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#1 Old 7th Jul 2012 at 11:26 PM
Default Ok this is question about were my artwork should go! DeviantArt alternatives?
Ok here is a written example of my art! Warning I miss spelled the StarFox universe things!

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Chapter one: Strange new friends!
My Friend Fox McCloud



McCloud sat on the bridge of the great fox. They and several Corineian ships were about to face the New Alliance of The Mutant Collons head on. He look at the Radar showing them come in view. The fact was they still outside of firing range. Krystal stated, “Sire this is a high subspace instability region. Worm holes can open up at any time there is high energy fluctuation I would sub jest that we lure them out!” McCloud thought, it would be less dangerous but they had factories on every planet building new weapons and info structure and prolong the fight by a little could prolong the war greatly! Slippy stated, “Darn my own read out show Star Wolf in the area with the Mutants! They will certainly cause a lot of laser fire!” McCloud said without fear, “Give one reason the risk out way the benefits of stopping them here and now!” Slippy and Krystal were silent and so was Falco. McCloud ordered, “Hail Peppy we are going in.”

Com signal to Peppy and fleet, “This is private Slippy, Fox says we are going in! Approve order!” Com signal from Peppy to Slippy, “Approval Granted”

The Peppy Fleet entered the fray Mutant ships began firing immediately. Fox and the rest rushed to their fighters! They launched.
Fox was free once more in the heat of a Dog Fight… He was into the black of space! He began firing on any ship that registered as an enemy on his computer read outs! Wolf com signaled, “You are going down Red Dog! McCloud com signaled, “Really… How are you going to do that!”
“My new weapon for this special type of space!”

A missile exploded off of Fox’s ship! A worm hole opened nearly sucking him in! But it was too far away!
Fox made short work of the mutant vessels. And soon the Mutant main Fleet was heading toward the main base. But Wolf began firing Cluster Bombs. Fox was soon hit by the unfairly used weapon! Fox’s ship was damaged but he by this time with his team had taken out the Wolf fighters except Wolf. McCloud decided that he would take Wolf head on! His ship and Wolf’s went on a dual run both fireing madly Fox gave a direct hit with a missile. And Wolf was damaged but instead of retreating he fire one of the Wormhole Bombs. Wolf com signaled, “even if it takes this I will beat you!” Both him and wolf were sucked in!

The Wormhole sat them out on two opposite sides of a stormy planet! McCloud comed Wolf, “So was that in your plane!” Wolf comed back, “Getting you out of the picture Corineians greatest hero was the plane. You can’t kill me and if you do you will find that your ships reserves won’t last and you’ll fall to this long dead world!” Fox first assists his own ship damage, both wings were off and the ship needed to land on a hospitable world quickly or he would die with it! He then scanned the world below to see if what Wolf claimed. The Planet had been the victim of fossil fuel addiction. Structures formally powered by fossil fuel most likely coal or oil were all over covered by a heavy layer of ash and lava beneath the clouds of sulfuric acid! There were still machines functioning around the Pole and even some primitive life but nothing on the planet could support a complex life form like McCloud. He waited a few minutes while he put his scanners into over drive away from the unknown sun’s second planet of which he orbited and onto the third and fourth planets. Wolf comed, “Aaww! I don’t want you to die so fellow me to the third planet! It is inhabited by primitive beings who rely on the same fuel type which killed this one. They have primitive simi-interplanetary technology! I’ll be on one side you’ll be on the other. I will find then real combat which will be gun to gun, hand to hand will began! See yah fucker!”

He checked the only a bit about it being hospitable hoping to save time and catch up with Wolf a little then went into a sling shot orbit! His ship was more damaged so that it would have a hard time landing intact. It took an hour in McCloud got off a few to his Corineian army approved pornography supplied to all Mercs and Soldiers to help them cope with deep space!

Even though there was no longer zero-gravity to cope with and females could be gotten to serve a soldiers there was still a lot of bull#### which a soldier could deal with in space and it was good to give them something to cope with the murder and mayhem which they created in war. All species went through a phase in which they believe sex was evil and this harmed soldiers when they could not even have a sex in the military. Sex was a basic need which every sentient species had with if you counted them the exception of robots! Sex was part of evolution and that was a fact! No escaping it even with all the gene altering and psychological tom$$$$ery which a species could go through currently, with the exception of lucky individuals labeled asexual, it was a biological black hole which could not be escaped like god and death! The soul itself was sexual though some traditions denied it. When he came into orbit he looked to see if somewhere he could land his ship!

Private Terry Cole of Area Fifty One looked at the combat satellite. It’s function was to be part of America’s holy “Christian” Zionist crusade and holy war against the enemies of its pimp Israel which the politicos were proud to be whores of, to bring down enemy satellites and damaged alien space craft to further that war! And there was one of those aliens on the scope to be shot down. It was beneficial even though the current government was begging for a military coupe due to its #####dom to those loyal to Israel through the America Jewish and Christian fronts! He thought a bet about what was in that ship then fired!

Fox’s missile lock on light was on. He took evasive action but was hit and started to descend! He had training for what to do in this scenario. He checked to if his stealth was still intact and powered it up slowly as he descended so that it appeared he was burning up to the radars! Even more advanced radars of a true interplanetary race would be fooled…
Tuck Strumwick looked through his telescope at the falling star. It was shaped like an airplane with the wings broken off as it fell over Yellow Stone. He went from the balcony to his mom downstairs. She was reading Tuck Everlasting for which he was named. He walked up to her as the teenage boy he was. Tuck said to her, “I just saw a UFO mah!” His mom replied, “Probably just some device they are testing from the military base!” He was what one might call a Redneck! He suspected the same but wanted to check it out. He asked, “Can I go see what it was!” His mother said, “In the morning you need to sleep tonight!” He did as his mother commanded but he would get up extra early. He could mess up 1 homeschooling get away with sleepiness!
Fox hit the ground with a thud and he regained his senses momentarily. All systems where down. He smashed throw the glass canopy with his fist. It took only a minute but it felt like forever! Glass was embedded in his hand. Magnetically reinforceable glass could not be made safety glass also for reason still not understood! He got out and looked around… He had landed in a forest. He immediately began gathering bramble and covering his ship in minutes so that it was not recognizable then he got up in a tree and waited. His readout he got before he landed showed there was a military facility of some sort near. If they did realize he had not burned up they would come tonight or in the morning! After that he would be in the clear. It was a pirate planet on which government shot down any alien craft without trying to communicate simply to gain technology. The culture might be highly militaristic and believe he was a threat on sight! He got up in a tree and waited if no one came by morning he would hid in the bushes!

In the Morning Tuck got up and went to see were in Yellow Stone it had crashed! He walked in the general direction. As he walked towards the crash site he wondered what had been tested or if it were from this Earth. He found a spot which was unfamiliar with a pile of vegetation. He wondered if someone had hid it under there but did not check for fear of skunk! If he got skunked he would be grounded for a weak from going in the woods. He could use that time to update his forum post but he would not risk it. He looked about for anything. There was some odd looking glass with a weird texture and some strange metal. He thought ‘maybe they already got to it last night got to it last night… But $$$$ it could be under that bramble could it not? Won’t risk it.’ He felt like he was being watched. He wanted to fight the invaders if they were there but he had no time to stay and he knew if they were there they would kill him quick or capture and probe him! He ran back after quickly picking up some metal and glass!
McCloud clutched his gun as the creature picked up what where probably pieces of his ship He had only got enough glimpse to know it was hairless and bipedal. But he dared not look to much due to he would be visible from any position he could take to watch. It went away. He had heard a voice for a few seconds. It sounded like a male teen saying, “$$$$ nothing!” That did not really give him a hint if it had been military or civilian. It had what looked like a weapon… But he had not got a glimpse to see whether the weapon was a military or civilian which would have helped him know if it was a scout or just a passerby who observed his ship fall. He waited till the noon time. Then he fallowed the possible scout back by its shoeprints. He saw a farm looking building which it led to. His goggles were stuck in night vision mode… He could not make them out from a safe distance. It was possible this was a military facility of some kind but the fact was it did not look to be one. He waited and saw no sign the creature was going to bring back more of its kind. He saw also that there were some large birds. Easy pray till he had the non-domestics pinned down for a hunting strategy. He knew he would have to learn the strategies of the wild animal quickly and stealing domestic animals for to long would attract attention.

Tuck was dosing off when he saw it enter the chicken cope. It looked to be a fox or wolf on to legs. He had a long day of home school. She really had thought he needed a lot of practice on his long-division and percentages. He wondered if it was his imagination and went to bed! He in the morning woke up early to look at that the fragments of glass and metal he found. He had a Titanium army knife which he scraped the metal and glass with and he analyzed the scrapings under his high powered microscope he had gotten from his mother for his interest in bacteria. He used a Chinese search engine so the government could not watch him as easily. He could not scrape the metal so he just viewed the smallest pieces. The only metals he could find matching the strength were hyper light theoretical were hyper light super strong titanium alloy which were still theoretical even according to non-MSM science sites and the glass the only match was theoretical magnetic reinforcing glass with the same info on it from both MSM and non-MSM sites. This did not prove it came from space but it would prove it was not normal space debris. This was obviously not a normal find. He found out more from his dad when he was told a chicken was missing… He lied sorta of when asked if he had seen anyone. Sorta cause maybe it was not anyone… It could be an undiscovered animal from Yellowstone like bigfoot! And he lied because he had once shot his mother in the face after experiencing dilutions. She had put him in a home for a short while before deciding it was wrong for him. He did not want to go back there! But he wondered.

Fox enjoyed the bird he had stolen. It was like Puck-Puck or Dinrin tender and tasting unidentifiable. He still had not gotten a look at the creatures. It was far more risky for them to him then on a more civilized yet enemy world. It was filled with unpredictability in what dangerous way they would react. Fortunately he would only need to do this for three days then he could most likely hunt with a 90 percent success rate. He would go again tonight.

Tuck saw it again. He watch it enter and leave. It was a upright fox with humanoid feature. His first thought was alien, but his second thought was kitsune. He decide to explore the second first. He had read the Book of Enoch and pretty much was convinced it tales of half human half animal people spawned by the Niphelim were partially true due to tales of such creature persisted though out all cultures. So the first thing he did was IM every one of his friends the following Friday that if they had seen an unusual Asian person wearing similar clothing to red collar and green sihirt and white jacket it was wearing! He also thought he saw a Mohawk! One of his friends Derrick asked, “So are you looking for a pre-labor day Asian biker!” He paced his room with his music turned up. His father yelled he turned it down. The man just would not buy him a MP3 Player or other portable music device, because he thought he would take himself hunting with it.

He did his online debate, “Stupid Zionist ####er the ambulance showed up quickly because they are trained in Palestine to always be on alert, not because of your Conspiracy Theory which is debunked by the fact the one informed groups with Intel has admitted to the killing anyway!” “You are pathetic you believe anything the government says, 9/11’s official story is such a lie even Michel Moore no longer believes it!” “Israel is the mother of stupid and dimwitted murder and mayhem!” “Neo-Nazis are basically all fronting for Zionism so there is nothing for a True Anti-Zionist to worry about from them!” He paid his bother to do his chores and went to sleep in the day… When his dad woke him up he told him what he was doing without mentioning the Fox-o-Sapien. “Just trying to find out who is stealing Chickens!” That night was a Friday and he was up late he hid by the Hen House and waited!

Fox walked in the bird house… Last night of easy meals … No excuse and plenty of reason to discontinue! He walked in, walked toward a bird calmed it with a Sonic Device and grabbed it by its neck! He walked. Suddenly a double barrel projectile fire arm was pointed in his face.

It was not one of those creeps in a fursuit, it was a live fox man! Tuck muttered, “Hold the #### still!” The Fox Man said, “What are you planning with me exactly?” non-chalotly and calmly like it was rehearsed or said often. He thought it could Indian sprite. But then he realized that it could also be a daemon with goals in mind. Better not assume it was divine or demonic. “First I wanna know what you are doing with those chickens!” He yelled softly. The Fox Man said, “Eating em if your talking about these birds!” He yelled softly, “What the $$$$ are you anyway! Are you real or some sort of freak of plastic surgery!” The Fox pulled a weapon of unusual make and pointed at his crotch! The Fox stated, “What might end your life!” He in the stale mate which went on for a few minutes noticed the Fox was most likely adult but had a boyish frame and quite feminine and looked tuff at the same time!

Fox saw it was a kid but pointed the weapon at the hairless ape anyway because he had no idea what to do. The boy had just jumped him like he was military. Fox said quickly and calmly, “I have a question first! Are you part of your planets military?” The boy said. “No… Some people think I am anti-military even!” McCloud said, “Are you anti-military? I am military!” just trying to make conversion to calm it down. The boy said, “Are you ah invader!?” McCloud stated, “I was fighting an enemy in order and he sent me through a wormhole! No I am not a invader!” The Boy asked, “Do you come in peace and do you have a name and are you a man?” McCloud, “Yes, Yes, Fox McCloud and Yes! Are you a young man or a boy?” The boy said, “If you are not going to Kill me… I am 14 a young man in my definition but maybe your differs!” McCloud replied, “On my planet the law considers you a man at twelve! And you get a gun like mine only smaller!” The boy told him, “My name is Tuck.. Your name is weird Fox, you are a fox!” McCloud answered, “Fox is a poor translation, but it is the word’s simplest!” Tuck said, “I will call you McCloud!” Fox said, “OK Tuck! But I have a question myself. Are you some sort of naked mole rat or are you a hairless ape as I guessed.” Tuck went indignantly, “I am a Human. We evolved from apes! But we are not monkeys!” Fox teased, “Monkeys, Apes two different things! Not being one does not exclude you from being the other! Ape!” Tuck said, “Sure! Wanna stop pointing guns at each other and come in!”

They put down their guns and walked to the house and then instinctively he began sneaking when the boy did. When he got to the boys sleeping quarters he say a poster of some of the naked apes together. There were several different shades in the picture! He asked Tuck, “Your species come in different skin colors!” Tuck said, “Yes and it causes trouble galore. Here take this!” He hand him a shotgun. Fox asked, “Why I already have a gun!” Tuck held out his hand and said, “Give me your weapon I am not letting a alien armed with a strange unknown weapon to sleep in my closet!” Fox protested, “Listen I don’t like sittin on a unknown world with no advantage!” Tuck told, “I don’t know how many advantages you have and if you are true full about your intentions or how you came here! For all I know you could read my mind or heavily analyze my patterns to know I would let you up in my room, after which you might implant a mind control device on me or something! I want you gun, I am not gonna use it!” Fox traded his blaster for the shotgun. Fox stated, “I understand, you are confronting a unknown species and you have no Idea what to expect!” The boy started pacing and telling him the rules, “We both carry the same weapons and tools and never use any device the other does not understand, you never reveal you are here unless I say so! You never get your weapon without my permission which I will give if you produce a good reason. When you contact your race you let me listen to what you say and if you say anything funny or strange you become a hostage of the human race finally empty your pockets and let me do a pat down!” Fox emptied his pockets and presented all his technology and asked, “When address me could you not address me with a military posture? You are a civilian right? “ Tuck apologized, “I have a disorder which causes me to do that. I am not trying to disrespect you!” Fox stated, ”I actually may have something similar, but it is not a disorder!” Tuck went into his closet, and pulled out a sleeping bag with a pillow head. Fox laid down, the being had disarmed him of any advantage, if he woke up imprisoned or being dissected it would be his own fault for trusting the human man!
Tuck sat in the dark waiting for the fox to sleep before he did… He had the key to draw were he put the devices in his pocket, but there was no way he could know the Fox had no implants or dangerous device which assumed the form of cloth on his clothing. If he woke up the next morning he would know that the fox was a trustworthy enough that he had not made a mistake! Tuck that morning examined his thoughts as best he could and examined his orifices in order to asserting nothing was implanted! Then he did something to really test it.

Fox stared as he awoke to find a gun in his face. “What did I do!” he asked angrily. Tuck told him, “Nothin… Just needed to read your reaction to assert I was still a threat to you!” Fox grumbled, “You are $$$$ing paranoid beyond all belief!” Tuck stated, “Nothing like this has happened to anyone I know and if you are a little less honest about your intentions I need to know. I will get breakfast now!”


Problem is the boy who is autistic like me gets sexual a few chapters before the end with Fox but not enough to really post to a porn site.... So I want to put it in a deviant art like website. But DeviantArt does no longer allow Shota or Lolicon so I need somewhere where I can post my art which is mostly non-pornographic sexually suggestive child art... So where would I do that?
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