis!” Drake dissapeared into the shadow of the trees. Louis flew into the scene and grabed the bald woman who was bleeding from the scratches on her face. Louis grabed the woman and began draining her blood from her neck.
Louis threw the woman onto the floor leaving her dead. “Emily..” but before he could finish. His eyes gazed up upon the sky which the sun began rising. “I must leave.” He vanished before Emily could say something. The sun fully shined and Emily stood there. Emily turned only to find Lorelei standing in front of her naked.
“YOU BETTER TELL ME WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!”
1st Mar 2009, 5:31 PM
Wow so Lorelei is like a cat person or something. Thats so cool. Just keeps getting better. Cant wait for more.
1st Mar 2009, 5:58 PM
I thought there was sumthing funny about her, cant wait for the next update!!
3rd Mar 2009, 7:44 PM
“I CAN EXPLAIN EMILY..BUT FIRST WE NEED TO LEAVE.” Emily put her hands on her hips. “NO I HAD ENOUGH…. I WANT ANSWERS!” Then it was as something was coming through the trees fast. A black Escalade came from the dirt trail and into the open fast. The driver, which appeared to be some kind of guard came out holding a weapon at them. The guard fired and hit Lorelei. Emily let out a loud shriek holding her hands in the air. Then from the back car door a blonde woman stepped out. The guard remained aimed at Emily. “Don’t worry…shes not dead. Shes been tranqualized.”
“Come with me Emily…. I can help you.” Emily took a step back. “No way.” Emily bagan taking more and more steps back. The woman laughed. “We can do it the easy way or the hard way. Your choice….” Emily Began looking at the guards who began pulling out large guns. Emily spun around and headed toward the entrance into the woods. “STOP HER!” The only thing she remember was hitting the dirt. She blacked out completley.
It must have been hours. Emily was in and out of sleep. At moments she could feel the car move or hit bumps. She couldn’t even have enough energy to fully open her eyes. She remember seeing lots of trees through the window. Then she awoke to that womans voice. “I’ve brought you a present brother.” The way the woman said it was as If Emily was a piece of meat. She opened her eyes. She awoke only to find herself in a nice room with a man in a mask with long blonde hair slicked down his back. His beautiful light blue eyes shinning through the silver mask.
“Where am I and who are you people?” she demanded. “Hello and welcome…I am Maxmillian Worthington the sixth. I see you’ve met my siter Helena. We’ve been searching for you a very long time.” Emily starred back and remembered what Louis had said about her being some kind of prodigy and her blood being special. “You have the wrong person…am nobody…am just Emily Bronson.”
The man in the mask chuckled. “My dear girl we are not fools…” Emily shook her head. “What exactly do you want?” she waited. “You don’t know do you? Such a shame…..all that power.” Emily shook her head. “They’ll come for me..” she said almost as if she were threating them. The man laughed again. “Let them come….”
“Take her away from my presence.” The guards uplifted Emily. Emily began struggling to free away but it was no use.
“What shall we do with her brother?” Helena asked.
“We need to sacrifice her….her blood is the only way to salvation.”
“brother I truly deeply…..want her eyes.” Helena said.
“You shall get them sister….you shall get them indeed.”
4th Mar 2009, 2:49 AM
Well that was unexpected. Great update.
5th Mar 2009, 4:40 AM
Poor Emily, will she ever catch a break?
9th Mar 2009, 7:40 PM
THE SUN HAD JUST FALLEN OVER THE MOUTAINS. LOUIS QUICKLY ARRIVED ONTO THE SCENE WERE LORELEI WAS. TRISTIAN WAS AT HIS SIDE AS WELL. HE ARRIVED TO FIND HER LYING ON THE GROUND.
LOUIS: LORELEI WHERES THE GIRL?
LORELEI: THEY TOOK HER AWAY BEFORE I COULD DO ANYTHING… I FAILED YOU LOUIS….I FAILED TO PROTECT HER.
LORELEI: NO...NO...NOT...NOT VAMPIRES…A WOMAN...GUARDS...
LOUIS: SHE’S BEEN TRANQULIZED...
TRISTIAN: HOW WOULD YOU KNOW THAT MASTER?
LOUIS TOOK A DART FROM HER NECK AND HELD IT OUT TO HIM. TRISTIAN TOOK IT AND BEGAN OBSERVING IT.
LOUIS: DON’T WORRY YOU HAVENT FAILED US….WE MUST FIND HER.
TRISTIAN: BUT HOW?
LOUIS: THE SAME WAY I FOUND EMILY….THE ORACLE CAN HELP US.
LOUIS LOOKED DOWN AT LORELEI WHO HE WAS HOLDING IN HIS ARMS.
LOUIS: WE MUST GET HER OUT OF HERE. ANYBODY COULD BE RETURNING. THEN WE MUST QUICKLY LEAVE TO FIND THE ORACLE. BURN THE HOUSE. WE MUST NOT LEAVE ANY TRACES.
TRISTIAN NODDED AND VANISHED OFF.THEY ARRIVED DEEP INTO THE WOODS. THE MOON WAS SHIMMERING DOWN THROUGH THE WOODS. THEY CONTIUED DEEPER AND DEEPER UNTIL THEY WERE LOST. THEY FINALLY ARRIVED UPON A COTTAGE AND A SWAMP SURROUNDED THE HOUSE AND THE SIDES OF THE TRAIL THAT LED TO IT. OWLS COULD BE HEARD AND OTHER CREATURES OF THE NIGHT. THEY WALKED IN. CANDLES LIT AND EVERYOTHER STEP WAS A LOUD CREAK FROM THE ROTTEN WOOD.
LOUIS NODDED TOWARDS HER.
LOUIS: I NEED YOUR HELP….ONCE MORE.
ORACLE: TAKE A SEAT.
LOUIS STRODE OVER TO HER AND SAT ACROSS.
LOUIS: I NEED TO FIND THE GIRL….
ORACLE: LOUIS...LOUIS...THE PATH YOU ARE TAKING WILL ONLY DAMN YOU TO END OF DAYS.
LOUIS: I’VE LIVED LONG ENOUGH TO SEE MUCH IN TIME….NOW PLEASE. HELP ME.
ORACLE: YOU ARE SO DESTIN TO SAVE THIS GIRL…ARENT YOU?
THE ORACLE MADE A SMALL LAUGH.
ORACLE: YOU MIGHT BE DEAD…..BUT YOU HAVE THE HEART OF A HUMAN. YOUR DESTINY WILL ONLY LEAD YOU TO THE END OF THE ROAD. BUT IF YOU’RE TRUE DESIRE IS WHAT YOU SAY IT IS. LET YOUR HEART GUIDE YOU TO SALVATION…LOOK INTO THE BOWL…ONLY YOU’RE HEART AND PASSION WILL FIND HER.
LOUIS LOOKED DOWN INTO THE BOWL. THERE WAS NOTHING. THEN A SILVER LIQUID MIST BEGAN BREWING UP IN THE BOWL. LOUIS WAS SUCKED INTO A TRANCE. HE SAW FLASHES OF EMILY BEING TAKEN AWAY. HE COULD FEEL AND SEE HER HURTING. LOCKED IN CHAINS. TRISTIAN AND LORELEI HAD TO PULL HIM AWAY.
ORACLE: DID YOUR HEART GUIDE YOU?
LOUIS: WARLOCK…..A WARLOCK TOOK HER. WE MUST GO...
HE QUICKLY STOOD. HE BEGAN WALKING OUT THEN STOPPED AND LOOKED BACK AT THE ORACLE.
LOUIS: THANK YOU
9th Mar 2009, 8:10 PM
brilliant update, totally luvin it.
9th Mar 2009, 8:29 PM
oooo awesome update!
10th Mar 2009, 11:42 AM
Great update that oracle is creepy looking but i expected her to be.
12th Mar 2009, 7:20 AM
DRAKE WALKED INTO THE ROOM.
Drake: “I HAVE GIVEN YOU YOUR REWARD NOW I WANT MINE.”
WILLIAM: YOU HAVE DONE WELL DRAKE…YOU SHALL RECEIVE YOUR REWARD..BUT FIRST THINGS FIRST. I MUST DRAIN THE POWER FROM THE GIRL.
DRAKE: I HAVE BETRAYED MY COVENT OF VAMPIRES. THEY WILL HUNT FOR ME.
WILLIAM: AS POWERFULL AS I WILL BE…..THE VAMPIRES WILL FEAR ME…EVEN THE ELDERS. NO ONE WILL MATCH MY POWERS.
EMILY LASHED OUT WITH PAIN AND TEARS. CRYS AND MOANS. SHE COULDN’T TAKE ALL THE PAIN. HELENA SLAPPED HER ACROSS THE FACE ONCE MORE.
HELENA: YOUR EYES DARLING….THERE SOON TO BE MINE..
SHE LAUGHED OUT. SHE PULLED OUT A KNIFE AND BEGAN CARVING A STAR ON HER CHEEK. BLOOD PEEKED OUT. TWO OTHER GUARDS HAD THERE TURNS OF HITTING HER AND SLAPPING HER. PUNCHES LEFT AND RIGHT. EMILY LOST HER BREATHE FOR A QUICK SECOND AFTER TAKING A PUNCH TO THE GUT.
HELENA: LEAVE US.
EMILY HAD NO ENERGY WHAT SO EVER TO SCREAM OR CRY. SHE JUST HUNG THERE FROM THE CHAINS LIKE A PRISONER SHE WAS.
HELENA: IN HERE ….YOUR OUR SLAVE. NOTHING NO LESS. WHAT A WASTE YOU ARE!
HELENA STAIRED DOWN AT HER AND BEGAN CARESSING HER BREAST AND FACE.
WILLIAM: THAT’S ENOUGH SISTER….WE DON’T WANT TO KILL OUR GUEST NOW ...DO WE?
HELENA SNARLED AT EMILY….
EMILY: JUST KILL ME ALREADY!
WILLIAM SHOOK HIS HEAD IN DISAGREEMENT.
WILLIAM: YOUR POWERS ARE SOON TO BE MINE…I MUST THANKYOU FIRST. I HAVE BEEN LEFT IN SUCH HORRIBLE SCARS AMONG MY BODY.
EMILY: BURN IN HELL! YOU BASTARD!
WILLIAM: YOU FIRST DARLING. WHEN THE NEXT FULL MOON APPEARS YOU SHALL BE SACRIFICED. YOUR BLOOD SHALL BE MINE AND NOT EVEN YOUR VAMPIRE FRIENDS SHALL STAND IN MY WAY.
WILLIAM: YOUR BLOOD WILL NOT ONLY CURE ME BUT GIVE ME POWERS BEYOND THIS UNIVERSE HAS EVER SEEN…I SHALL BE A GOD AMONG THOSE WHO HAVE NOT WITNESS. IT IS ONLY MY DESTINY….NOTHING PERSONAL GIRL.
EMILY: WELL TAKE YOUR DESTINY AND SHOVE IT UP YOUR ASS YOUR ROYALNESS.
EMILY SPIT AT HIS MASK. WILLIAM BEGAN TO CHUCKLE.
WILLIAM: I WAS ONCE BEAUTIFUL … MY SKIN SO SMOOTH AND SOFT AS YOURS..
HE LIGHTLY LAYED HIS HAND AGAINST HER CHEEK. EMILY TURNED AWAY.
HE TURNED AROUND AND TOOK OFF HIS MASK.
WILLIAM: NOW LOOK AT ME!!! LOOK AT ME!
HE SCREAMED OUT.
EMILY COULD ALMOST PUKE. SHE GAGGED OUT LOUD. FEELING HER VOMIT REACH HER THROAT.
WILLIAM: NOT FOR LONG…AS THE NEXT KNIGHTFALL ARRIVES THE MOON SHALL MEET UPON MY REQUEST AND NOTHING SHALL STAND IN MY WAY.
THEN LOUD GUN SHOTS COULD BE HEARD FROM OUTSIDE. AN ALARM BEGAN SAILING OFF INTO THE ROOMS.
EMILY: LETS SEE WHO’S POWERFULL NOW….YOUR HIGHNESS.
12th Mar 2009, 1:29 PM
wow he looks scary. Great update.
12th Mar 2009, 6:56 PM
thanxs 2 sweetsweetie85 and angel4rab and Mrs.Kuma for following my stories :]
17th Mar 2009, 9:44 AM
Drake: Louis so gald you join us.
Louis glimmered his fangs at them. The guards began to quickly shoot. Louis moved so fast it was as if he barely moved at all. It was as if he moved at the speed of light and only trails of his shadows were left behind.
Guards screamed out and blood splithered out onto the floor.The last female guard began shooting only Louis began using the dead guard in his arms as a sheild. The female guard was quickly weeped off her feet by Tristian who sprang in through the room.
Helena stood at the side of Drake. Then in came William. Louis eyed him and Tristian stood there ready to attack Drake or the masked man known as William.
William: You think you have won …. Do you?
Louis: I don’t fear warlocks and there magic.....
William: A powerful elder you might be…..but the girl will end up in my hands
Louis: you wont live long enough to even have the chance.
A powerful light streamed into the room. Blue and green smoke flashed into the room and they were gone. Louis looked at Tristian.
Louis: Keep an eye out. I can sense her presence near by.
Louis traveled beneath the mansion and led his way into chambers beneath the floors. He arrived to find Emily half a live. She looked up and smiled out at him as if he were the only light in the room.
Emily: You came for me…..no one ever…ever cared as much as you do. How did you find me?
Louis: I have my ways…here let me help you out of those chains.
Louis helped her down. Emily kept her eyes on him as she leaped into his arms. She came closer to Louis as did he. She put her lips on his. His lips smooth and cold. Yet she liked it. It prickled her lips.
She didn’t let go. Emily began taking his coat off. He ripped her tight leather crourset off. She slipped out of her dress and began laying on the cold floor. At the moment she didn’t care about anything and nothing. Just Louis and for the first time in Emily’s life she felt in love.
Emily: Make love with me..
She whisped in his ear.
17th Mar 2009, 4:18 PM
Awww well thats kinda cool and a little weird that they are doing that right then and there but great update.
17th Mar 2009, 8:53 PM
lol i like my storys to be a bit cheesy
17th Mar 2009, 9:07 PM
Oh my! o_O
My story will have that..Eventually...>_> I mean cheesy part...I like mozzarella :D
17th Mar 2009, 10:56 PM
radical dude lol
18th Mar 2009, 9:25 AM
im lovin it!
26th Mar 2009, 4:52 AM
Hey Guys hope your enjoying the story so far. Well sorry it took a little long for the update but now its here so please do enjoy! Leave comments and thoughts and questions and all the goodies! i love hearing 4rm you guys.
Emily awoken and she could hear voices down the hall. It was not long ago when she had arrived there at the secret mansion of Louis. She had passed out again and had re awoken now. She sat up and began walking over to the unknown room. The floor was cold and made her feet ache. She walked into the oval room where Louis awaited her.
Louis: Welcome Emily…
Emily looked over and anyalzed the oval room. Tristian sat in a chair talking to Lorelei who was sitting across from him in the sofa.
Louis: welcome to the Carfvex chambers….out location is highly secret and know one except the four of us know of this location. I can assure you that this time no one will find us. We must have been followed last time….Drake has something to do with this.
Emily: its time for answers Louis….please.
Louis nodded his agreement and led them back into the room.
Louis stairred into her eyes as she did into his. She closed her eyes and let seconds pass by.
Louis: no need to fear Emily … I wont allow them to hurt you.
Emily opened up her eyes and continued to stair back.
Emily: So many unanswered questions and answers and yet I hardly know you but never has someone stood up for me like you have…..am like emtionally drawn toward you….when they took me away all I could keep thinking about was you.
Emily grabbed Louis’s hand.
Louis: I will follow you into darkness Emily…….and lead you into the light.
Emily: Did you know my mother?
Louis: No…..never even met her…but she herself was a legend. They all wanted her because of the bloodline she was decendent apon just like you. They wont stop….none of them. Not until your dead. Not until one of them have gained your powers.
Emily: So you didn’t know my mother….and my father?
Louis: None of your bloodline …. Only you. I found you when I approached the Oracle of my destiny in life. If the elders find out…they too. Will come after you. I don’t know what your cappable of. What you can do or how. Only that you’re the most valuable thing in this world. I’ve had a chance in life and now am something more.
Emily: So what now? How do we make this all stop?
Louis: I must see the Oracle again. She might have answer for you and I both.
Emily: These warlocks are after me?
Louis: Those who seek it … will be after you. The convent could charge me with treachrey. I can only do so much and guide you with my knowledge. We will get answers…I promise you. The Oracle will help us….but until now I need you to rest.
Emily: where are you leaving off to?
Louis: I must see the elders tonight…do not worry. Lorelei and my apprentice are here. No one will find us I promise you…now rest.
26th Mar 2009, 5:56 AM
I likey :D
I have no questions. it is good so far xD
26th Mar 2009, 7:01 PM
really great update keep at it, got a little bit embarrassed there reading the last chapter lol
28th Mar 2009, 8:10 AM
Really good update. Dont have much else to say though lol.
29th Mar 2009, 7:44 AM
Vincent walked into the mansion of the elders. There were three elders present. Louis the only male out of the three lead the pack. The blonde curly hair was Victoira and the other woman was known as Amelia.
Louis: To what favor do we owe your presence?
Vincent: My lords...I come to warn you of Louis.
Louis: What concerns do you bring upon us?
Vincent: Treachery....he's betrayed the vampire code and convent. He must be put to trail.
Amelia: Louis would not conduct in such activity. It is agaisnt his bitter nature.
Vincent: He's not conducted in treachery but killed some of my people.
Louis: Your Ghouls are not any concerns to us. They should be put to rest. Comprimising the vampire nature will only bring us to the spotlight of humanity.
Vincent: His apprentice too has been affliated with his behavior. I only ask for further investigation into this crisis to take place. That is why I have brought it to your attention my lords.
Louis: We will handle matters from here. Until such times notice you shall stay out of our way.
Vincent: Thank you.
(On the roof top)
Victoria awaited on the roof top stairing at the moon. Vincent appeared from the mist and behind her.
Vincent: Beautiful isnt it?
Victoria: Your ghouls are causing up a stir. Hush them. That traitor sold us out for the Warlock.
Vincent: You must of known others would come for the girl as well Victoria.
Victoria: Find the girl....We need to act quickly before winds up in the wrong hands once more.
Vincent: Yes my lord...and what of the elders?
Victoria: Once the girl comes to us....nothing shall stand agaisnt my will. Ill take care of the others once Louis is taken well care of by the Elders.
Vincent: The Powers of a true god in the palm of your hands.
Victoria: A new dawn is approaching and all shall bow at my feet.
29th Mar 2009, 9:52 AM
After Louis had left, Emily had to truly get to the bottom of everything. Her mother, the truth behind her destiny and most of all she wanted to get to the bottom of solving all the madness and chaos around her. She knew what she needed to do and it was time for her to take control. Take control of her destiny.
Tristian and Lorelei were all together in the oval room.
Emily: So Lori...whats yor story? Thought you were blind? Now your some kind of feline cat.
Lorelei: I am blind and Yes I am a supernatural being. We are what they call...Anamorph.
Emily: So wait there's others out there? vampires? anamorphs? Warlocks and witches oh and dont forget wolfmen and zombies as well?
Tristian: and much more that it goes beyond your imagination.
Emily: after what ive seen and been through I'll take your word for it. I need to go see the Oracle.
Tristian: Am sorry...but for your own saftey...i can not allow that to happen. We must remain here until Louis returns. Then-
Emily: No .. I need to go now.
Tristian: Am sorry Emily. I cant do that. You know why.
Emily: Am going to see the Oracle with or without you guys.
Lorelei: Emily dont be foolish...you know very well. Its for your own protection.
Emily: If am so powerfull as you all say then I dont need protection.
Emily strode off down the hall slamming the door behind her.
A few mintues later Emily comes out the room dressed and heading down the stairs with Tristian following her.
Tristian: Emily! Wait....
Emily: Dont try to stop me Tristian!
Tristian: Am not trying to...were coming with you.
29th Mar 2009, 10:19 AM
They stepped into the old cottage with the wooden boards beneath them creaking with each step.
Oracle: I know why've come....no need to explain.
Emily: Then no need to explain myself then....
Oracle: My dear child....you think the mind can be opened and closed like a box?
Oracle: come forward and sit.
(Emily sat down across from the Oracle)
Oracle: You wish to know the past....that is why you are here. Your mother...the many secrets of the past haunt you now. You dont know who you are or what you believe in anymore.....the simple normal life you once lived is now shattered by a world of darkness and only you...only you can be that light. You wish to know?
Oracle: stair into the bowl child. go ahead.
Emily looked into the bowl. A liquid silver mist began to stream into the bowl. The table began to shake as well as the room. The candels flickered on and off. Emily began to feel as if she was being sucked into the liquid mist. The vision came to her. Hoping to see flashes of her mother and father and some of the past, however she heard the voice of Louis. She heard and saw the rattle of chains.
(Emily pulled away with the help of Tristian)
Emily: Louis! He needs our help...I saw him. He's trapped a woman has him captive. A woman with blonde curly hair.
Tristian: Victoria? Thats not possible.
Oracle: Your heart has led you to the right place child.
Tristian: The elders wouldnt imprison him...
Oracle: evil lurks in the shadows boy...beware.
Emily: We have to go...we have to save Louis as he saved me.
Tristian: do you hear yourself Emily? Your talking about going to mansion. Its forbidden. Youll be killed and as will I.
(Tristian turns looks at the Oracle)
Tristian: Is it true? Louis captive?
Oracle: True indeed.
Tristian: I will go...you stay here and
Emily: No am going with you. You cant go alone...
Oracle: Am afraid shes right....your no match for the elders. You cant go alone..
Lorelei: Am afraid there right Tristian...I can help you...I know some people who can help us. If we are to rescue Louis we need to move quick...we dont have much time.
29th Mar 2009, 6:34 PM
Love it* claps* moar please!
29th Mar 2009, 7:56 PM
thank you Kyle :]
and dont worry am posting sum chapters up quickly i should have another one on shortly..
29th Mar 2009, 8:55 PM
Emily: What kind of club is this?
(Lori rested her hand on Emily's shoulder)
Lorelei: Stay close and dont wonder off.. This isnt your average club kiddo.
Tristian: Who exactly are we looking for Lorelei?
Lorelei: Her name is Vesper Munoroe...an old friend of mine...
Emily: We dont have time for this Lorelei....Louis needs us..now! We dont have time for games.
Lorelei: If we leave now will only be signing our death treatys..We need all the help we can get.
Emily: Am just gonna ask someone.
Lorelei: Emily dont..wait!
(But Emily had already sweaped off to the bar to talk to the bartender)
Emily: Ummm excuse me..but do you know where I can find a Vesper?
Bartender: No Vespa here!
Emily: Vesper Munoroe?? no? not all sound familiar?
(Then a unknown voice spoke up)
unknown: I know where you can find her..
Emily: And who are?????
Unknown: You can call me Bella....
Emily: Okay Bella....wheres Vesper?
Bella: Follow me....
(They followed Bella through the crowd to the back of the club)
Bella: You have vistors....
Vesper: well well well .... look who dragged in the cat....you still playin in kitty litter?
Lorelei: Funny if I remember correctly am the reason you still have your tongue............
Vesper: What brings you around kitten?
Lorelei: We need your help...
Vesper: Havent seen you in years...then all of a sudden you pop back in and expect favors...
Lorelei: Am not askin for favors....am asking for help.
Vesper: What is it?
Vesper: You know I dont deal with vampire affairs...
Lorelie: This matter concerns all of us...whether we want to be affliated with it or not...the prodigy...
Vesper: Those are old folk tales...
Emily: Come on Lori....she doesnt want to help...we dont need some go go dancer...we need real help.. thanks for your time and what ever it is you can do...
(Then a mysterious woman appeared behind Vesper)
Blue Woman: Is there a disturbance you need me to handle?
Vesper: No.....they were just leaving..
(Suddenly Vesper appearence changed)
(Lorelei steped forward facing Vesper)
Lorelei: Look Vesper I need your help. Just as once you needed mine....please..just this last time...
Vesper: Fine...I need details and information.
Vesper: I'll gather my things...wait outside.
Lorelei: Fare enough...
(Lorelei Tristian and Emily began walking to back to the entrance)
Emily: She's a shapeshifter?
Lorelei: A good one too.
(Emily turned around bumping into someone)
Emily: OH MY GOD AM SO SORR-
(She stop and paused)
(Emily continued though the crowd leading Lorelei by the hand)
Tristian: Whats wrong?
Emily: I swear I knew that guy.......
29th Mar 2009, 9:25 PM
That really is club strange!! Good update! What else have you got in store for us?
29th Mar 2009, 10:12 PM
Great updates. I really like your stories.
29th Mar 2009, 10:17 PM
thank you ... am glad am able to share them wid you guys... i get so excited wwen i get feed back :]
30th Mar 2009, 10:08 PM
They had sneaked into a secret headquater building. Emily was beginning to grow impatient. There was no need to be running around recruiting supernatural beings. Every second wasted was a second taken away from Louis.
They took the elevator up to the top of the building. They entered the room with the music of Beethoven playing. The music swithered through the room. The song, "Moonlight Sonata" played. As they made their way into the room a young man no older than 25 was going through his bookshelf.
Young Man: Its rude to trespass you know...
Vesper: That never stoped you from stealing gold from Fort Knox..or maybe stealing international secret information from the United States Pentagon and selling it to global terrorist. I must say my favirote was when you once telepoted a man to the moon and left them there....nude.
Young Man: Ahhh the good times...unfortutley for you. You only remember the bad and not the good Vesper.
Vesper: Well times have changed....John
John (Young Man): Yea times might be changing but people never do...You of all people know that Vesper.
(The man now known as John turned around to face them)
John: Lorelei .... always a pleasure.
Lorelei: Always a pleasure indeed...old friend.
John: Well arent you going to introduce me to your guest?
Vesper: This is Johnathn Murlock. John here is a teleporter. You might reconginze him from SimTimes Magizine...Owner and creater of Murlock International Industrys. Dont be fooled by the billionaire playboy look...hes never worked a dime in his life.
Vesper: This is Emily and Tristian...
John: Do please excuse me Emily and Tristian but I have some matters to catch up.
(Then purple and blue clouds of form of mist was left in the room and John. Lorelei and Vesper were gone from the room)
Emily: It only gets weirder and weirder...
(On the roof top)
John: Your obviously not here for a reunion gathering....so matters in the underground must be really bad if you've come for my help..
Vesper: Bingo! You know you were always good at pin pointing right on the dot. You might as well be the smartest man in the world....too bad your no less than a cajun theif in disguise.
Lorelei: Vesper please not now...I need your help..both of you. Things at this time or only worse and yet no matter how far we stand away from any kind of affairs they come back to include us right back in. We were once a team. United....am only asking just this one time for you aid. One more time to be a team..do I have your help or not?
Vesper: God Lorelei..you make us sound like superheros.
Lorelei: The vampires get there hold on the girl...who knows what kind of god like powers theyll unleash on humanity.
John: Fare enough....
Vesper: Good....now lets kick some vampire ass.
31st Mar 2009, 12:08 AM
ooooo good update! Cant wait to see what happeneds!
31st Mar 2009, 1:52 AM
Kick some vampire ass hell yea! lol great update.
1st Apr 2009, 9:14 AM
Vincent: welcome welcome welcome! I must say very bold choice comng here tonight Tristian...Emily.
Tristian: Once the elders find out .... the consequences will surely be more than what you've bargained for.
Victoria: Your looking at the last elder..
Vincent: A new dawn is approaching....all those who will not bow beneath our new queen shall parish an unworthy death...
Tristian: I bow to no one!
Vincent: Foolish and unwise. I see you brought some friends?
Tristian: Your outnumbered
Vincent: I think not...
(Then vampires came from entrances in the room)
Vincent: No more games.....the girl
Victoria: Bow to my feet...
Vesper: I aint bowin to nobody bitch...
Victora: Kill them....leave the girl.
John: Ill find Louis!
(John suddenly teleported out of the room)
(Two vampires drew closer to Vesper. She turned and faced them both. Eye to Eye. Face to Face.)
Vesper: Hello bitches
Vampire Girl 1: You look good enough to eat.
Vampire Girl 2: Such pretty hair....too bad its all gonna go to waste after were done with you.
(Vesper charged them both)
(She quickly transformed into a panther)
The panther roared and began chasing the two vampires. The panther clmaped down on the one of the vampire girls clawing her face and ripping her arm and legs off. Blood streaming into the air. The panther hunted down the other girl down the halls. Screams could be heard and a head came rolling down the main court room and into the room. The vampires womans head just layed there with the skeltal spine still clinged to it.
Lorelei was attacked by a vampire who threw her to the ground. She hadnt morphed so she was unable to see. Lorelei quickly morphed into her cat like creature appearence.
Vampire: Here kitty kitty kitty
Lorelei: You know what happens when you mess with cats?
Vampire: whats that?
Lorelei: Your about to find out...
Lorelei quickly tumbled into the air landing on her feet like the feline she was. Before the vampire had time to react she had given him a roundhouse kick and clawed his face.
The vampire aided his face...
Vampire: You bitch!
Lorelei: Wrong am a feline!! not a canine!
Lorelei reached out and clawed out his eyes balls with her shap razor blade claws. The vampire screamed out wondering off into the dark..
(Meanwhile inside the lower dungeon)
Vampire: Where do you think your going?
John eyed the vampire who stood in front of him..
John:The question is where do you want me to go?
John teleported from behind one of the vampires
John jabbed the vampire and began fighting him.
He jabbed a stake through the vampires heart leaving him to turn into bright red ashes of smoke.
John eyed the last remaining vampire in his way.
John: Scared? You should be.
John teleported from behind him. The vampire began to struggle. John whispered into his ear.
John: You know.....once I teleported a man on the moon and left him there.....Lets see how you feel when I teleport you into a side of a moutain stuck half way out.....leave you for the sun!
The vampire continued to struggle to be released only being to late for John had already teleported him.
1st Apr 2009, 9:16 AM
(Meanwhile in the main hall)
Vincent: Enough is enough.....This ends tonight!
Vincent drawed two swords and threw one for Tristian. To engage in battle. Vincent slashed his shirt. Tristian backed away being barely missed by seconds. The swords clashed and Victoria watched. Emily stood aside hoping that the others had already found Louis.
There swords clashed and clinged. They swamped around the room as if they were pirates.
Victoria made eye contact with Emily. Emily just wanted to strangle her but she was no match for Victoria or any vampire or supernatural being. Tristian swashed buckled across the room stabbing Vincent in the heart. Emily gapsed and looked for Victoria's expression. She stood there like a manquinn barbie. Only evil.
The Sword creased his heart. Tristian stepped back.
Vincent: Not....Not like this.
He screamed out in pain and bursted into firing ashes.
Tristian: Its over Victoria! You've been easily defeated!
Victoria: HAHAHAHAHAHA Fool! Did you really think that Vincent and his menacing Ghouls were part of my plan? No....only ponds...As Queen none shall stand on the right hand side of me....
Tristian: If you want the girl you'll have to go through me!
Victoria: After I killed and slayed the elders.....I've come to find that I've gained there powers.....Shall I demonstrate?
Tristian was quickly thrown into the air and across the room by the movement of Victoria's eyes. She had gained the power of Christian and Amelia. Emily picked up the sword and swung at her. The sword stopped dead in the air. Victoria began choking her by her telepathy powers.
Victoria stepped closer to Emily.
Victoria: Powers from beyond and into my hand.....Rebirth once more...and no less.
Victoria bit down into Emily's neck.
Tristian pushed Victoria off and onto the floor.
Victoria: Fool! You wont stop me!
Tristian: Dont you mean we?
Vesper through a cocktail and lit it on Victoria.
Tristian: Do it!
John grabbed hold of Victoria and Teleported.
Tristian quickly went to aid Emily.
Emily was shaking and bleeding. She could barley talk.
Lorelei: No luck....
Emily: on the end of the main chambers....hidden passage
Vesper: How does she know?
Tristian: When Victoria bit her....she could see her memory.
Lorelei: We need to hurry sunrise is coming....
They raced across the mansions and into the chambers and just like Emily had said there was Louis.
Tristian: Were gnna break you free.
Louis: No..not this time friend..not this time at all.
Tristian: Master dont speak of such things...
Tristian broke open the door and began to try and break off the chains.
Lorelei: Hurry Tristian! Sunrise is only matters away..
Louis: Tristian not this time....it was a trap!
Tristian: What do you mean?
Louis: The chains are spellbound....theres no other way to break the curse.
Tristian: There must be a way...
Louis: Theres not...
Vesper: You guys somethings wrong with Emily! She twitching likes she going into shock!
Louis: You have to turn her Tristian!
Tristian: I've never created before
Louis: You must turn her quickly....she'll die if you dont....It is the only way! You must! Now!
Tristian grabbed Emily and bit down.
Lorelei: TRISTIAN! THE SUN IS RISING!
Louis: Leave now!
Tristian moving ahead to the shadows to take cover...The sun began beaming down. Emily Screamed out and jumped out of Tristians arms.
Tristian: Emily! No!
Emily raced down the hall to rescue Louis. Louis gazed into her eyes. It was as if the moment of time had paused and there eyes met.
Emily could hear him in her mind....He was saying :
"Emily I Love you"
Then everything went back to normal and the screams of Tristian could be heard but before she could reach him the sun beamed down onto Louis and turned him into flaming ashes.
Louis was dead.
1st Apr 2009, 11:52 PM
Tristian: Its hard to imagine that's he gone...
Vesper: We did everything we could Tristian..
Lorelei: She's right Tristian...there's no one to blame...
Tristian: So what now? What of Emily?
They all looked up to see Emily standing at the top of the staircase. Emily stepped forward making her way down.
Emily: I feel Incredible
Tristian: It was the only way to save your life......to turn you.
Emily: My senses are beyond anything I've ever felt.
Lorelei: So what now?
Emily: It's over.......
Tristian: This isnt over Emily...Drake and the warlock or still out there. It will be only a matter of time before they find you.
Emily: Yes they will.....but this time around its over for you. Am leaving to find answers. I haven't even got close to finding answers...and so many questions about my past. I won't wait around like a piece of meat to be slaughter.
Tristian: Were only trying to protect you...
Emily: I know and now that Louis is gone...theres many things I need to find out for my own...I have to do this.
Tristian: I can't stop you Emily....
Emily: and Victoria?
John: Lets just say I left her in a metalic grinder. She was shreaded into pieces....theres no possible way she could of survived.
Emily: Am leaving tonight.....thank you..
Emily reached for the door and pulled open...Tristian caught her hand on the way out holding her back. Emily turned to face him.
Tristian: Will be watching...
Emily just nodded and closed the door behind her.
2nd Apr 2009, 12:26 AM
Emily stepped into the cottage.
Oracle: You've returned alive.....
Emily: Am sure you already knew that...just as you know why am here.
Oracle: What have I've said child...the mind is not a box you cannot open and close it when you want to.
Emily: You can though....Did you know Louis was going to die?
Oracle: Death is inevitable...even for a supernatural.
Emily: Am going to take that as a yes.
Oracle: As humans and living creatures on this green earth. We are only promised 2 things. Life and Death....you can cheat death...but for how long until it catches up to you? The day were born is the day the clock countsdown to death. Life and death...your born your taken. Black and white there is no grey. Louis was a brave man and knew the consequences of saving you....save one....save all. Life and death. If he hadn't of saved you in that cafe that night. You surely wouldnt be here and nither would I. He made a choice....he chose you. He was a good friend of mine...
Emily: He said he chose me because he once had a chance at life...
Oracle: Thats right...he knew his death would come and yet he knew if it hand't been him then who knows what apocaylpse would of occured.
Emily: I need to know who my mom was....who, what, when, why? Everything.....your the only person who can help me. I need to know what I am....
Oracle: Paris....your answers await you there. Your fathers name is Kingston Brovax. All the answers to your past await you there. Everything you've wanted to ever know and unlock the past....its all there. Look for a woman known as Sheeva. The outskirts in a small town known as Gavari. She can help you.
Emily: Thank you..Thank you for everything.....However before I leave I have some unfinished buisness.
2nd Apr 2009, 1:09 AM
Betty Prado gathered her things off the table and into her bag while talking on her cell phone.
Betty:I know but we need to make sure those list are done with I cant have people running off looking like fashion disasters...goodness what good are you Alfred If you cant even get the job done? huh? Hold on someones coming in....
A woman walks into the room closing the door behind her.
Betty: Excuse me you cant be in here...its after hours and the office is closed. Wheres security?
Betty squinted her eyes to get a better look at the woman.
Betty: Em-Emily? What are you doing here?
Emily: You know what time it is?
Betty: Am getting security!
Betty reached for her office phone. Emily swished across the room in a second almost as if she floated across the room. Emily caught Betty by the arm making her drop her cell phone.
Emily: Its dinner time and I haven't ate all day.
Emily bit down on Betty's neck and the only person who could hear Betty's screams was the person on Betty's cell phone. Screams of horror.
They sat there on the couch cuddled watching TV. The door bell rang.
Angela: Who the hell is coming around here at this time of night?
Brad: I dunno
Brad stood up and went for the door. He opened it and Emily walked in.
Brad: What the hell? Em-Emily?
Emily: Dont mind Me.....
Emily looked at Steven who stood there shocked. Emily moved over to look past Steven and at Angela.
Emily: Am only here for desert......
I wondered off to the road....It might of been evil of me to exact revenge but I was no longer living. I was no longer human.....I was more. Louis was right after all. I've become something more, something unexplainable....but there was something entirely diffrent inside. I was gonna get to the bottom of this. Next stop, Paris. The city of Love.....maybe the city of the dead. I couldnt stop thinking about Louis death. At all the same time of what happened. I also couldnt stop thinking of what layed in Paris. The Oracle had said that everything I've wanted to know was in Paris. All the answers to my questions were waiting ahead of me. I couldnt stop now, as much as sadness stirred in me about Louis I had to continue. I had to move on ahead along the road.....I had to solve the riddles of my past and Paris is were I was headed to next.What ever lies ahead it was only darkness..........................
The Oracle sat there by the fire place in her chair.The room was barley lit. Creaks settled in as the cottage was quiet. The cottage door opened and in stepped a woman. The Oracle didn't bother flinching or sitting up to turn around to see who it was.The door shut and a woman stood at the door silently. The Oracle continued to stair into the fire place.Then the Oracle spoke out.
Oracle: Hello Victoria......I guess my clock has finally counted down to the last hour.
2nd Apr 2009, 1:32 AM
Well I must say I had alot of fun writing this story and being creative. I started this story off not knowing what directon it would take but am glad with the final results. I will continue to write and create other short storys. I really hope you guys enjoyed it. Thank you for all the readers who read my storys and in return I will read yours and leave you comments. I would deeply appreaciate your thoughts and comments below of what you thought overall with this story. The good the bad the whole works. I started this story off funky with its writing and story line and I wanted to finish it off that way. Am growing as I write! Am also writing, "Who Killed Tiffany Hillson?" so stayed tune into that. Any questions leave below :] Advice and tips! Would be awesome! Thank you!
2nd Apr 2009, 1:36 AM
Oh my god, hella updates! I'm so glad the way the story turned out. Betty Prado got what she deserved hahaha!
2nd Apr 2009, 2:31 AM
I really enjoyed the story im in love with all things vampire and that fight was awsome but i wanted to cry when Louis died, Great story and i will try and keep in touch with all your others.
2nd Apr 2009, 2:55 AM
I loved it!sad it was so short D:
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