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New Career - Optometry

by CrowsMan Posted 16th Dec 2007 at 2:10 AM - Updated 12th Oct 2009 at 10:22 AM by CrowsMan

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ikanlord

Test Subject

21st Dec 2007 at 1:58 AM Last edited by whiterider : 28th Dec 2007 at 11:47 AM. Reason: Merged posts: 1850379, 1850380, 1850381

Excuse me but did you copy and paste the descriptions beacause if you did just looking at them I saw some mistakes..

Assistant Optometrist
You've done it! The head Optometrist believes you have learn't enough and ar ready

Trainee Assistant Optometrist
Your boss thinks it's time for a change, and so do you! Now your here;;

Should be You're

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Fat.Louie

Lab Assistant

21st Dec 2007 at 6:40 AM

Woo, I'm finally mentioned in something. And yes, I am so downloading this. I have the perfect Sim for it, lol. I congratulate you on your first career and look forward to many in the future.

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CrowsMan

Instructor

Original Poster

21st Dec 2007 at 7:24 AM

Ikanlord - Thanks for picking these mistakes up. I did do most of this during the late hours of the night. Sorry I won't be able to fix these up tonight as I am going out but I will certainly fix them tomorrow

Fat.Louie - I'm glad you liked it. I'm glad you requested it otherwise I probably wouldn't have made it.

Retired...

kind of.

malthaussen

Lab Assistant

21st Dec 2007 at 2:47 PM

The career looks fine, but you definitely need to learn the difference between "your" and "you're."

"Your" is a possessive: your car, your clothes, your career.
"You're" is a contraction: you are. You're the man, you're the boss, you're doing fine.

Thus, e.g., the job description for lvl 1 should read "you're starting your dream..."

-- Mal

"Of two choices, I always take the third."

CrowsMan

Instructor

Original Poster

21st Dec 2007 at 8:51 PM Last edited by CrowsMan : 22nd Dec 2007 at 3:11 AM.

malthaussen - You must realise I know simple English literacy. I do know the difference between "Your" and "You're". I did most of this career late at night because that was that only time I could, so I was very tired. I just didn't pick up on those mistakes while proofreading.

Retired...

kind of.

SonyaYU

Lab Assistant

21st Dec 2007 at 8:54 PM

Very nice. I hope my Sims will be as good as my doctors. Thank you!

Nealekitty

Test Subject

28th Dec 2007 at 9:31 AM

Haha! Only a fellow Aussie would use the word 'mate' in a chance card. Your poor grammar when tired is forgiven and I look forward to playing this career in game. Good work!

leogurl

Test Subject

29th Dec 2007 at 7:13 AM

CrowsMan thank you for the time and effort into posting this career. This is a forum not a English class so some of you guys need to lay off and just be grateful to everyone who takes time to post these mods for us.

Vanessa190371

Test Subject

#10

29th Dec 2007 at 11:05 PM

Very good for your first time Crowsman.
Just 2 things-
1/ nealekitty (mate is a very english word esp in the north and is not just used in australia
2/ What is the big deal about a spelling mistake. Is it such a big deal?
As long as the game works then it doesn't matter.

yorkiemum

Lab Assistant

#11

1st Jan 2008 at 10:48 AM Last edited by whiterider : 1st Jan 2008 at 11:55 AM. Reason: Mostly off topic

thanks for this one!

Littlelambsie

Field Researcher

#12

24th May 2008 at 4:05 AM

Definatly agree with you leogurl

Crowsman, you have put a lot of hard work into this and I thank you for doing it. I am just happy to have a new type of career.

Hydroxide

Lab Assistant

#13

7th Jun 2008 at 2:12 AM

ROFL go the Aussiesss!
Let's form a union.

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zmh3

Lab Assistant

#14

20th Jun 2008 at 8:42 PM

One question how many friend does this require. Loved to know

Masterofallvideogames

Instructor

#15

30th Jul 2008 at 3:25 AM

wow this is very funny I must say, =D
Thanks, and don't worry about your grammer (though you should),
just know this... a lot of people are worse off than you "online" and yes I said "Online"
:P

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mrslott369

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THANKS POST

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